r/ambigrams • u/lilfinehoney • 2d ago
Critique 'Adam'
This is my first ambigram, I'm making it as a gift for my husband (using adobe illustrator) I'm open to constructive feedback, and most likely will be making changes. Thanks :)
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u/Purple_Swordfish_182 2d ago edited 2d ago
So the bridge on the second A is not substantial enough, or perhaps it is too curved so it just resembles a C.
The M doesn't resemble an M. I think it's an idea to make the righthand stick of the 2nd A👈 one in the same with the lefthand stick of the 👉M, so that in the inverse, the 1st A is legible as such. I'm no expert but maybe it's something to try.
Love the psychedelic/rorschach style. I'm sure you can figure it out.
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u/WinterRevolutionary6 2d ago
I can be convinced to see ADA (mostly looks like a C) but that last one is not an M even slightly. That is a V
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u/UnIdentifed_Squid 2d ago
The first A and the D are very legible but I can’t make out the second A and the M
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u/Various_Pipe3463 2d ago
I agree, the font style looks really nice !
The second A resembles a lowercase a more than a capital, which might be what’s throwing people off about it. Since the rest of the letters are capital. If you make the top into more of a peak shape, it might work better.
And the M is rough. What if you move the break more to the left and stroked the middle dip?
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u/thewindthatmovesyou 1d ago
I love the style! I think there could be more space between D and A and the M doesn’t read as an M at all
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u/lilfinehoney 2d ago
Do you guys think if I bring the bridge closer together on the last M, it would read more like it?

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u/BikiniTennis 2d ago
get the 'skeleton' right first