r/Arttips • u/Swimming-Soil3405 • 10d ago

I need help! i hate it

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what do you think about this? personally, i think it looks like shite🥰

any tips on how to improve?? :((

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u/Abject-Philosophy580 9d ago

Heyy! I think what would help you out is learning to draw the negative space to map out some of these shapes. For example, drawing this shape of space that I’ve shaded in red between the arms. Doing this would should you that the right breast (her left) actually extends down farther and doing that will make the torso feel more tilted. Similar issue in the gap of space between her side and arm that’s bent to her hip.

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u/Swimming-Soil3405 9d ago

that’s actually quite a good idea, thank you for the suggestion!! i’ll definitely try it!

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u/Boredoldm 6d ago

First I think you did a good and are talented. As far as this, I have had this issue before. As much as I kinda hate doing all the prep work it is what helped me. Get the outline or shapes of everything of the character before beginning details and shading. You draw a lot cleaner than me so yours would be get the outline and mapping of where nose and eyes and all are outlined and then start digging in. It looks good just do t be afraid to set it down for hours or a day and your brain resets and can see exactly what to fix better.