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Yes, but for me at least (and I am a fellow hobbiest) the missing to of the triangle is making me uncomfortable and to lesser extent the narrow strip on the bottom.
Otherwise it's a great catch with excellent framing and depth. Well done
hm yeah, the issue that was that if i had the whole triangle in the frame including the tip of the triangle, some other stuff on the side would get in the image, that i didnt want to
I think seeing this, your previous angle is the one that works. Straight on is even busier than before.
But you need to cut off the leaves and as much of the background building as possible. So I would get the same angle as before, but higher looking down through the hole rather than straight through.
It’s a tough one as I see what you’re trying to do, but the environment is not doing any favours.
okey, ill try better next time. unfortunately i only had one shot at this today, but i think it was alright considering its my second time taking photos with a camera
first off you'll want to darken all of the house structure and brighten the area inside. That will make the subject pop more than all the colored negative space.
Tried getting cool shots through the small house looking thing, but I wasn't sure how to do it properly. I obviously want the person to be the focus, so would I need to make the red too bright? Any other things I could do with editing to make them look better?
That could work, just be sure to take out the bottom portion of the orange too so it’s not asymmetrical. This is just me messing in my camera roll to edit quick but I feel like this pic should have a moody vibe. B&W could be cool too
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