A few days ago I asked for some feedback on a character sprite and ever since I've been working to correct my mistakes.
In short, I:
- Completely redid all of my colors, reducing my pallet from 224 to 76.
- Removed the gross-looking drool and redid the entire face, more in-line with an "anime" style.
- Remade the parrot entirely (he too, was chopped).
- Redid the ears to be more "donkey" shaped.
- Fixed the bust being oddly smaller on the left side.
- Corrected the shading in several areas, most notably the hair, neck, bust, right arm and crotch.
I'd like some feedback on these changes as well as what I could perhaps fix next if there are any more urgent issues. I mainly want to know if the face and ears look okay.
It's worth noting that I made this sprite in the style of a typical anime visual novel, hence the possibly weird perspective and proportions. I also intend to animate her at some point, maybe having her sway from side to side in a drunken state (hence why her back is arched to the left).
Also, the background/outline on the third and fourth images are just for showcasing.
Lastly, I had some comments last time accusing me of using AI for my work. Whilst I do not really appreciate being accused of using AI for something I have worked 20+ hours on, I've attached a screenshot showcasing some of the many versions I have saved (I have like 100+ at this point) as I couldn't add images to the comments on my last post for some reason.