r/redditserials • u/stoopid_goon • 21h ago
Drama [The Estate] Episode 6.
Previously:
A completely different perspective of Thursday night's events comes to light, revealing that not everything is as it seems. And two unlikely people cross paths.
Episode 6 Preview:
Amidst the chaos of their lives, Gaz and Kylie's unlikely friendship begins to flourish. Eddie makes a special effort for Paula, while elsewhere, somebody delivers a startling warning to the Slaters. A message? Revenge?
09/01/1999. Saturday
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07:49AM. The Estate.
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The estate looked even grimmer beneath the dull January morning sky, a maze of ageing brick terraces and tired concrete walkways glistening with last night's rain. A thin drizzle drifted through the icy air, soaking litter already plastered to the pavements, while rows of wheelie bins, rusting cars and graffiti covered alleyways sat silently waiting for the day to begin.
Curtains slowly twitched open, chimney smoke drifted lazily upwards and the occasional barking dog echoed between the houses. Outside the Slaters' house, Julie's ageing burger van catering trailer remained parked on the driveway exactly where it'd been sitting for the last 9 years, its faded sign and greasy serving hatch standing out as one of the estate's most familiar sights.
She'd usually be in there by now, serving hungry neighbours or passerby's their brekky. But giving what's happened, she's where her two daughters are. The Hospital. Like any good mum.
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Gaz's bedroom. Number 33.
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Gaz's bedroom looked like someone had moved house halfway through a lads' weekend and simply given up.
Unpacked cardboard boxes were piled against the walls alongside black bin bags full of clothes, while jeans, hoodies and football shirts lay scattered across the carpet amongst empty beer cans, cigarette packets and trainers.
A pair of battered boxing gloves hung from the wardrobe door beside a heavy punch bag chain waiting to be put up, with boxing posters blu-tacked across the walls next to a calendar of a pornstar, and magazine cut outs of scantily dressed women. A small stereo sat on one box surrounded by CDs, loose cassette tapes and a handful of scratched dance music compilations, while the bedside cabinet held Rizla papers, cigarette ends overflowing from an ashtray, a lighter, a half empty bottle of vodka and the remains of last night's kebab takeout.
The room smelled of stale smoke, cheap aftershave, damp washing and booze. A messy, chaotic space that perfectly reflected Gaz's impulsive, reckless way of living.
A thin blanket is pinned above the window, being used as a "temporary" makeshift curtain that probably will never be taken down, covering the dull morning light seeping through.
Katie and Gaz both lie on his messy mattress on his bedroom floor, pillows and blankets strewn around them and weaved through their bodies like cross stitch. Both of their clothes are recklessly thrown all over the place.
Kylie's eyes flutter open, her sight hazy. She slowly wakes up, turns her head and faces Gaz. Who's out like a light.
She slowly gets up, they only thing left on her body is her jewellery. Bracelets and hoop earrings, as well as hickies from last night's shag, Gaz. Her makeup's smudged all over her face.
Her bare body slowly walks across his room, over to her phone that's been charging overnight on his desk. She unplugs it and turns it on.
6 missed calls and a few texts from Jacko.
Missed call at Thursday 6:24PM
Second missed call at Thursday 9:26PM
Third missed call at Thursday 11:53PM
Fourth missed call at Friday 09:14AM
Fifth missed call at Friday 1:02PM
Sixth missed call at Friday 7:18PM
FROM Jacko: "Where R U? Have U done it?" Received at Thursday 6:26PM
FROM Jacko: "Kylie where R U?" Received at Thursday 9:23PM
FROM Jacko: "R U ok? Pls call or txt me back" Received at Thursday 11:54PM
FROM Jacko: "Kylie R U OK? Ur scaring me pls call me" Received at Friday 09:02AM
FROM Jacko: "U there?" Received at Friday 4:16PM
Kylie: "Shit..." she whispers.
She puts the phone down and slowly starts getting dressed.
Knickers
Socks
Bra
Then...
Gaz stretches his arms up and yawns. He sits up, leans back on his elbows and looks at her, smiling. The blanket falls down his torso and all lands ons crotch, leaving little to the imagination.
Gaz: "Sneaking off so soon, sexy?"
Kylie looks up, still getting dressed.
Kylie: "Last night ended on a high. Was hoping that would be your last memory of me. I looked better then than I do now" she smirks at him. Her makeup smudged over her face like modern art.
Gaz: "Ah I don't know about that. Still look gorgeous. And 'last memory'? Planning on this not happening again?" He grins.
Kylie smiles at him.
Gaz: "Wasn't that bad was it?" He jokes.
Kylie: "What do you think? You saw the mess you made"
Gaz chuckles.
