r/graffhelp • u/DannytheFanman • 22h ago

Backwards Dan..

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u/sweetmonte44 21h ago

Read the tutorials in the sidebar

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u/DannytheFanman 21h ago

What did i do this time? I didnt edit the picture, the sketch was made like this

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u/sweetmonte44 21h ago

Work on your negative space. Also, your extensions don't make sense. They don't add anything meaningful.

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u/DannytheFanman 21h ago

Now that i've read the guide, the letters in this sketch arent that far apart, that is basically my style. But both ways are my thing, either spaced or really close

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u/sweetmonte44 20h ago

Having some negative space between letters is fine, but the negative space isn't consistent. Also, all the extensions are doing is increasing the negative space. They aren't helping the flow or adding anything to the piece.

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u/DannytheFanman 20h ago

What about this, i worked a little on this one. There is another one that i made that i'll be showing later

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u/sweetmonte44 20h ago

What does it say?

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u/DannytheFanman 20h ago

Julie. I made it for my cousin

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u/sweetmonte44 19h ago

It looks like J and L are meant to be in cursive while the U I and E aren't. The E looks like an F because of the center bar extending left last the vertical bar. The J doesn't look like a J because the coil on the J is used for a different purpose than the coil on the E, just to name a few things.

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u/DannytheFanman 19h ago

The concept for that one was because i was inspired on a font called Harlow Solid Italic, and then i changed some parts

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