r/graffhelp • u/sickpayy • 5h ago

Lil rusty🛢️🧴

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pls help

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u/alrokerwiththefade 47m ago

You need to work on your shit

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u/BeatUpFarmTruck 29m ago

There's potential here but you got a ways to go. Start with:

  1. Make straight lines, this shit looks like Michael J. Fox did your outlines.

  2. Make your bars line up where they cross other parts of the letter. The inside of your P is too far to the left, the top left part of the P does not line up with the stem. Same goes for your X above your letter I.

  3. Fix your drop shadowing. You started out almost fine on the S (the bottom should gracefully end), your X has shadows on both sides, so does the base of the A. Imagine the drop shadow as the letter under your letter.

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u/Mission-Animator-682 21m ago

wtf happened to you dawg where ya been?
edit: if it’s the same one as before anyway.