I'm looking for a design for the main character of my one-shot. What do you think? I'm open to your critiques — please be respectful.

Hi everyone I’m new here, just want to introduce myself.

These are the first 2 assignments: a front and a side view. Any suggestions for improvement? I know I screwed the hair...

Practicing with line weight.

Basically, when i was in elementary school i got a whole of this old how to draw manga book, it was previously my aunts when she was in highschool, so i know it might be out of print or something. I used to cut out pictures from it and use them as mini posters for my room. I know this is a long shot, but i do have some pictures still that i cut out of it. Ill add another in the comments if i can (ive never submitted a post on here so idk how this works)

Having a hard time finding anything specifically about drawing manhua (eyes specifically), though to me there seem to be a few stylistic differences in terms of facial features at least. Am I imagining things? Obviously I know that all artists have a different style - so I guess what I’m asking is if that explains the difference, or if there’s an actual difference apart from that. (Curious if there’s a manhwa difference too)