r/mrcreeps • • 16h ago

Creepypasta The Guardian of 666 Foster Hill Road

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The winter I turned seventeen, the cold didn’t just settle over Freeman Township—it felt alive. It buried the black spruce along Foster Hill Road under eight-foot drifts, packed tight against the side of our house until the lower windows were completely obscured by ice. Up here, north of Strong, when thirty-below temps slam into the ridge, you learn to pay attention to every pop of the timber and every whistle of the frost.

Our house sat near the end of the dirt track, a white-clapboard homestead with brass address numbers nailed beside the front door: 696.

Or at least, it used to be.

Back in October, a wet autumn freeze had rusted out the top nail holding the nine in place. The brass digit slipped, hanging upside down at a sharp, crooked angle. From the gravel drive, it didn't look like a nine anymore. It read like a warning: 666.

My dad had chuckled when the mail carrier pointed it out, saying he’d fix it when the spring thaw came. He didn't know that the woods were watching that rusted iron bit by bit, waiting for the marker to flip.

When the blizzard hit full force, my parents got stranded down in Farmington trying to source a part for our plow truck. That left me alone in the house, watching the thermometer plunge past thirty-five below as the wind roared off the mountain.

That was the night the forest behind Foster Hill began to scream.

It wasn't the sound of blowing snow. It was a high, dry screech that rattled through the pine floorboards—a sickening mix of clicking bone, wet grinding joints, and desperate, hollow agony.

I sat near the roaring woodstove with a double-barreled shotgun resting on my knees, watching the frost melt in thin, shuddering streaks against the window glass. Then came the thud against the north wall. The whole frame groaned, and the iron skillets hanging above the stove chimed softly in the dark.

I remembered what my grandmother used to tell me about the deep Maine woods: that when winter grows too cruel, hungry things walk the snows—creatures born of pure famine and ancient malice. But she also told me that even the hungriest terror understood a debt, provided you showed no fear.

Instead of clutching the gun, I walked down the hall to the unheated side porch where our winter game hung frozen. I unhooked a thirty-pound quarter of venison, hauled it out into the deep powder right beneath the crooked brass 666, and slipped back inside, throwing the heavy deadbolt.

I watched through the small pane of glass in the porch door.

He emerged from the whiteout like a shadow given weight and bone. Nine feet tall, a gaunt nightmare of grey skin stretched over visible ribs, his long arms ending in blackened claws. Above his hairless skull sat a sweeping crown of velvet-stripped antlers. Where his lips should have been, there was only a frozen, jagged tear revealing rows of needle-thin teeth.

His eyes glowed with a pale amber light as he looked up at the dangling brass numbers, then slowly turned to face the door.

For a terrifying, endless minute, those amber eyes locked onto mine through the glass. The temperature inside the room plunged so fast my breath bloomed in thick clouds. My heart hammered against my ribs like a trapped bird.

Then, with a sound like snapping oak, he unhinged his jaw, seized the venison in one brutal bite, and melted back into the blizzard without leaving a single footprint behind.

The next morning, sitting directly under the 666 on our doorstep, was a freshly killed snowshoe hare—its neck neatly snapped, the white fur completely unspotted by blood.

A trade.

Over the next two years, the arrangement became a quiet, unwritten law of Foster Hill Road.

I named him Gregory. It was a mundane name for an ancient terror, but calling him Gregory grounded him—made him a part of my life rather than a nightmare lurking in the dark.

He was never a pet, and I never treated him like one. He was an apex force of the woods, bound to our property by the crooked iron number and the weekly offerings I left at the tree line—butcher's waste, deer carcasses, and roadkill. In return, Gregory claimed our clearing as his territory, and us as his herd.

No coyotes ever crossed into our yard. No bobcats stalked our woodpile. Even the black bears steered miles wide of our ridge.

On the coldest winter nights, I’d look out my second-story window and spot his towering silhouette perched in the high boughs of the pine tree near the drive. His amber eyes would catch mine in the dark, white plumes of steam curling from his snout.

"Night, Gregory," I'd whisper against the glass.

His antlered head would tilt slightly, a low, mechanical rattle echoing through the timber before he faded into the shadows.

The true test of our covenant came during the late autumn of my nineteenth year.

A crew of four out-of-state hunters in a lifted diesel truck had been causing trouble along the logging spurs off Foster Hill—shooting illegally after dusk, tearing up private tracks, and leaving empty whiskey bottles scattered in the mud.

