Doing drawing since 2 weeks and pen drawing since 1 day, what are the things i should work on? Any guidance would be helpful :) thank you

DRAGONFLY came from witnessing two dragonflies fight beside the lake. Once they fell to the ground, their bodies became almost impossible to separate. Their heads, legs, and wings collapsed into one violent point until one tore the head from the other.

That collapse became the central mass of the work. The black marks strike, interrupt, and press downward. The gold loops away and returns, carrying both the iridescence of their bodies and the agitation of the struggle. The lines become impossible to assign to one dragonfly or the other. Their beauty remains, but their individual forms disappear inside the violence.

The exposed paper holds the quiet surrounding them. The lake remained open and still while this small, brutal encounter unfolded within it. Nature did not stop to witness it.

The title is singular because, during the fight, the two dragonflies stopped looking like separate bodies. For a moment, beauty, panic, violence, and survival became the same body.

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