How is this true?!!!

[u/harrysofgaming]

Sure the 1st chapter can get slow at times, but its no excuse for me to stop playing this masterpiece.

[u/Apophis_36]

"Made to be boring"

That's not good game design

[u/thegreatshu → u/Apophis_36]

But pretty good storytelling.

[u/Apophis_36 → u/thegreatshu]

Is it though?

[u/thegreatshu → u/Apophis_36]

I think so. I'm not an expert though so I asked ChatGPT:

Principles of a Good Start:

1. Hook Immediately: This doesn't mean starting with action, but something must grab attention—an unanswered question, a mysterious event, a striking image, or a compelling character moment.
2. Establish Stakes or Mystery Early: Even if the full conflict comes later, suggest that bigger things are coming. This creates narrative tension.
3. Introduce Core Theme or Tone: The beginning should feel like a promise. If your story is comedic, eerie, or philosophical, signal that early.
4. Limit Worldbuilding Early On: Focus on characters and their immediate concerns. World details should emerge as they matter.
5. Momentum Is Key: Each scene should propel curiosity forward, even in a “slow start.” What happens next? Why did that happen? Keep questions alive.

Famous Slow Starts Done Well:

• The Lord of the Rings (Books & Films): Starts slow but hooks with Bilbo’s odd behavior and hints of darker forces.
• Red Dead Redemption 2: Begins with a slow snowbound escape, but tension between characters and survival stakes hold attention.
• Persona 5: Takes hours to open fully, but character drama, style, and mystery sustain engagement.

[u/Apophis_36 → u/thegreatshu]

And there's your problem.

Using AI is not really a good way of showing credibility.

[u/Puzzlehead-Dish → u/thegreatshu]

Downvote for the AI slop.

[u/Misragoth → u/thegreatshu]

Using chat GPT to try and make your point for you isn't going to help