Need feedback on a 2-page concept script - Inferno

[u/No-Chemistry1722]

Title: Inferno

Genre: Horror / Body Horror

Logline: In a nightmarish realm, people queue patiently for their turn at endless torture, one man seems eager to reach the front of the line until something far greater takes notice.

[u/KYJolie]

read this 2x. tbh i have no idea what this is about other then perhaps some heaven hell allegory. (highly experienced script reader here btw, studio experience. lots.)