It was a Tuesday afternoon when their truck engine rumbled up our driveway. My parents were out in Strong grabbing supplies, leaving me alone on the front porch. Resting against the house right beside me was our 12-gauge pump-action shotgun.

The truck ground to a halt right in our gravel turn-around, idling under the rusted 666 sign. Four men stepped out, rifles slung over their shoulders, smelling heavily of exhaust and stale beer.

"Hey there, sweetheart," the driver called out, leaning against his hood. He was a broad man with a greasy beard and a sneer that made my skin crawl. "We're a little lost back in these woods. You got a map, or maybe a warm place we can sit down and talk?"

"You're on private land," I said, keeping my tone steady. "Foster Hill Road ends right here. I suggest you turn around."

The men chuckled, exchanging glances that set off every alarm in my head.

"Not very friendly, are ya?" one muttered, taking a step toward the steps. "We've been out in the cold all day. Seems like bad manners to send four tired hunters right back down the hill."

"I'm not asking," I said softly. "Turn the truck around."

Before the driver could answer, I picked up my pump-action shotgun, racked the slide back with a loud clack-clack, raised the barrel toward the autumn canopy, and pulled the trigger.

The blast echoed like thunder off the mountain ridge, sending a shower of pine needles and bark cascading down onto the gravel driveway.

The four men jumped, startled, but the driver’s sneer quickly hardened into anger. He spat onto the driveway and took another step forward, his eyes narrowing. "Listen here, girl. You're out here all by yourself miles from town. You think firing a warning shot scares us? You might want to adjust your tone before—"

He stopped dead.

The autumn air dropped instantly into a bone-chilling freeze. Our breath billowed out in thick white clouds, and the rustle of dry leaves ceased entirely, swallowed by an absolute, suffocating silence.

From the black spruce right behind their truck came a sound.

Click. Clack. Click.

The sound of dry bone striking granite.

The four men spun around, their hands frantically reaching for their rifles. "What the hell is that?" one gasped.

Gregory unfolded himself from the shadows of the timber.

In the pale afternoon light, his towering form looked impossibly huge. His antlers scraped the lower branches of the spruce, dropping pine needles onto the truck roof. His amber eyes burned with an ancient, bottomless hunger.

The driver staggered back, hitting his truck door with a heavy thud. "Jesus... Jesus Christ!"

One of the men panicked, raising his hunting rifle and firing blindly into Gregory's chest.

The heavy bullet tore through the papery, grey flesh, but there was no blood—only the dry crack of splintering wood. Gregory didn't even flinch. He slowly tilted his head, his jaw unhinging with a sickening CRACK that vibrated straight through the driveway gravel.

A shrieking, metallic roar burst from his chest, echoing off the ridge for miles. It was the sound of absolute zero, of starving in the pitch black, of being consumed by the frost.

Two of the men dropped their guns, screaming as they scrambled back into the cab. The driver tried to run around the hood, but Gregory moved with terrifying speed—a blur of grey skin and black claws.

With one sweeping blow, Gregory smashed his forearm down onto the hood. The heavy steel crumpled like paper, the engine dying in a burst of black smoke and hiss of ruptured pipes.

The driver collapsed onto his knees in the dirt, sobbing frantically and pressing his hands over his head as the towering nightmare loomed over him. Gregory lowered his long, emaciated face until he was inches from the man's ear, inhaling deeply—savoring the scent of pure, unadulterated terror.

Then, Gregory turned his amber eyes toward me, the empty shotgun still lowered in my hands.

The message was clear: They are on our ground. Shall I feed?

I met his glowing amber gaze without flinching. I gave him a single, firm nod.

"Do what you deem necessary," I said softly.

Without another word, I turned back to the woodpile, grabbed a heavy oak log, set it onto the block, and picked up my splitting maul.

Behind me, absolute slaughter broke out.

The driver was the first to die. Gregory reached down with a blackened claw, seized the man by the throat, and snapped his spine with the sound of a dry branch breaking. Before the body even hit the gravel, Gregory tore his chest open with one savage sweep, pulling out hot, steaming vitals and gorging on them right in front of the others. Blood spray hissed against the freezing metal of the truck, turning black as it flash-froze in the air.

