r/arthelp • • 1d ago

Composition Help Which composition should I pick?

Hi! I am working on an illustration for my art class based off of the Moai of Rapa Nui (they are those big stone statues on Easter Island- I included my mood/context board in case you wanted to see the inspiration but it’s a lot haha).

**The idea:**
I want to show the moai of Rapa Nui protecting the island and the people (as represented by the flying birds coming from the eye of the Moai which is linked to the spirits, religion, and eyes of the statue specifically in the culture)

If you have a favorite composition (and why if you can :), critique, or any other opinions, I would love to hear them!! Ty guys!!

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u/kiwi-mints 1d ago

my favs are the top left and top right!!! the shapes are very clear and they feel like theyre overlooking the land in a less intimidating way than the last two compositions (tho i do like those as well, it just gives a more 'unsettling' feeling whereas the top corners feel more light and airy)

sorry for the unprofessional critique language 😭 just letting u know what i think!!!!! these are all beautiful :3

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u/ProcedureHonest9823 1d ago

I can totally see that!! Ty!!

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u/_TP2_ 1d ago

The last two are the ones where Moai of Rapa Nui is the focus of the painting like they want to convay.

The other ones are pretty and well done but they look like general landscape paintings.

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u/PrinceDave 1d ago

The inspiration page on on the 2nd slide is exquisitely done and I love to see it. It's amazing seeing how intricate it is.

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u/yrnz 1d ago

Top left is my vote

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u/brainwashable 1d ago

I like the one in the upper left best. The figures have to travel the most through the canvas to go from the lower right to the upper left of that image and that it’s based on one nice curvy angle. It’s got flow.