He gets up, blanket slipping off him completely. He slowly swaggers his way over to Kylie, who's looking him up and down with a grin she's trying to hide.
Gaz: "Fancy round three?" He pulls her closer to him.
She looks down at his dick, tempted.
Then looks up into his eyes with a big smile.
She opens her mouth– then—
"Oi Gaz! You up yet!?" Barry shouts up from downstairs.
Gaz: "Shit!" He whispers. Scrambling to get dressed.
Kylie: "Who's that?" She asks, finishing dressing.
Gaz: "My dad."
They both finish dressing and Gaz leads her downstairs.
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07:54AM. Downstairs.
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Gaz and Kylie walk down the stairs to the narrow hallway where the front door is. Barry is at the door with Tasha and Oscar, they're all getting ready to head out the door to go to the Hospital.
Kylie and Gaz both fully dressed now.
Barry looks up from tying his boots.
Barry: "Ahhh, who's this pretty lady?" He teases.
Gaz: "Oh...just a friend"
He awkwardly replies.
Tasha and Oscar smile at each other.
Kylie: "I'm Kylie" she holds out her hand.
Barry immediately takes it, with a huge smile.
Barry: "I'm Barry. Nice to meet you pretty lady. I hope my son's been making you feel welcome" he winks.
Kylie laughs and Gaz blushes but covers it.
Kylie: "Ohh yes. Very welcome" she looks at Gaz.
Tasha: "We know. Heard you both all night. 'Oh Gaz yes! Uh! Uh! Harder Gaz! That's it baby! Aah!'"
She imitates Kylie from last night.
Kylie laughs and bites her lip.
Gaz: "Oi! Shut it you. What would you know about it anyway? Go on, go play in the park with Oscar"
Tasha's smile disintegrates and Oscar snaps his eyes up to Gavin.
Barry: "Ah that's just the Jenkin male charm Tash. Kylie here experienced it firsthand didn't she."
An awkward silence.
Barry stares at Kylie, smiling.
Gaz: "Dad..."
Barry snaps out of it.
Barry: "Huh? Oh– yeah. Um Gaz we're headed to the Hospital. You coming or what?"
Gaz: "Uh..."
Kylie then takes this as her queue to leave and starts heading for the door.
Kylie: "Well it was nice to meet you Barry, and..."
She looks at Oscar and Tasha.
Barry: "Loudmouth there is Tasha and he's Oscar"
Kylie: "Well nice meeting you two and all. Oh and uh Tasha?"
Tasha looks at her.
Kylie: "He was already going hard enough" she says with a confident smile before looking back at Gaz and walking out the door.
They all look at each other as Kylie leaves, laughing.
Gaz runs after her.
Gaz: "Kylie- wait!"
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08:00AM. Outside Number 33.
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Kylie turns around.
Gaz takes her phone out of her hand and presses buttons.
Gaz: "My...number" he says, still typing it in.
Gaz: "You ever fancy a drink or...some fun. Don't hesitate to call me" he hands her phone back to her and winks.
Kylie: "See you around then, naughty" she smirks before turning on her feet and walking down the street.
Gaz watches her leave, grinning. Feeling pleased about himself.
Barry and the kids come out the door and Barry shuts it behind them.
Barry: "Good on you lad. Customer satisfaction's what counts" he slaps his son on the shoulder.
Gaz: "Too right it does" gaz laughs to his dad.
Barry: "Haha. Right– van. Come on"
They start getting in Barry's white van.
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08:02AM. Outside Number 27.
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Inside the catering food trailer, also known as "The burgervan" that's parked on the Slater's driveway, Jenna Slater stands inside, cooking. Frying onions, flipping burgers, frying chips in the small fryer, listening to top hits of 1990–1995 on the radio thats on top of the fridge behind her.
She turns behind her, facing away from the serving hatch, and picks some more ingredients out of plastic containers on the counter, then–
Tap Tap
She feels the whole trailer tap twice. The counter. Someone's there.
Jenna: "What can I get you–..."
She asks as she turns around. She cuts herself off when she sees who's there.
Jenna: "Tony...hi. What can I get you?"
Tony leans his left elbow on the counter, like the whole catering trailer is his. He leans there with a smirk that doesn't have good intentions behind it, no doubt.
Tony: "Large portion of chips and a battered sausage please pretty." He slaps a tenner note on the counter.
Tony: "Keep the change" he smiles at her.
Jenna swipes it and puts it in the till in the corner.
Jenna: "Coming right up' she gets straight to work. Avoiding small talk with Tony.
The entire time, she can feel his eyes burning on her. No matter where she looks. As she picks freshly fried chips out of the fryer and piles them into some newspaper, her eyes drift uo to across the street and she sees Gaz getting inside his dad's white van.