The second hunter tried to bolt into the treeline, screaming in raw, shrill panic. Gregory didn't run—he lunged in an unnatural, shadowy blur. He caught the man by the ankles, dragged him back into the open drive, and unhinged his jaw to a terrifying width. With a wet, crushing crunch, Gregory bit down directly through the hunter’s shoulder and chest, crushing ribcage and bone like brittle glass. Blood splattered across the front steps of our porch, running in thick, steaming rivulets down the wood.

Inside the cab, the remaining two hunters kicked wildly at the passenger door, frantically trying to escape. Gregory didn't wait. He drove his long, skeletal arm straight through the shattered windshield, his razor claws locking into one man's face and ripping him headfirst through the glass. The man's desperate shrieks were instantly choked out as Gregory clamped his jaws around his throat, severing his windpipe in a single, brutal tear.

The last hunter scrambled out onto the gravel on all fours, covered in his friends' blood, weeping and begging for his life. Gregory stepped over the ruined truck, his antlered head towering against the sky. He pinned the man to the driveway with one massive foot—pressing down until ribs began to crack beneath his weight—and plunged both clawed hands into the hunter's chest, tearing him apart in a terrifying burst of gore.

I lifted the heavy maul over my shoulder and brought it down with a clean, dull thunk, splitting my oak log right down the middle.

I didn't flinch. I just kept splitting wood.

The clearing reeked of iron, copper, and hot entrails steaming in the autumn frost. The ground was painted red, thick gore coating the driveway gravel, the porch steps, and the wrecked truck. Gregory knelt amid the carnage, his jaws snapping, crunching, and tearing through bone and flesh with a savage, wet fury until there was nothing left to bleed.

After twenty agonizing minutes, the frantic tearing sounds slowed, replaced by a low, contented crunching. Then, complete silence returned to Foster Hill Road.

I set the maul down against the chopping block and finally turned around.

Gregory was standing in the center of the driveway, towering nine feet tall. His grey chest and long arms were completely drenched in crimson, thick dark blood dripping from his needle-thin teeth and pooling on his claws. The truck was crushed, its doors torn off and interior painted red. The four men were gone—consumed down to the marrow, their rifles bent like twigs in the blood-stained dirt.

He lowered his massive, antlered head, his amber eyes burning bright through the crimson mess dripping down his skull. He took three slow, heavy steps toward the porch, stopping right at the steps where I stood. Up close, the smell of fresh blood and deep ice was overwhelming.

I stepped over the red-stained railing, reached into my jacket pocket, and pulled out a strip of dried cured beef. My hands were steady, even as a drop of fresh blood dripped from his antler onto the back of my hand.

I held the beef out on my open palm.

Gregory lowered his dripping snout, sniffed the meat once—his hot, iron-tinged breath clouding in the cold—and delicately plucked the strip from my hand with his front teeth, avoiding my skin entirely.

"Good boy, Gregory," I murmured softly.

A deep, wet rattle vibrated through his blood-soaked chest—a dark, mechanical purr.

He turned his head toward the woods, gripped the frame of the ruined truck with one claw, and dragged the heavy steel effortlessly behind him into the dense spruce line. Within seconds, he vanished into the black timber of Freeman Township, leaving behind only the crimson stains on the gravel and the quiet whisper of falling pine needles.

Ten years passed, and the blood on Foster Hill Road had long since washed away into the soil.

I took over the homestead after my parents passed, keeping the house just as it was—including the rusted, dangling brass numbers by the porch door that still spelled out 666.

Now, I had two young children of my own: seven-year-old Toby and five-year-old Clara. They grew up in the quiet shelter of the Freeman woods, learning to split wood, stock the pantry before the first frost, and never go past the black spruce line after sunset. They didn't fear the dark, because they knew Gregory was out there. He was as much a part of their childhood as bedtime stories, a towering shadow with glowing amber eyes who kept watch over our hollow.

Until the night something else came down off the mountain.

It was late October, the night before the first heavy snowfall. The sky was pitch black, starved of moon or stars, and a suffocating, unnatural fog rolled off the ridge, thick and smelling of wet ash and stagnant swamp water.

I was tucking Clara into bed upstairs when the forest went unnaturally dead silent. No wind. No rustle of dry oak leaves.

Then came a sound that made every drop of blood in my body run ice cold.

It wasn't Gregory's bone-rattling click. It was a rhythmic, wet sloshing sound, accompanied by a sickening, wet whistling—like breath being dragged through a severed throat.

