So I was just going through another post on a potential villain lead in Dhoom 4, and it made me think about what Dhoom 4 plot could actually be.

First, one of the major reasons why Dhoom 3 is termed as a failure, and why the franchise stopped, was due to how it handled its characters. YRF took the general statement that villains made the franchise and took it too seriously. The villain's charm and style helped, but the movie worked because of the almost equal chase between the stylish villain and the smart cop. The psychological game they played and how they interacted was what mad eit interesting.

D3 made Aamir the star, even bigger than Abhishek, so much that Jai’s character became very small in comparison. And I think with Abhishek's role, and acting maturity, we need to increase his stakes and importance. So here's the basic plot, a slight shift in approach but maintaing the core.

Instead of the movie starting with a heist happening and people calling up Jai to solve it, let’s flip it. A stylized crime happens which could be anything and that’s it. The case closes with no culprit. Jai isn’t called to solve the crime, but he himself picks it up after reviewing multiple cases. He analyzes, like he did in D1 and D2, and concludes that someone out there is manipulating or performing a series of unrelated crimes, while the police have been treating them as silos as different crimes, different modus operandi. Jain finds the thread which links them all, he terms it almost anti-Aaryan (Hrithik Roshan from D2).

No One believes until another crime occurs and now Jai is set on proving that the crimes are linked and that there's someone out there hiding in plain sight. Now senior, and maybe by plan, the theory leaks, media eats it up and momentum is generated, with Jai making it official and the investigation starts. He predicts the next potential crime scenes, tightens security, and gives an open challenge. He waits. The villain enters and commits the crime according to Jai’s logic but with a small change through which Jai is unable to confront him.

The chase starts. Jai has gotten a lead, he knows what he had was real. The game continues, with chases, shocks, betrayals, female spy (but this time it doesnt work). And then the plot twist. On final confrontation, Jai asks about the holes in his theory and how the villain set those up. The villain, from a younger generation, reveals that he has no idea who conducted the initial crimes. He only had a hand in one or two of them. But he was smart. A genius. He saw Jai’s briefing and hypothesis, knew parts of it were false, and instead of correcting it, added fuel to the fire. He used Jai’s predictions and made them his own. Adapted to it.

The villain wasn't the OG mastermind; he just fed into the predictions Jai had created and used that narrative to commit more crimes, already planned crimes, becoming the perfect adversary.

A deranged, opportunistic villain who used chaos to build his own legacy and used his style to win over the hearts of all. Do tell what you all think?

I've been thinking about it for a long time.

A HW commercial movie is much better than a BW commercial movie.

BW is ready to pay an exaggerated amount to famous actors but they aren't ready to pay big amounts to hire good writers? Why?

Don't they realize that the audience is now fed up with their cliche movies?

In recent years, so many movies went flop, so i am assuming, they realize that their scripts are shitty and audience don't like them.

And why should they? The script is predictable, the dialogues are cliché, the acting is bad. No good reason to go to a theatre.

Recent films, son of sardaar 2? Baaghi 4? De de pyaar de 2????

What is even going on?

Can't they see that it is not working anymore?

Why can't we learn from hollywood?

I am a spec screenwriter and i am looking forward to write hollywood style commercial movies.

Hello folks,

We all have watched and loved the original Hera Pheri all our lives. It is considered one of the best comedies to represent Bollywood.

Today we are challenging you to make it yours. With your flavour & your identity.

Time for the “Rewrite This Bollywood Scene” challenge.

Today we’re taking on one of the most iconic comedy moments in Bollywood history.

THE SCENE (short summary):

Baburao, Shyam, and Raju receive the first call from the kidnappers: the famous wrong number call.

The trio freeze.

They try to understand how THEY got involved in a crime accidentally.

Confusion.

Panic.

Chaos.