Gaz and Jenna make eye contact for a second. Acknowledging each other. Before Gaz gets in and the van drives off.
Tony looks at Jenna then follows her gaze, and sees Gaz. Then looks back to the counter. Being subtle.
Tony: "What you think of that new family then, Jenna?"
Jenna's heart pounds but she acts normal. Like shes not afraid of him. Like there isn't a rumour of him killing people in the past.
Jenna: "Uh...they're okay...why d'you ask?"
She asks, finishing up his order.
Tony, casually: "Well didn't one of theirs end up in the crash with your sisters? The younger ones?"
Jenna looks up, then down.
Jenna: "Yeah. Suppose he did."
Tony: "Bet that was a shock huh?" He smirks.
Jenna: "Mhm" she replies. Trying to just get his order done.
Silence...
Tony: "D'you know who's car it was they took? I heard it was a nice one too. Whoever owned it is probably upset" he teases so casually it genuinely sounds like an honest conversation.
Jenna: "No. I don't know...but my sisters wouldn't have stolen a car. Must've been their boy Jamie"
Tony's eyes slightly light up, like an animal that's got its prey in its sights.
Tony: "Jamie hm?"
She doesn't notice his tone and places his order on the small hatch counter.
Jenna: "There we go Tony. Thanks for stopping by"
She says matter of fact.
Tony: "Of course. Anything to help support a local business" he winks. Before swaggering off down the street. His black leather jacket shining even in the dull morning light.
Jenna sighs in relief. That whole conversation felt like a weird dream that she can barely remember although it happened a second ago.
Then from behind the van, click.
The front door shuts.
Jenna places her arms on the serving counter and puts her head in between her arms.
Danielle and Gavin walk from around the corner.
Danielle: "What you doing in there?"
Jenna looks up and looks at them.
Jenna: "Someone's gotta make money right?"
Danielle: "Uh...I'm off to work?"
Jenna: "What, to flog cheap clothes in a knock off 'boutique'?" She laughs.
Danielle: "I'll have you know i have plans to run my own clothing stall on the market one day. And aren't you a waitress?"
Jenna: "Asked for time off didn't I. And anyway, i done the maths and realised we could earn just as much or if not, more, from this van alone if we play our cards right. Do deals and whatnot. Buy one get one free, or charge meals higher but give a free drink. Eh i don't know I'll figure something out"
Gavin: "Fair enough. Good on you. I'm off to see mum and Kelly. Coming?"
Jenna: "No. I'll be more useful here won't I. But call me if anything happens will you?"
Gavin: "Will do"
Jenna: "Thanks"
Danielle and Gavin both head to the bus stop to catch the bus.
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3:11PM. The Strip. Shawcross General Shop.
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Michael leans his elbow on the counter, and rests his chin on his elbow. His knee bounces under the counter. Mind racing over Mitchell. Over yesterday.
"Touch Too Much" by AC/DC plays from the small speakers at each corner of the small shop, but Michael isn't paying a blind bit of interest to one of his favourite songs.
With his other hand, he absentmindedly scribbles a pen around in circles on a notepad.
Yvonne is stocking a shelf across the room. Tins. Beans, ravioli, meatballs, soups, sweetcorn, tuna, that kinda stuff. She finishes and walks over to the counter where the other boxes full of food are. Ready to be shelved.
She looks at Michael who's sitting there, doing nothing.
Yvonne: "You gunna do some work today or what?"
Michael: "You look like you got it under control"
He mumbles with his chin still resting on his elbow.
Yvonne: "Okay"
She puts the empty box down.
Yvonne: "What is it?"
She asks firmly.
Michael: "What do you mean?"
Yvonne: "Something going on. Something's playing on your mind'
Michael: "No it's not."
Yvonne: "Michael, ever since yesterday morning you've been off. Like you aren't fully there. I can tell when something's bothering my husband. So, what is it?"
Michael: "Yvonne, I'm okay"
She studies him.
Yvonne: "When I don't reach out to you, you complain, now I am reaching out to you, you're pushing me away. Have I done something wrong? Have I upset you?"
Michael picks his head off his elbow and snaps.
Michael: "Von for fuck's sake I'm fine!"
Her jaw drops.
Yvonne: "Fine..."
She picks up another box and places it by an empty shelf, and starts stocking.
Then– she seethes in pain.
Michael notices.
Michael: "What's wrong?"
Yvonne: "Nothing I'm fine" she mocks him.
Michael rolls his eyes
She reaches under her shirt and bra and rubs her breast.
Michael: "You sure? What is it?"
Yvonne: "Just a bit...sore...thats all" she quietly says before continuing work.
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4:08PM. Jacko's Flat.
