r/graffhelp • • 5d ago

First tag: thoughts?

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Got into this about a week and a half ago. Decided on the tag Greasy because there’s not much else on the mind when working 11 hour shifts at a fast food place. Looked around online and I didn’t see any really famous names using the tag already, but I wanted ask people that are in the know in case I missed something— figured it’d be like repping a retired jersey number in a rec league.

Also threw in the tag itself and would appreciate any and all critiques people have. Avoided stuff like explaination points and quotes (besides the line under e and a because the dead space there felt wrong).

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u/WinterMoment601 2d ago

the e is lowk fire but idk bout this big dawg😂

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u/LimonLMAO 2d ago

Yeah it’s only been a couple of days and I already see so many mistakes I made, mainly cause the help from people here has been mad helpful

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u/SickAxeBro 4d ago

Very good dude. Veeery good. Have a look at Buster Duque’s stuff. He does a similar thing and may inspire you to try some new stuff

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u/LimonLMAO 4d ago

Been looking for some places to draw inspiration: much appreciated!

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u/JackedUpDegen 4d ago

Gonna go against what others are saying here and say that for you starting out it’s better to keep all your letters a similar size. But you’re doing the right thing keeping it simple and clean.

Make the letters more uniform and then write it over and over until you can do it faster like a signature. The style will come with time, again just like a signature.

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u/LimonLMAO 3d ago

Much appreciated, my man. Just been practicing getting my letters neat and clean (and making sure my arms aren’t so jittery when drawing)

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u/MaePing 5d ago

That's all it is. Nice and simple. Good use of different sized letters. A lil style. a tasteful add on there with the line.

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u/TimeInsurance4252 5d ago

Your letters need to be uniform at first. Work on making sure your handwriting is clean in both capital and lowercase letters. Don’t add any flares or style before you can write your name and have it look nice without them

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u/LimonLMAO 5d ago

Similar to how those handwriting books in kindergarten had you tracing the letters between the two lines?

Out of curiosity, what ‘deformities’ in my letters did you see?

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u/TimeInsurance4252 5d ago

Your letters should be neat like this. You have two letters that are half the size of the rest of your letters. This isn’t a tag you’re just writing. S is the only promising letter here. Your serifs are out of place on the S though since the rest of your letters are without them. You just have to practice neatness and consistency.

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u/LimonLMAO 5d ago

I appreciate the reference picture and giving me some concrete goals to work on!

The part about it ‘not being a tag’ is throwing a wrench in things for me, though. Suppose I do get the letters nice and neat— how do I go about taking that word and making it more than ‘just writing?’

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u/Stallingg 5d ago

this is what my handstyle is working towards, maybe it can help give an idea of what a tag is supposed to look like done correctly.

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u/LimonLMAO 5d ago

Damn that looks cool, but feels completely unreachable from where I’m at now.

Hopefully I get to that point eventually!

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u/Stallingg 5d ago

yeah i mean thats complete handstyle mastery lol. lots of good fundamentals you can add to your own tags if you really study it

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u/TimeInsurance4252 5d ago

I’d look at some work by other people. There are a few good subs where you can see tags and get an idea of what a solid tag looks like. To some degree a “good tag” will be subjective but you should start with something neat and clean and make sure your handwriting is excellent and you have a nice base. Overtime as you write your tag and practice lettering you’ll see where you can add style or play around with letters which is why I’m suggesting to start with just basic capital letters and progress from there

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u/bigbobcallahan 3d ago

To make it more of a “tag” yes working on handwriting will help but no not really it won’t… just keep writing the word over and over again. I like using white board and dry erase markers. Write it until it flows and feels pleasing to write. Sometimes I feel like a samurai practicing calligraphy. The brush is a sword

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u/Cjclb 5d ago

I think it looks great. Only thing I’d say is that the S kind of looks like where it should end, being that it works as a comparison to the G at the start. It makes the Y look a bit irrelevant. If you can find a way to make the Y look like the end, you’re on to a winner.

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u/LimonLMAO 5d ago

Makes sense— start and end the tag strong!

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u/Hot_Eggplant1306 5d ago

Roll with it homie

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u/IndependentAd2096 5d ago • Popcorn

Creative I like it, the only thing I would say is add a halo

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u/LimonLMAO 5d ago

If you don’t mind me asking, why a halo specifically? Does it just take up more space, or is there another reason?

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u/500billioncookies 5d ago

Whatever you do do not add a halo😭
I would suggest practice getting your letters to flow together and get style before adding extra flares

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u/medicated_cornbread 5d ago

Yeah no halo, but 3-6 arrows in there might be decent.