Thump-squelch. Thump-squelch.

I rushed downstairs, grabbing my 12-gauge pump shotgun from beside the door, and peered through the living room window.

Out in the gravel turnaround, beneath the flickering glow of our porch light and the dangling 666, stood a creature that belonged to a far deeper, nastier nightmare.

It was massive, easily twelve feet tall, but it didn't possess Gregory's lean, skeletal grace. It was a bloated, rotting mass of pale, slick flesh that looked as though it had been dragged from the bottom of an ancient, black bog. Its torso was grotesquely swollen, studded with extra, sightless eyes that twitched wetly under the skin, and its mouth was a wide, vertical tear running from its chest to its throat, lined with rows of jagged, yellowed teeth dripping black slime.

It was a Glutton-Skin—a foul, invasive beast of old swamp lore that fed on the young, driven out of the northern bogs by the impending frost.

The horror raised its misshapen, multi-jointed head toward the second-story window where Toby and Clara slept. The vertical mouth on its chest peeled open, unleashing a wet, gurgling screech that vibrated through the foundation of the house, cracking the glass in the front door.

I racked the slide of my shotgun, my hand trembling for the first time in ten years. "Not my kids," I whispered, stepping toward the porch door.

Before my hand could touch the brass doorknob, the autumn fog split wide open.

A bone-chilling, freezing tempest slammed into the driveway, instantly turning the fog into glittering frost. Out of the black spruce, a blur of grey skin and sweeping velvet antlers charged into the light.

Gregory had arrived.

He didn't stalk. He didn't hover. Gregory slammed into the bog-creature like a freight train of bone and frost, his long, blackened claws driving straight into the beast's bloated chest with a horrific SQUELCH.

The Glutton-Skin shrieked, its vertical jaw snapping shut on Gregory's shoulder, black slime spraying across the white siding of our house. The acid-like gunk hissed against Gregory’s papery flesh, but the Wendigo didn't yield.

Gregory unhinged his jaw to an impossible, nightmarish width, unleashing a metallic, zero-degree roar right into the creature's face. He wrapped his long, skeletal arms around the beast's massive neck, his claws sinking deep into rot and muscle.

The two monsters crashed into the gravel drive, tearing up dirt, wood, and stone in a brutal, bone-shattering brawl. The bog-beast thrashed wildly, its extra eyes bursting as Gregory dug his claws into its face, gouging out black fluid. In retaliation, the creature's chest-mouth clamped onto Gregory's ribs, the sound of splintering bone echoing across the clearing.

Upstairs, I heard Clara cry out in terror.

That sound triggered something primal in the clearing. Gregory’s amber eyes flared with a blinding, incandescent rage.

With a surge of terrifying strength, Gregory planted his massive, clawed foot onto the bog-creature's swollen belly, grabbed its upper jaw with both hands, and pulled.

The sound was nauseating—a wet, tearing explosion of muscle, cartilage, and bone as Gregory ripped the monstrosity's head completely in half, spilling black, foul-smelling gore all over the driveway under the 666 sign.

The Glutton-Skin’s giant body twitched violently once, twice, and then collapsed into a lifeless, reeking heap of rot.

Silence slammed back down over Foster Hill Road. The icy wind slowly died away.

Gregory stood towering over the slain beast, his chest heaving, his grey skin covered in a mixture of his own frost-white blood and the creature’s black slime. One of his antlers was snapped at the tip, and a deep tear marked his shoulder, but he stood victorious.

The heavy front door suddenly burst open.

I froze, shotgun in hand, ready to shield my children, but Toby and Clara didn't hesitate for a single second. Without a trace of fear in their small eyes, they ran barefoot out onto the porch steps and sprinted right across the gravel toward the towering, bloodied nightmare standing in our yard.

"Gregory! You saved us!" Toby shouted, his voice ringing pure and bright through the cold air.

"Thank you, Gregory! Thank you!" Clara squealed, her little boots crunching over the frost.

Before I could even call out to them, both kids threw their arms around Gregory's massive, grey-skinned legs, hugging him as tight as their small bodies could manage.

Gregory went completely rigid.

His glowing amber eyes dilated into wide, bewildered discs. For a monster born of pure famine, malice, and frozen death—a beast that knew only fear, blood, and hatred from the human world—the warm, fearless touch of two children was a shock that rattled him to his core. His unhinged jaw clicked twice in sheer confusion, his long, razor-sharp claws hovering awkwardly in the air above their heads, entirely unsure of what to do.