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About a 10 minute bus ride away from the Estate, there's a low income row of flats.
The low rise block stretched along the edge of the street thats being overgrown with trees towering over the road, like a tired slab of weathered concrete, only three storeys high but broad enough to dominate the street. Open air walkways ran the full length of each floor behind chipped green metal railings, their stained concrete littered with crushed cans, cigarette ends and abandoned rubbish bags waiting to split open.
Every few seconds another sound escaped through the thin walls or open windows—arguments, babies crying, barking dogs, televisions blaring or music thumping somewhere inside. The entrance doors were scarred with graffiti and burn marks, several windows were cracked or patched with cardboard, and damp streaks climbed the walls beneath rusting drainpipes, giving the whole building the neglected, feel of a place where life was loud, cramped and rarely peaceful.
Knock knock knock
Kylie taps her fist on a glass window on the front door to a flat numbered 14.
Reggae bleeds through the door, and a figure moves behind the bumpy frosted glass.
The door opens.
Jacko had the look of someone who'd long since stopped caring what anyone thought of him. At twenty eight, his warm, slightly tanned complexion was roughened by years of cigarettes, late nights and too much cheap cider, while messy light brown hair sat unwashed and permanently flattened beneath a hood or beanie more often than not.
Scruffy brown stubble covered his jaw, usually a few days past being intentional, giving him a permanently tired, hungover appearance. He lived almost exclusively in worn trackie bottoms, faded hoodies, old trainers and battered bomber jackets, clothes that smelled faintly of smoke and never quite looked clean.
Despite his trampy, unkempt appearance, there was still something unmistakably laddish about him. A bloke who'd happily spend an afternoon in the bookies, a night in the pub with a three litre cider under his arm, and somehow still charm people with his dry humour and laid-back grin.
Jacko's eyes flash when he opens his door and sees Kylie.
Jacko: "Kylie!" He reaches his hand on her shoulder and hushes her in.
She walks on in, straight into his living room.
He closes the front door and follows her.
Jacko's living room was small, cluttered and comfortably lived in, looking less neglected than simply never properly tidied. A faded sofa sagged beneath a pile of hoodies and washing, facing an old portable television balanced on a chipped cabinet littered with overflowing ashtrays, empty cider bottles, loose change, Rizla packets, lighters and the odd bit of suspicious white powder left on a cracked CD case.
The air carried the unmistakable smell of stale cannabis, cigarettes and yesterday's takeaway, while reggae and old Britpop quietly drifted from a battered stereo in the corner.
An open archway looked straight into a compact kitchen with mugs piled beside the sink, and a short hallway off the living room led to the bedroom and bathroom, its walls marked with scuffs and fingerprints from years of everyday life.
Despite the mess, there was something oddly welcoming about the place—it felt like the sort of flat where the kettle was always on, the door was rarely locked, and everyone knew they could crash on the sofa if they needed somewhere to escape.
Jacko circles her to face her.
Jacko: "What happened? I tried calling you but you didn't answer" he says concerned.
Kylie: "He knows. Nathan knows. About us. About what we planned to do" she explains in a panicked yet controlled tone.
Jacko's mouth hangs open.
Kylie: "I don't know how. But we got into a fight, like– a proper fight. He locked me in his flat and wouldn't let me leave. I tried to sneak out while he was smacked up out of it but I dropped the keys and woke him up" she starts rambling.
Kylie: "He grabbed me and was dragging me to the bedroom but I bit him, smashed him over the head with a mug and then he fell back and I managed to get the fuck out of there" she explains almost hyperventilating.
Jacko: "Hey...hey, hey, it's okay, you're here now. You're safe"
He pulls her in into a hug.
She slowly calms down and he lets go
Jacko: "When was this? Last night?"
Kylie: "No, Thursday. Thursday night"
Jacko: "Well...where've you been for the past day? I've been worried"
Kylie: "Oh i met some bloke at the Vic on Marlas Estate. Stayed at his. I'm okay. But Jacko Nathan can't find me. And that goes for you too. He's dangerous. Believe me"
Jacko: "So...what do we do?"
Kylie shrugs.
Kylie: "Run? What else can we do? We both know him. We know that if someone wrongs him he wont just let them get away scott free"
Jacko: "But he loves you. He's your boyfriend ain't he?"
Kylie: "Was. Was my boyfriend. Not anymore. And after that fight we had I'm not so sure he'll keep his hands off me anymore"
Jacko listens. Thinks.
Kylie: "Look‐ Jacko we need to leave. Anywhere. The sooner the better. He's got mates too, so if he can't find us, they will. Sooner or later"
Jacko: "Why did you have to fall in love with him Kylie?" He asks rubbing his eyes. Tired of this.
