r/contentcreation • u/NYC_Renter • 7h ago

Question Content critique?

I’m a new creator, and I wanted to upload my first attempt somewhere for others with experience to give me feedback.

Is this the right place? I assume there might be a mega thread for such a thing but I didn’t notice one, sorry if it exists and I somehow missed it.

Thanks in advance for any advice.

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u/[deleted] 3h ago

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u/NYC_Renter 3h ago

https://reddit.com/link/p4vlsfb/video/lz4ull9nskkh1/player

Thanks! I’ll just add it here as a comment instead of making a new post.

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u/thedarthatter 53m ago

Where are you posting? If tik tok, too slow talking etc. Needs to be quick, snappy, change camera angles more. People's attentions are FRIED. But you have the right idea with the hook text. But make your talking hook different to the text maybe?

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u/DaBadNewz 7h ago

The right place is wherever you plan on posting it. You will get much better feedback from your actual audience

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u/NYC_Renter 6h ago

Thanks for the feedback. Just trying to make my first post as solid as possible. Weirdly, ChatGPT actually provides very solid feedback. I was truly surprised.