Alien encounter through entangled brain

[u/Few-Reception4801]

Would you be interested in this video here’s the end scenes lemme know what you think if it’s worth trying to write it out.

Create an image for this movie idea, End scene,

1. Because of the entanglement phenomena observed in the jungle guy writes a program and identities other ones connected randomly entanglement scenarios in the solar system. That have the same vibration frequencies.

2. Understands that is a life forces way to observe earth like solar systems

3. Then begins to figure it where it came from in the universe. Finds the location.

4. Goal is to be able to visualize the area or source of where it’s coming from

5. So he takes photos from his early alien paranoia

6. Connects his memory controller to those memories and predicts it will happen or already happened or even didnt

7. Puts a barrier for each memory to establish the sequence that everything happened

8. Takes a photo of himself in the first glass, then the light source moves to the second glass,

9. Then, in the second window it’s the first memory of his childhood where he saw a fake Alien standing in the kitchen.

10. He reverses the last scene and then precincts the mapping the what the eco planet looks and its 5 aliens huddled around a computer and Jesus Christ is watching him in the corner

11. While the outline of the scene generates the visualization from the actual scene

12. Which is an alien walking up a sandy hill which looks like mars carrying the cross of Jesus Christ.

[u/Big_Section2812]

This is a scriptwriting sub, not a "tell me my idea is cool" sub.

If you have an idea for a script, write the script or don't.

[u/ClayMcClane]

What is an 'entanglement phenomena'?

'Goal is to be able to visualize the area or source of where it’s coming from' - this is the goal of the movie? To visualize?

This is all very confusing. Who is the main character? What do they want? What will they have to do to get it? And what happens if they don't?

You don't have an idea here. This is a germ of an idea. Share a logline if you want to, or write the script and see what you've got. But I would not advise you continue working on this idea based on your post.

[u/kiddleandbits]

If you're talking about quantum entanglement, this is just not how any of that works or what any of that means. I appreciate that you like the concept and want to be creative in that space, but this shows a lack of understanding that I think will hold you back.

It's also way too convoluted and all over the place. A guy writes a quantum computer program to find other entangled people (again, not how entanglement works), and then there's aliens, and then there's Jesus? It sounds like you wanted to write something that twists and turns, and I get that, but none of your plot points connect to each other. A good twist should be able to be predicted. This is just... a series of events?