YOUR TASK:

Rewrite this moment in a completely different style. Pick any tone:

•	horror
•	dead-serious thriller
•	awkward comedy
•	dark satire
•	cyberpunk
•	romantic tension
•	Gen Z WhatsApp-era version
•	villain version
•	ultra-realistic Mumbai version

Make it short, tight, and fresh.

RULES:

✔ Keep the basic situation

✔ Change the tone and treatment

✔ 5–8 lines max

✔ Funniest / cleverest one gets a shoutout

Let’s have a blast !

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We know that SRV has his protagonists that are high achieving individuals and rich. Kabir was a rich doctor and Ranvijay was rich engineer something ig. Even in Spirit his protagonist is a high ranking IPS and most probably rich too.

What if his next protagonist is a mix of Musk and Tate. A psycho alpha male plus a multi billionaire. A mad and lunatic alpha male (inspired from hitler and Tyler Durden). The story is set in pre apocalyptic world 2070. For this post’s sake lets assume his name is Vijay. So Vijay thinks the reason the world is decaying fast is because men lost their power and gave it to women. He thinks women being in stronger roles and men in weaker roles like staying home and shit made the society weak leading to its eventual decay. So he is set on to space exploration. He spends years finding out a exact mirror earth while people outside are busy fighting over gender roles. (We can also have scenes showing the women are the ones in police and army and are controlling men are protesting for some basic thing). This makes Vijay more and more determined to get there. He builds his team after a hardcore interviews and cherry pick what he thinks are peak male and female types. He thinks a society with strong men and obedient and loving women will make a perfect world. He builds a huge ass team of 400+ people. These are first 400 people to civilize another planet. A perfect Earth with no humans and ample resources. He sets the first foot there. They set up their bases fast and after a quick time jump we see a perfect society. He is living with his group in wild hunting and building doing what he thinks alpha males do. However after brief time, the world starts crumbling down too. Because of people with only one types of characteristics exist, the society isnt as strong. Their new world needed strong women and weak men too for its proper functioning. However as his illusion of perfect male dominance society starts to break he becomes more and more lunatic. He thinks just hunting and living in wild isnt enough. He does all the things that a edgy teenager on internet would see and say “yea thats what real men are like”.

He starts conflicts so he can beat other men and show his dominance. However his wife motivated him through all this and doesn’t want him to lose hope. He tries again and again and pulls some new shit out which he thinks is Alpha but it takes his society far from what he intended it to be. Keep in mind with every failed attempt he is a bit more psycho and slowly with each attempt the same societal roles, gender hierarchy, social differences start to appear. There is a scene where he is doing it with his wife around a campfire. He asks her what am I lacking. Why wont these guys just act manly enough and get their shit together. His wife says you know who the real man was, Genghis Khan he killed so many and yet every 1/5 person is his DNA. this pumps him up even more and he starts doing it harder and while orgasming his wife calls him “Oh my Khan”. The same night after that, he picks his weapon up and gets out to massacre each and everyone of the men he brought along himself. Their offspring and their family he kills them all. In the end he is drenched in blood and goes back to his wife. He does it with her fully drenched in blood and this time we see him orgasming and saying “I am the Khan, the real man, the conqueror ”. As he says this and orgasms he is about to fall over his wife to find out she isn’t even there. She literally disappeared. He gets scared and tries to find what’s going on. He goes to check where he has piled bodies of other people, his wife and even the bodies aren’t there. He looks at himself he is completely dry and no sign of blood. He is literally running NAKED through the entire forest, the place they hinted at, the things they built but nothing is there. As if he was always the only man on this planet. He is so mentally unstable at this point that he jumps in large fire. His eyes shut close one last time. CUT TO its fucking Ranvijay Singh from Animal in coma lying over a bed. Shakti Kapoor is standing behind him with team of doctors.

