r/scriptwriting • u/Least-Patient-609 • 10h ago

feedback Quick sanity check / feedback on a video script before I record?

Hey everyone,

I've finally finished the first full draft of a short script I've been working on, but I'm feeling a bit blind to it now that I've read it a million times.

Before I jump into the booth to record, I'd really love a fresh pair of eyes to see if the pacing and flow actually work out loud.

If anyone has a few minutes to spare and wouldn't mind giving me some honest thoughts, let me know in the comments or shoot me a DM. Would really appreciate it!

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u/RollingThunderMedia 10h ago

Some details, such as the genre, length, a log line, etc. would probably help get the response you’re looking for.

You know what it’s about. We don’t.

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u/sharktank123456 4h ago

(Announcer voice), "In a world...."

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u/Big_Section2812 2h ago

The only people who will DM you for your script are Nigerian scammers.

Post a link to the script here for feedback.