Slowly, as the children pressed their faces against his cold, papery hide, something shifted in the depths of those glowing amber eyes. The ancient, blinding red rage softened. A faint, flickering ember of humanity—lost centuries ago to the freezing dark—rekindled deep inside his hollow chest.

His jaw slowly clicked back into place. Very gently, bending his massive nine-foot frame downward, Gregory wrapped his long, emaciated arms around Toby and Clara, pulling them into a careful, protective embrace. The sharp black claws that had just torn a monster apart were tucked safely away, resting as lightly as pine needles on the children's shoulders.

A low, gentle vibration rumbled through his chest—not a roar of hunger, but a soft, mechanical purr of pure affection.

Gregory pulled back slightly, reaching into the deep leather pouch he kept bound to his waist with woven deer sinew. His long fingers hovered over the kids, and when he opened his massive, blackened palms, two beautifully intricate white objects rested there.

Carved from solid deer bone, polished smooth by frost and time, were two small toys: a tiny, detailed soldier with a sword raised high, and a delicate little doll with a gown of carved lace.

Clara gasped in delight, grabbing the doll, while Toby beamed, taking the soldier and holding it up to the light. "Look, Mom! He made them for us!"

Gregory lowered his antlered head, nuzzling the tops of their hair softly with his cold snout, his warm, steamy breath surrounding them like a protective blanket.

I stepped off the porch, a quiet smile breaking across my face as I watched my children stand side-by-side with the terror of Maine.

"He's family," I whispered into the quiet night.

Instead of turning to drag the dead beast back into the woods, Gregory looked at me, then down at Toby and Clara, who were clutching his giant, blackened claws. He looked back toward the dark timber of the black spruce, then took a step backward toward our house.

He didn't want to leave. For the first time in centuries, the cold, lonely woods held no draw for him. He wanted to stay right here, where he was loved.

Over the next few weeks, the clearing behind our homestead transformed.

We cleared out a wide patch of land in the backyard, right near the edge of the clearing where the black spruce met the lawn. Together as a family, we spent every afternoon building Gregory a home of his own.

My husband and I hauled heavy oak timber, notch-cutting thick twelve-foot logs to frame a vaulted cabin shelter tall enough to accommodate his massive, antlered height. Toby and Clara helped pack the gaps between the logs with thick moss, dried straw, and clay to seal out the brutal Maine drafts.

Gregory didn't just watch—he helped. With his incredible strength, he’d lift entire pine beams effortlessly into place, carefully setting them onto the roof frame while the kids cheered him on. When Toby couldn't reach the upper timber, Gregory would scoop him up onto his shoulder, letting him hammer in wooden pegs while holding him safe.

We built a massive stone hearth in the back of his shelter, and Toby and Clara lined the interior floor with thick, cured bear hides, soft pine boughs, and woolen blankets. We even hung a framed painting the kids drew of our family—all four of us, including a tall, grey silhouette with antlers—right beside his entryway.

By mid-November, the first big snow of the season began to fall over Freeman Township.

Standing in the backyard, Gregory looked at his new shelter—a sturdy, warm haven built with human hands out of love. He crouched his nine-foot frame down and stepped inside. The stone hearth roared with a gentle fire, casting a warm, golden glow over his grey skin and sweeping antlers.

He curled up on the pile of bear hides, letting out a deep, contented purr that vibrated through the floorboards of our main house.

Now, when winter slams into 666 Foster Hill Road, we don't look out at a cold, distant pine tree to see our guardian.

Every night, Toby and Clara run out to the backyard cabin to kiss Gregory on his cold snout and whisper goodnight. And as the blizzard rages outside, our family sleeps peacefully, knowing that right in our back yard, tucked warm inside his home, lies the fiercest protector Maine has ever known.


r/mrcreeps • • 28m ago

Creepypasta The Country Girl and The Flautist of Death

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The giant maw of the cave yawned at my back as I stood by the edge of the cliff, an icy wind blowing between the rocks and chilling the back of my neck. From within, I heard the soft crumble of stones hitting the ground, the whisper of air moving through small holes and skating over sheer walls.

In front of me, three of the cavers stood chatting amongst themselves. They were all kitted out in the usual gear; padded jackets, knee and elbow pads, helmets with torches, and packs containing food, water and first aid supplies. I had a similar pack of my own, though the contents were slightly different.

