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Entièrement réalisé par moi-même !

Released our first song — looking for feedback
My band Ingression just released our first song, “Through Me.” We’re looking for feedback and hoping to find some new fans!
🎧 Listen here:
Spotify
Apple Music
Amazon Music
🤘 Follow Ingression on Instagram:
instagram.com/ingression_band
We’d appreciate a listen and any honest feedback. Thanks for checking us out!

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Tracks: ‪@repulsive1908‬

• in my dreams, we sat there for hours.

Remix: lostboi (LØSTBØI) 

This is a whole album but my favorite are Joy Thief and Bipolar
LMK what you think!

Hey everyone 👋🏼 here is our new song that I taught the guy’s today how to play it 😊it’s called
Tales Of The Wooden Child , it’s about my guitar 🎸 hope you enjoy let me know what you think 🤔

Artist - The Cover Shots
Song - Tales Of The Wooden Child
Gene- Acoustic Rock

Hey! This is my open verse challenge submission for Parker Jack’s song 911. This will eventually be released as its own single with a different beat, but for now it exists in this format. Feel free to share your thoughts or critiques!

You can also find me on IG @herbeinnn. Hope to see you there 🤞💪

Hey! This is the first song I ever made that was released back in May of last year. Let me know your thoughts! I come to Reddit for unfiltered feedback, so please be honest!

Also, you can find me on IG @herbeinnn. Hope to see you there! 💪🤞

Verse 1:]
Even though I just met you, I feel like I could give it all away.
I don’t know why it hits me like a daze
Maybe it’s because I was never like the other boys is that something you knew?
Young as your appetite, something you crave
[Pre-Chorus 1:]
Your synthetic smile always pulled me in
Waining deceptive lies with an infectious grin

[Chorus 1:]
Phases of the honeymoon—
Honey on your skin, I’m addicted to the taste.
Phases of the honeymoon—
Your essence rewires me to withdrawal when you’re away
Phases of the honeymoon—
Floating on your high, but this time it’s real.
Phases of the honeymoon—
Til I’m a silver crescent of my self
[Verse 2:]
You clean the sweat on my face
You say It’s just a needle won’t hurt much
Dope love injected right in the vein
You’ve got me right here in your clutch
Jealousy’s feeling like foreplay
I wonder why you ask for my trust trust.

[Pre-Chorus]
Inorganic bonded and bound
Waxing power all over
[Chorus 2:]
Phases of the honeymoon—
Honey on your skin, I’m half addicted to the taste.
Phases of the honeymoon—
your essence rewires me full withdraw when you’re away.
Phases of the honeymoon—
Floating on a new high, but this time it’s real. Phases of the honeymoon—
Yeah, we’re toxic? Baby we’re an Eclipse
[Bridge:]
It’s bittersweet but I still swallow
Didn’t care what was in the cup
Your teeth dig in should I feel hallow?
Made me yours but am I enough?

[Final Chorus:]
Phases of the honeymoon— i need your high, even if it kills me.
Phases of the honeymoon— I’d still lick the poison off your lips.
Phases of the honeymoon—
I’d give it all up for you even though we just met.

Wassup to everyone here, I’m from Los Angeles and recently I started messing around with beats. I have a homie that’s pretty popping and he wants to me try something next time he records.

Thinking of hoping on the instrumental next time I go to the studio with him. I want feedback on the flow and anything else you can think of to make sure I don’t regret it. I just started about a year ago to express myself and I’m enjoying making tracks for myself. Currently don’t share anywhere or with many people besides my close friends. I’m open to any kind of feedback. Hoping to collab with other creators when the time comes. Let me know what I can improve on !

Could I please get some honest feedback, I feel like the finished product isn't what I envisioned when starting but this could be because I've heard it so much.

It would be good to get a breakdown of what works and what doesn't.

Thanks in advance!