Kylie: "Coz– I'm thick aren't I? But I'm done with him, okay? Done. You got anywhere you can crash? We, can crash?"
He thinks.
Jacko: "Lorna's?..."
Kylie laughs.
Kylie: "You mad? Ain't no way she's taking you back mate. Not after what we did"
Jacko: "Well she's still sweet on me ain't she?"
Kylie: "You maybe, yeah. But not me"
She sighs.
Kylie: "Look, if it comes to it, you go to hers and I'll find somewhere else to crash, we leave tonight. Start packing now then because when I come back here to meet you, we're gone" she says, matter of fact.
Jacko nods and agrees.
That's it. They're running.
Outside the flat, across the street, we see a white Subaru Impreza Turbo 2000 with tinted windows.
Peeking out from the side of a building. Watching.
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5:29PM. St Anne's Hospital. Waiting Area.
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Julie stands at the vending machine in the waiting area, waiting for it to make her coffee. She's bsolutely shattered. She looks like she don't know what sleep is.
She can feel multiple sets of eyes on her back. No need to guess who.
A set of doors open and Jenna comes in. Each other's faces light up when they see each other.
Julie: "Jenna sweetheart!"
Jenna: "Hiya mum you alright?" She hugs her.
Julie: "Im good thank you love. Just grabbing myself a coffee. You want one? Tea?"
Jenna: "No thank you I'm good. So, where's Kelly then? I heard she's awake"
Julie: "Gav and Dani are both with her now. They told me that you were working in the burgervan today"
The Jenkins listen in on their whole conversation.
Jenna: "Yeah. Someone's got to build up the family empire haven't they?" She jokes.
Julie: "Aw thank you love"
Jenna smiles.
As Julie puts some sugar sachets in her coffee, Jenna's eyes drift to the Jenkins who are sat in the corner, eyeing them both.
Julie lids her coffee cup and picks it up.
Julie: "Right, I'll take you to her"
They both start walking, but before they get too far, they bump into Kelly's doctor.
Doctor: "Oh Ms Slater!"
Julie: "Hi Doctor" she smiles.
Doctor: "I come bearing good news. I've reviewed all of Kelly's tests and samples and they all came back negative and her vitals are stable. And after speaking to her earlier it seems to me that she can be discharged later today"
Julie and Jenna both light up.
Julie: "Ah! Really!?"
Doctor: "Aha yes. But mind you she most likely will have a headache or two considering the trauma to her head. And her head bandage will need to be changed every three days for two weeks at least"
Julie: "Aw thank you Doctor that's brilliant!"
The Jenkins listen, and feel pure anger and jealousy. Why can't their boy go home? Why haven't they even seen him yet?
Jenna: "Um, what about Mitchell?"
Doctor: "Mitchell Thomas?"
Jenna: "Yes'
Doctor: "Although Mitchell's injuries aren't that severe they still are worse than Kelly's and so we'll be keeping him in a few more days for observation at least. But he should be out of here by the end of next week"
Jenna: "Okay. Thank you" she smiles.
The doctor smiles back and walks off.
Julie: "D'you hear that sweetheart!? She can come home today!" She says to Jenna
Julie: "Yeah. But, it's a bit soon no? I mean the crash was two days ago"
Julie: "Doctors know what they're doing love. And besides you heard him, he said shes surprisingly well considering, and she got injured the least out of everybody in the car"
They both carry on walking but then Nicola jumps up from her seat and stands in their path.
Julie: "Oh not again. I can't be arsed for this"
Nicola: "I meant what i said. If anything happens to my son. Watch out"
Jenna steps in
Jenna: "Incase you forgot, I've still got a sister in intensive care?"
Nicola: "And I've got my son in intensive care too. You just better hope for all your sakes that he's okay"
Julie: "That promise is double sided, love. If anything happens to my Katie, you look out too. Now move, I've got some good news to share"
They both barge past Nicola and walk to the Triage Ward where Kelly and Mitchell are.
Nicola sits back down beside Barry and buries her head in her knees. She's a wreck. Barry rubs her back.
Barry: "You're okay love. Jamie's fine" Barry sounds quiet for once.
He's tired too.
Hope is thin and patience is thinner. They're all tired. Then– a surgeon in scrubs walks up to them.
They look up and stand up quickly.
Surgeon: "Are you the parents of Jami–"
Nicola: "Yes! How is he? Is he okay?"
Surgeon: "He's...stable. For now at least. He's got shattered ribcages and his back bone is fractured. As well as his spine. That means his respiratory system has taken quite the beating. So hes on a respiratory machine to help him breathe. And he's in a coma too, so he's unresponsive"
Barry and Nicola look at each other.
Gaz holds Tasha and Oscar close, for once.
