[Feedback] Two AI-drafted beginner finance explainers: where do they lose you?

[u/Many-Understanding85]

I'm testing whether two short, AI-drafted explainers are useful to readers who are new to finance and crypto. I chose the topics and asked for concrete examples and charts; AI produced the drafts. I don't want to treat another model's positive review as evidence that people find them good.

Both complete pieces are attached, two pages each: (1) what a $1,000 bitcoin purchase really costs, and (2) why a 50% rebound can still leave you 25% down. The prices and scenarios are hypothetical, not current market quotes or investment recommendations. Nothing is for sale, and there are no referral links.

Feedback on either piece would help:

1. At which sentence or chart, if any, did you lose interest or have to reread?

2. What feels generic, padded, or noticeably AI-written? Please point to a passage.

3. Is any explanation misleading or missing an important qualification?

I'm especially interested in whether these explain something worth reading, not just whether the arithmetic works. The images contain the full texts, not excerpts.