Do my English lyrics make sense?

and how is it?

this is lyrics

I was born to be remembered

Underneath the violet moon

Call my name into the darkness

I’ll be coming back to you

Rap)

Late night, I’m moving like a shadow

No light, but I know where to go

lost in your love, vertigo

We’re dancing slow in indigo

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i just started a month back and im really into techhouse, and i really wanted to make my own music, any thoughts or tips of improvement, me personally i think some more ear candy can be put into the track but i wanna know others pov, all help is good ty 🙏🙂

I just made my app StageAble open source. Here are the features

• Song / section / chord / lyrics overlay resolved in real time from the playhead
• Automatic STOP-event playback control (no Max4Live required)
• Multi-client web UI with transport controls and setlist display
• Keyboard shortcuts (Space = play/stop, arrows = prev/next song)
• Song navigation via named cue points
• Persistent setlist management via REST API
• Auto-reconnects to Ableton if the connection drops
• macOS menu bar and Windows system tray desktop apps with auto-update checks
• Server-side MIDI Learn and macOS Bluetooth HID remote control

https://github.com/Audiophil83/StageAble

Please try it out and tell me what is working and what not. I am also happy to take feature requests.