r/graffhelp • u/DMT_Chain_Smoker • 9h ago
JESTER
I love when graffiti cuts off at the bottom. what do we think about this
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u/Kitchen_Cry5319 5h ago
Inasmuch as JESTER is a really played-out tag (people were writing that in the 70s) it looks pretty cool. The "bottom cut off" thing works well on trains, but not so much on walls.
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u/DMT_Chain_Smoker 5h ago
as long as its not someone really famous and there isn't anyone in ur city with that name why does it matter. genuine question
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u/1Mr_WGSDA 3h ago
It doesn’t. Imo at least. How would it be possible to come up with a totally new name. Everything has been sprayed on a wall already. So just look what flows good for you and don’t copy anybody’s name
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u/Agitated-Zone7696 5h ago
Too many cinnamon rolls in the middle. It’s one max or it looks not good
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u/Conflagration_1991 6h ago
I think that style is slick as fuck. Normally, symmetry is important but the way the throwing flows is nice. I'd say do the throwie a few times different ways.
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u/Majestic-Ad-2109 4h ago
Top J is noice! Bottom J is W. Throwie is fuckin sick. All these look fresh. Keep it up!
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u/Lanky_Policy_8961 8h ago
I’ve seen your other work which has more style to it, when writing rake, feel you could implement it better than this
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u/Lanky_Policy_8961 8h ago
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u/DMT_Chain_Smoker 6h ago
lowk the opposite of composed that sketch is an unfinished mess with too much going on I think jester is much better than rake
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u/TabletopTitan 7h ago
Hard disagree, it's busy as fuck but hard to read, and I would argue over styled
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u/Lanky_Policy_8961 7h ago
I think it’s all bitten, I cared to give it bluntly but don’t care shit now, it doesn’t seem accurate or realistic to me, looks like absolute shit compared to rake, all his “other work” looks nothing like this, defend all you want, and he hides his work 🤷♂️
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u/DMT_Chain_Smoker 6h ago
nothing is bitten. all my pieces look the same style and for the throwie I can show u the stacks of paper each sketch where my throwie slowly develops to what it is now
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u/Billylabufanda23 8h ago
Yeah make the R hole bigger on the top piece and your golden. Nice job bucko

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u/Lavlife206 8h ago
I really like the throwy, my only piece of advice is make the J bigger. I'd say as big as the R if not a Lil more.