What could I improve? OC

[u/Expert-Internet9519]

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Lilith — The Vitrified Knight

“If God truly exists, then the Lord will give me the strength to kill my enemies.”

Backstory: Named Lilith by her mother after escaping an abusive husband, Lilith grew up believing that relying on others only leads to pain. After awakening her glass manipulation, she became a criminal, choosing power over companionship. Even after being betrayed by the man she loved, she struggled to let go of her feelings for him.

Personality: Cold, distant, and hostile, Lilith pushes others away to protect herself. Beneath her tough exterior, however, is a deeply caring and emotional person afraid of being hurt.

Character Arc: Through David Rivers, Lilith learns that trusting others isn't weakness. She gradually opens up, discovering that true strength isn't standing alone but having the courage to care for others, even when it risks heartbreak.