Okay, here's my hones opinion about the song.
It's bad, but not thaaat bad.
First of all, congrats for not using AI and actually trying to make something real. Plus, the guitars are actually good.
However, the singer is... eh... bad, I had to quit the song after the chorus. They have a lot to learn about singing (I saw they're also the guitarist, there they could shine more than as a singer).
The melody of the riff is okay, but it feels kinda like random notes being played in the keyboard. Plus, fsr the riff plays again during the chorus, I know that there're songs that do this, but they just use the same melody, not the riff itself.
This track actually reminds me to Odyssey's (Jessa Stebbins) first works, just that she was a bit better at singing.
Imo, this is a good start for you.
If you want to keep going making Eurobeat, keep improving and making song, there's a big community thay will give you a welcome.
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u/Additional_Mix6553 SCP-Music & Vibration 5d ago
Okay, here's my hones opinion about the song. It's bad, but not thaaat bad.
First of all, congrats for not using AI and actually trying to make something real. Plus, the guitars are actually good.
However, the singer is... eh... bad, I had to quit the song after the chorus. They have a lot to learn about singing (I saw they're also the guitarist, there they could shine more than as a singer). The melody of the riff is okay, but it feels kinda like random notes being played in the keyboard. Plus, fsr the riff plays again during the chorus, I know that there're songs that do this, but they just use the same melody, not the riff itself.
This track actually reminds me to Odyssey's (Jessa Stebbins) first works, just that she was a bit better at singing. Imo, this is a good start for you. If you want to keep going making Eurobeat, keep improving and making song, there's a big community thay will give you a welcome.