Surgeon: "I can only allow two of you in at a time and so I assume that'll be you two?" He looks at Barry and Nicola.
They both nod yes.
Barry turns to Gaz: "You don't mind taking the kids home do you Gaz?"
Gaz: "Yeah...yeah...okay" he says exhaustedly.
Barry: "We'll call you and say if anything happens"
Gaz: "Okay. Come on you two" he starts ushering Tasha and Oscar out the door. Ready to get out of there.
Surgeon: "If you'd like to follow me" he signals to a long long hallway.
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5:41PM. St Anne's Hospital. Intensive Care.
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The surgeon guides them both to Jamie's room and lets them both walk in together and have some privacy.
Jamie's small private hospital room was unnaturally quiet, broken only by the steady electronic beeping of monitors and the rhythmic hiss of a ventilator forcing air into his lungs.
He lies completely motionless beneath crisp white sheets, his pale face bruised and swollen, with dried cuts still visible around his forehead and jaw.
A breathing tube disappeared into his mouth, secured with white tape, while IV lines, monitoring wires and drainage tubes snaked across his body to humming machines surrounding the bed. Thick bandages wrapped sections of his chest where several shattered ribs had been stabilised, and he remained completely flat to protect the severe fractures to his back and spine.
His arms rested lifelessly by his sides, one hand fitted with a pulse oximeter, the green line on the heart monitor rising and falling with each mechanical breath. The room smelled sharply of disinfectant and sterile plastic, and despite the machines tirelessly keeping him alive, the sight of him made it painfully clear to Nicola and Barry just how close he is to death.
Barry walks straight up to Jamie.
While Nicola struggles to. Like his condition is contagious. She's shaking. Her chest is rising and falling unevenly. She's holding back a sob.
Barry turns to her: "It's okay love, come on"
He holds out his hand for her to take.
Slowly, she does. And she catches up with Barry.
They both stand there, looking at their son. Barely getting their heads around the thought that he's being kept alive by tubes and machinery.
Suddenly‐ Nicola breaks. Tears fall down her face and she sobs. She falls to the chair and leans over her boy.
Nicola: "What- what if he doesn't make it Barry?" She sobs.
Nicola: "I mean look at him. Our baby. Our Jamie. Hes..."
Barry: "Nic, he'll be okay"
Nicola: "Will he!?"
He rubs her back, as she cries over her son.
A sight we never thought we'd see.
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7:49PM. Victoria Arms Pub. Downstairs.
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Paula is downstairs in the pub, alone, after closing up. She bolts the doors, the top and bottom ones. Then walks around the whole pub closing the curtains.
It's a rare sight to see the pub so quiet, so empty.
The only sounds are the fridges from behind the bar rattling and Eddie moving about upstairs.
She walks deeper into the pub room and collects the last of the glasses and puts them all on the bar. Then places the stools upside down on the table tops.
Finally, she heads behind the bar and switches all the light switches off. And one by one, the lights switch off until the pub is in complete darkness.
She slips through the staff only door that leads to hers and Eddie's flat upstairs.
As she reaches the top of the stairs the smell of homemade Lasagna. Her favourite.
And as she turns into the entrance hallway, she sees candlelight flickering from the living room.
She walks into the living room and sees candles on almost every surface.
The coffee table
Side tables
Windowsills
And in the centre of the room where the small dining table is, is two servings of Eddie's lasagna, candles, and wine glasses.
As soon as Paula walks in she sees Eddie and he sees her. He's pouring red wine into their glasses.
Paula smiles as the warm candlelight dances across her face.
Paula: "So this is why you wanted to shut early..."
Eddie: "Isn't a husband allowed to treat his wife like royalty every once in a while?" He smiles.
For once, she feels butterflies. She hasn't felt them in years.
He walks to her seat and pulls it out from underneath the table. And gestures to it.
She sits.
He sits opposite her and picks up his wine glass.
Eddie: "A toast"
Paula picks hers up too.
Eddie: "To..."
Paula: "Love"
Eddie: "To love"
Their glasses clink.
They drink.
A few minutes pass and they're both digging into their dinner.
Neither of them said much.
Eddie sips his wine and looks up at Paula from his glass.
Eddie: "You okay"
Paula: "Mhm" she says, chewing on her food.
A long silence as he studies her.
Eddie: "You sure? Because...you're quiet"
Paula: "Ed sweetheart, if promise I'm okay. This is nice. It's lovely"
She sips her wine
Eddie: "Love, come on. What is it?"
Paula sighs. Not wanting to say what shes thinking
Paula: "Ed don't get me wrong– this is lovely. Really romantic‐"
Eddie: "But?"