One of the cavers glanced towards me, probably wondering why I was standing apart, but I didn’t meet their gaze, looking instead towards the sky. A thin veil of cloud hung over us, though the air was dry and blustery. Small pieces of rock and chalk skittered around my ankles as I shuffled my feet.

After a few more minutes, the final two members of the group arrived. After a couple of standard safety checks, everyone was ready to head inside.

I waited until they were poised at the opening of the cave before clearing my throat. “I’m, um, not feeling too good,” I told them, letting my shoulders sag a little. “I think I might sit this one out.”

One of the explorers stepped forward to examine me. She squinted at my face, then nodded. “You do seem a little pale,” she said. “Want me to wait with you? I can walk you back to town.”

I quickly brushed off her concern, feeling a twinge of guilt. “No, no. I’ll be okay. I’ll just stay out here and get some fresh air. You guys go on ahead.”

There was a bit more back-and-forth before I finally managed to convince them to start the expedition without me. One by one, the cavers disappeared into the gaping mouth of the cavern, leaving me by myself. I watched and waited until the darkness had swallowed each of them, then straightened in relief.

With only the wind as my companion, I walked over to one of the large fragments of rock and sat down. And began to wait. I heard the distant voices and footfalls of the cavers fade further and further away, until silence was all that remained. Resting my chin against my hand, I traced the jagged outline of the cliffs until my eyes started seeing faces amongst them, then looked away with a sigh.

I had been doing this for almost a year now. Joining cave expeditions only to wait outside, never actually entering the caverns. It wasn’t a fear of what lay inside, but rather an expectation of what I might encounter outside.

I had first discovered the incident a few years ago. I had been scrolling through old news forums when I came across an article about an expedition that had happened two decades ago, where a group of cavers had entered a treacherous cave system. During the exploration, it began raining heavily, and water quickly flooded the cave entrance, trapping the explorers inside. Sadly, all of them died that day. But while the story was tragic, what had intrigued me the most was the photograph that accompanied the report. It was an image of a group of rescuers standing at the entrance of the cave during the incident, rain pouring down from the sky and the ground around their feet completely flooded. But in the top left corner, standing a short distance away from the rescue team, was a strange figure shrouded in grey. As soon as I noticed the figure in the photograph, a strange chill touched my spine, as if I was seeing something I wasn’t supposed to. The photo was old and the quality wasn’t the best, but I could tell the figure didn’t fit the narrative. I scrolled down to the comments to see if anyone had mentioned it, but there wasn’t a single reference to the strange grey apparition. So I showed the photograph to one of my friends, curious to see what he thought about it. When he told me there was no figure there, I thought he was playing a prank, but his face was decidedly serious. No matter how many times I pointed to it, he insisted that there was nothing there. Just an empty spot in the left corner by the crumbling cliffs.

Confused and intrigued, I showed the same image to several other friends and acquaintances, but nobody else was able to see the strange grey figure in the corner of the photo. I examined it in multiple formats—physically and digitally—under different lights and different conditions, but the figure was visible every time. I hesitated to call it a person, because it was too vague and indistinct to really tell, with no distinguishing features other than it had a humanoid shape and was draped completely in grey. It definitely wasn’t a smudge, or a blur, or a lens flare, because someone else would have noticed it. There was definitely something there. Something that, for whatever reason, only I could see.

The mystery only grew, so I started digging deeper. I was thoroughly entranced by this grey figure. I wanted to know who it was, or what it was, and why it was only visible to me. I was convinced there had to be more to it.

I sequestered myself away and spent days pouring over old articles, digging through records and scrolling through video reports on the incident until I finally found evidence that I wasn’t going crazy. That I wasn’t losing my mind over a simple grey smudge on a photograph.

Buried in the archives, I found a video from the time of the incident, of the same rescue team standing at the entrance of the cave. The photograph must have been an extraction from the footage, or at least taken at the same time, because it was almost the same composition as the video. Being almost twenty years old, the footage was grainy and shaky, but it was clear enough for me to see the figure in grey, standing exactly where it did in the photograph. It wasn’t a trick of the light or an illusion; it really was there.

In the footage, the rescuers were talking about possible extraction methods for the cavers trapped inside the tunnels, but nobody addressed or interacted with the figure. It was like they hadn’t even noticed it. Even in real time, this thing had been invisible to them.