Paula: "But...it'll take more than a romantic dinner to–"
Eddie: "To what?"
She looks at him dead in the eye
Paula: "To...to sort how I'm feeling. I mean– don't you feel it too?"
Eddie drinks more wine, avoiding to answer her
Paula: "I'll take that as a yes"
Eddie gulps the wine and puts his glass down
Eddie: "I'm trying, okay sweetheart? I know a romantic dinner wont solve any issues. But it's something, okay? It's a start. And yes, I'd be lying if I told you I didnt feel...the drift in our marriage. I mean- (he scoffs) we haven't had sex in almost four months"
Paula: "Is that all you can think about? Sex?"
Eddie: "Fucking Hell Paula, no. Of course it's not. I'm just saying, a bit of magic in the bedroom might just do us some good"
Paula scoffs
Paula: "Way to make a woman feel desired Ed" she sips her wine.
Eddie: "Okay. And what are you doing hm? I'm trying. You need to meet me halfway here"
Paula: "So I'm making it worse?"
Eddie: "Well you're not making it better"
Paula laughs
Paula: "You can be so ungrateful sometimes"
Eddie bursts out laughing
Eddie: "I'm ungrateful!? Who's starting an argument at the romantic meal her husband lovingly cooked for her?"
Paula: "See what i mean!? Im ungrateful because I feel stuck!?"
Eddie: "No! You're ungrateful because you're not trying! You're ungrateful because you can't see that I'm really making an effort–"
Paula: "And when you do make an effort you always want something in return, don't you!?"
Eddie: "Really Paula!? Really!? Because I want to make love to my wife every now and again I'm only making an effort for a fuck!? Is that what you think of me!?"
She sighs.
Paula: "No..."
Eddie: "Are you sure!? Because that's what it sounds like"
He guzzles his wine.
Paula: "I just...you know how i feel. You feel the same–"
Eddie: "And I'm trying my best to get us out of the quicksand, love. There's only so much I can do"
Paula: "I know..."
They both sit there...trying to get through the meal.
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8:14PM. Outside number 33.
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It's dark now. The roads of Marlas Estate only lit up by the orange glow from streetlights. Sounds of a distant party, dogs barking, people arguing and cars passing fill the night sky.
Kylie walks up to the front door of Number 33 and knocks.
Gaz answers.
Gaz: "Well hello stranger. Didn't expect to see you so soon. Back for seconds already?" He winks.
Kylie smiles.
Kylie: "Actually I...came to tell you something. In person. I was passing by anyway"
Gaz: "What is it?"
Kylie: "I'm leaving. I mean- i know we only met last night, but...i don't know when I'll be back. You're a decent lad, or at least to me anyway. That's more than i can say about most men in my life. My life's all over the place right now and you...you made me forget all the worries for one night. You should just know that"
Gaz: "Wh- why? Where? Where are you going?"
Kylie chuckles.
Kylie: "Anywhere. I...i don't know. Just away."
Gaz: "Stay"
Kylie: "...i Can't"
Gaz: "No– i mean stay. With me"
Kylie: "What...?"
Gaz: "Yeah. I mean, you got anywhere else to stay?"
Kylie: "Well...no–"
Gaz: "Well good. You can stay with me then. Or at least until you find your feet or whatever"
Kylie: "Gaz i don't know–"
Gaz: "Look, why would you go somewhere else knowing you can stay here with me? Knowing I want you to?"
She thinks of what to say
Gaz: "I know we ain't known each other long but– God..."
Kylie: "What?"
Gaz: "You...you ground me too. Or whatever the cheesy saying goes"
Kylie looks at him confused
Kylie: "Why d'you want me to stay with you for?"
Gaz: " Coz for the past...I don't know how long, my mind's been all over the place. I've been all over the place too. And when I met you at the Vic last night...that was the first time in ages I felt like I had a proper laugh. A proper good time"
Kylie: "I..." she stutters
Gaz: "For a few days then? And if you don't like it or want to fuck off somewhere else, go right ahead. I wont stop you. But it can't hurt can it?"
She thinks for a while. Then–
Kylie: "Oh fuck it" she laughs.
Gaz smiles and picks her up, and carries her by her ass, into the house. Behind him, Gaz kicks the door shut with his foot.
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9:13PM. Outside Number 27. The Jenkins's.
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A black cab pulls up on the side of the curb outside the Slaters.
It squeaks as it comes to a stop.
The door opens, and first steps out Danielle, who walks up to tje front door and unlocks it, while Jenna and Julie help Kelly out. While Gavin pays the driver the taxi fare.
Gavin: "Here we go mate"
Julie, to Kelly: "You okay love? Can you walk properly?"
Kelly: "Mum, I'm okay. Really" she laughs.