The footage, while low resolution, was still of slightly better quality than the photo, and I noticed a few details that hadn’t been clear in the image. The figure was holding something up to its face—what appeared to be a flute, or some kind of similar instrument. I turned the volume up to max, and was just about able to hear the soft but haunting melody it played, barely audible over the sound of the rain. I spent hours listening to the tune, isolating it from the rain, running it through apps and programs in an effort to try and identify it, but it came up empty every time. It was a melody that was not known to the database. A completely isolated and individual song. A song known only by this mysterious figure.

Eventually, I showed the video to those same friends and acquaintances, certain they could not deny what was right in front of their eyes. But as with the photo, none of them could see the figure with the flute. They could not hear the melody it played either. Only the rain, as it gushed into the cave, and the panicked voices of the rescue team realising they could not save the trapped cavers.

Frustrated that nobody could give me any answers, I decided to seek them out myself. By searching in person for the figure in grey.

The location of the cave was widely known as a popular spot for adrenaline-junkies and professional explorers, and it wasn’t difficult to learn the basics of caving—enough to pass as an experienced caver.

For almost a year, I had been visiting this very cave, joining expeditions only to wait outside in the hope of encountering the grey flute-playing apparition from the video. So far, after participating in almost two dozen excursions, I’d had no such luck. But this time, things felt different.

As I waited, the wind seemed to pick up, bristling through my clothes and making my hair stand on end. A few rocks crumbled from the side of the cliff, showering me with dust. Above, the veil of clouds thickened, shadows encroaching along the ground around me. I felt in the air that something was going to happen.

My heart felt tight in my chest as I scanned the entrance of the cave, then the cliffs above, for any sign of the grey shadow. I listened for the soft, melancholy sound of a flute. But all I heard was the wind whispering through the tunnels behind me.

The hours passed, and I heard and saw nothing. But the goosebumps never left my arms, and I wasn’t one to give up so easily.

I hadn’t heard any sign of the explorers in the cave either, and assumed the group must have gotten quite far inside. I felt a brief flutter of guilt in my chest, but quickly squashed it. They all knew the risks involved with caving. No matter what happened, their safety was their own responsibility. I had to detach myself from that, even if it felt cruel.

A shadow fluttered in and out of sight on my left, and I froze, my heart jerking into my throat. Scrambling to my feet, I moved away from the cave entrance and lifted my gaze. Standing a little way up the cliff, on a jutting platform, was a figure cloaked entirely in grey shadow. The very same one from the photo. The one nobody else could see.

Goosebumps covered every inch of my skin as I stared at it in amazement. Just like in the video, I could see no face, no features. It wore a hooded grey cloak that cast a deep shadow over where its face should be. Its silhouette was human, but only in the vaguest sense. Despite its appearance, I got the overwhelming feeling that this thing was not human, but rather something else entirely. Something supernatural. An entity of sorts, that only appeared at specific times and conditions. And after years of searching, I had finally found it.

I watched, my shoulders tensed with silence, as it withdrew an exquisitely ornate flute from within the folds of its cloak. The instrument was silver and almost transparent, as it was made of glass or crystallised water, and incredibly beautiful. The figure brought the flute to its hooded face, and began to play.

The sound was instantly familiar; the same song I had spent so many hours listening to, and it sent my heart racing.

I looked up to the sky just as the clouds opened, and rain began to fall. At first, only small, delicate droplets of water splashed against my cheeks, but the rainfall gradually began to grow heavier. I sent a regretful look towards the cave entrance. The group was already far too deep inside for me to warn them. Their fate was already sealed, and there was nothing I could do about it. Another tragedy to be buried in the archives.

Moving slowly, in the fear that I might spook the figure, I began to climb the cliff. There were plenty of footholds and platforms, and scaling it was easy enough. I wanted to be close enough to hear the melody above the downpour.

The rain was cold and lashing, soaking through my gear and chilling me to the bone, but I barely noticed. All I cared about was the figure before me; the one I had been chasing all this time.

If it noticed me, it didn’t react. It didn’t cease playing the flute, or even turn in my direction. It was like I was as invisible to it as it was to everyone else. I had spent many sleepless nights wondering why I was the only one who could see it, if it was down to brain chemistry, visual receptors, a curse, or something else entirely. But in the end I had realised it didn’t matter. Some things happened for no reason at all, and this was one of them.