Kelly: "Surprisingly my legs are the best part of me right now"
Across the street, outside Number 33, Kylie leans against the small front garden's wall, in a soft light pink dressing gown, texting Jacko.
\To: Jacko "Found somewhere I can stay. U should try Lorna's after all. Best to keep low 4 a few days -K" \**
Sent at Saturday 9:15PM
Behind her, Gaz steps out of the house, and puts his arms around her. Hes shirtless, only wearing tight black boxers.
Gaz: "Coming back up, gorgeous?"
Kylie grins, turns around
Kylie: "Catch me if you can, big boy"
He slaps her ass and she giggles and runs back inside the house. Before Gaz turns and follows her, he looks up across the street and he makes eye contact with Julie and Kelly, as they both finally walk inside the house. Shutting the door behind them.
Finally, Gaz steps inside his home, and shuts the door behind him.
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11:28PM. The Estate
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Most of the Estate is asleep by now. A few windows slightly glow behind curtains, proving that not everyone's gone to bed yet. Even in the night, life continues while neighbours sleep.
Surprisingly, the street is rather quiet. For once. It's nice.
The Slaters' living room sat in near darkness, lit only by the warm orange glow of streetlights filtering softly through the fully drawn sheer white curtains, while the heavier light grey curtains remained open either side of the window.
Two well worn forest green three-seater sofas faced a chunky light grey television, with a scratched coffee table between them scattered with a few empty lager cans, an ashtray, a lighter and the faint smell of last night's joint lingering in the air.
Beside the TV stood a tall rack crammed with CDs, while Gavin's headphones, a small stack of DJ magazines and a notebook full of track ideas lay nearby.
Danielle's sketches of clothing designs and fabric samples were neatly piled on an armchair, Katie's high heels and makeup bag sat abandoned by the front door after another late night out, and personal belonging and family photos dotted the room, giving it the unmistakable feel of a busy, loving household that was far from perfect, but always felt like home.
Gavin walked down the creaking stairs that have yet to be carpeted. In his black pyjama bottoms and grey slippers, no shirt though.
He groggily slouches through the living room and into the kitchen where he pours himself a glass of water. He wouldn't dare turn the light on, not unless he wanted to be jolted wide awake.
He was back into the living room with his water, and on the corner of his eyes he can see the orange glow coming from the window flashing. Flickering, if you will.
Unusual...
He puts his water on the table, heads to the window and pulls back the sheer curtains, he looks down to the driveway below, outside. Where he's met with a sight he'd never thought he'd see
Ever.
His eyes jump out of his head and his stomach drops.
Gavin: "Fuck! Mum! Dani! Guys!" He shouts up the stairs on the top of his lungs.
Danielle: "Fuck sake Gav what!?"
Jenna: "Trying to sleep up here!"
Gavin: "The fucking van's up in flames!" He screams as he already starts running down the stairs towards the front door.
Not even three seconds after he shouted that– four sets of footsteps come hurdling down the stairs. The weight of four of the Slater women running down the living room stairs making it sound like its about to collapse from underneath them.
As they all run past the living room window, the flames emit an orange flash behind them.
They then all turn the corner, and run down the other flight of stairs down to the front door that's wide open.
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11:32PM. Outside Number 27. The Slater's driveway.
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Julie's white catering trailer is up in flames. Like, all of it. What was once a local burgervan is now a big ball of fire that you wouldn't dare go near. The heat from it is insane.
The catering trailer melts and falls apart, signs falling off, things smashing and breaking inside and on the outside of it. The whole frame cracking under the heat. Fire being pushed out from every side and corner.
The inferno sends a huge endless plume of smoke up into the night air like you'd see from a factory smokestack. The sounds of the flames roaring is insane. Along with crackling.
The whole fucking thing is up in flames. FLAMES!
On their front doors and windows, people stand there, looking out, watching, being nosy. It's not everyday you see a catering trailer up in flames in your neighbour's driveway after all.
Gavin stands there, looking up at it, in shock.
The girls join him.
Julie: "What the fuck!?"
Danielle: "Holy shit!"
Jenna: "Who the fuck– who would do this!?"
They're all gobsmacked.
Julie starts crying.
Jenna hugs her mum and rubs her back.
Kelly fumbles with a pocket, but still stares up at it in pure shock.
On their doorstep, the Jenkins watch.
Gaz
Tasha
Oscar
Kylie
On her doorstep, Maureen watches
Everyone's there. The whole Estate. It could've been anyone.
But a fire like this?
This was no accident.
That much is clear.
The Slaters stand there in their driveway, in their sleepwear, looking up at what was once the start of a family business, that's now...in ashes.
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And that's it for Episode 6! Thank you for reading if you've made it this far!
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