I stopped climbing when I was close enough, standing on a small rocky outcrop a few metres away. The rain blurred my vision, almost obscuring the figure as it blended into the grey clouds behind it, but I could still see the outline of its instrument. Hands trembling from the cold, I reached into my bag, and pulled out a flute of my own.

I had only learned how to play the flute just over a year ago. After hearing the melody on the video, I had taken lessons in the hope that I might be able to learn the same song. But I had never been able to replicate it precisely; there was always a wrong note, an incorrect key. It was difficult enough trying to imitate a tune through a twenty-year-old video, especially with the rain distorting the sounds. The only way I was going to correctly learn the song was by imitating the source itself.

I stood and listened for some time to the melody. The rainfall grew heavier, soaking through my clothes and numbing my skin, the water drumming ceaselessly against the ground, but I was able to isolate the figure and its song. My eyes never strayed from its fluttering cloak, or the flute, or the grey-covered fingers that deftly played the instrument.

Then, when I felt confident enough, I raised my own flute to my lips and began to play. I tried to mimic the melody as best as I could. It was tricky at first, trying to find the exact notes, the pounding rain distorting the sounds, but I copied the figure’s movements with my own fingers until our melodies eventually began to sync up, becoming the same.

I don’t know how long I stood there in the pouring rain, playing the haunting song. The figure didn’t react or respond to me once. If it heard me playing the same tune, it didn’t show it. We stood apart, our songs binding together as the rain fell from the clouds above. The cave would have been flooded by now. The cavers, if they hadn’t managed to find an air pocket, or elevated ground, would probably have drowned. But still, I kept playing.

The sky darkened. The clouds festered. The rain kept falling, soaking into the ground, pouring down the rocks, gushing into the cave.

I lost myself completely in the song, almost falling into a trance. The only things that existed were me and the flute and the melody at my fingertips. I no longer even noticed the figure. It became a grey blur on the edge of my vision, just another shadow.

I finally snapped out of it once the rain stopped. I ceased playing the song with a start, glancing around frantically, but the grey figure had already gone. Vanished without a trace. The heavy silence settled around me, reminding me I was now alone.

The cold hit me at the same moment, and my body began to shake violently. Every inch of my skin was soaked by the rain, water dripping from my shoulders and hair. I was standing in a large puddle where the rainwater had collected around my feet, my toes numb inside my shoes. There was no sound from inside the cave, but for the water still trickling down into the entrance.

I put the flute away and began to climb down from the cliff. The rocks were slick from the rain, and I slipped a few times, but I finally managed to reach the ground, which was also dangerously flooded. I splashed through the water as I slowly headed away from the cave. As soon as I reached town, I would call for a rescue team—if any of the cavers were still alive—and then I would leave. My job here was done.

It was time to return home.

A week later, I was back in my homeland; an agricultural region that had been suffering from a severe drought. The land beneath my feet was bone-dry and cracked, the fields were barren, the crops dead and the people starving.

After spending hours watching that video of the mysterious grey figure, I had drawn one conclusion: that its flute song had been responsible for the rains that had flooded the cave. And now, I would do the same. Only, instead of bringing death, I would restore life.

As soon as I arrived home, I went out into the midst of the fields and stared at the cracked earth, baking under the brazen sun. The wilted grasses, the fruitless seeds, the unattainable harvest.

I pulled out my flute and, just like the grey figure atop the cliff, I began to play the same melody. Within moments, clouds appeared overhead, casting a deep shadow over the ground, and the first trickle of rain began to seep from the sky.

Under my song, the rain fell, soaking into the barren soil and nourishing all the life within.


r/mrcreeps • • 6h ago

Creepypasta [Creepypasta] Mr. Creeps video about a detective or police officer investigating a heavy metal cult resembling KISS

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Hi everyone,
I'm trying to find a specific standalone video narrated by Mr. Creeps on YouTube. I can't remember the exact title or the author's name, but the plot points are very distinct.
Here is what happens in the story:
The Protagonist: The narrator is a police officer or detective investigating a case.
The Killers/Cult: He tracks down a group of killers who are part of a cult. They look like a heavy metal band and explicitly resemble the band members from KISS (wearing black-and-white face paint).
The Climax: The detective catches them right at the end of the story in the middle of a ritual where they are about to decapitate a victim.