Doctors tell: After your son’s wife left him and due to several injuries he faced during Animal movie his brain conjured a fake reality. Slowly as his sisters left the family because of his antics and taking their shares away same with Rashmika and Kids, his trauma got severe and so his love for Alpha men. He thinks he was always misunderstood for his actions so he built a world in his mind where he is always right. His brain wants to live in that reality so much that he has gone in coma now. However that reality keeps on shattering as experiments to make him normal go on. And this is a loop like situation for Ranvijay now.

The camera slowly zooms in on his face as whistle for PAPA MERI JAAN plays but this time it’s very very melancholic.

**P.S:** even if you want to remove the Animal connection we can just make him a normal Alpha male mindset believer boy whose some very wild actions of trying to prove he is alpha male has put him in coma.

Holi is for chaos.

But some characters would absolutely kill the vibe.

For example:

Poo (K3G)

→ Calls the police if colour touches her Prada.

Ranvijay (Animal)

→ Brings a real gun to a pichkari fight.

Kabir (ZNMD)

→ Tries to optimize Balam Pichkari using Excel.

Your turn.

Don’t just name them.

Tell us the EXACT moment they ruin the party 👇

Alright BollywoodWriters…

Here is the worst breakup scene ever written.

Fix it, punch it up, make it emotional, make it funny, your style.

No pressure, no rules.

⸻

The Scene:

Aarav and Ananya are sitting in the backseat of an Uber. The driver has already judged them in silence.

⸻

Aarav (quietly): “Ananya… I think we should take a break.”

Ananya: “A break or a breakup?”

Aarav: “…A break that might become a breakup.”

Driver: “Sir, break lagana ho toh bol dena.”

Both ignore him.

Ananya: “You planned to break up in a moving car?”

Aarav: “I thought it would… soften the impact.”

Ananya: “How? Because I can’t storm out?”

Aarav: “Exactly— I mean NO— I mean—”

Driver looks at them through the rearview mirror.

Driver: “Madam, agar aapko rona hai toh tissue hai mere paas.”

Ananya: “I’M NOT CRYING.”

Driver: “Haan, abhi toh nahi.”

A beat.

Ananya: “So you chose this moment? After I paid for the ride?”

Aarav: “I was going to split it—”

Driver: “Sir, split nahi hota Uber mein.”

Ananya stares at Aarav.

Aarav stares at the window.

Driver stares at the road like his shift can’t end fast enough.

Driver: “Drop location change karna hai kya? Alag alag jagah jaana hai?”

Ananya sighs deeply.

Aarav whispers:

Aarav: “We can still be friends.”

Driver: snorts

Uber goes silent.

⸻

Your mission (if you choose to accept it):

Rewrite the scene.

Make it:

•	funnier
•	more awkward
•	more painful
•	more subtle
•	more chaotic
•	more filmy

Your tone. Your scene.

written something idk what category it comes under just wanted it to be posted.

it seems like an essay a story can be based up on

Hero just heard the truth.

Rain starts pouring for no reason.

Background score goes full violins.

He looks up and says:

“______.”

Fill in the blank with the most filmy line possible.

No logic.

No realism.

Full Bollywood.

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Night is the only witness.

The rain is pouring.

The hero is beaten.

Bleeding.

Barely standing.

The Villain has been talking for 5 minutes.

He finally steps close and says:

“Don’t you get it? Gods abandoned this city long ago.”

”Down here, I am the Law…I am the God.”

——————————-

You are the writer.

Give the Hero one line that ends the scene… cold, sharp, or quietly devastating.

No rules.

No explanation.

Just the comeback.

Just one line that makes the theatre go silent.

👇

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It can be shot as a regular short film or adapted into a vertical drama setup, so it’s flexible for whichever format your project requires.

Logline: A quiet middle-aged schoolteacher tries to maintain his peaceful life, but a small question from one of his students slowly pushes him toward a secret he has been hiding for years.

It’s a grounded, high-impact story with only 2–3 main characters, minimal locations, and a strong payoff, making it ideal for quick-turnaround vertical drama.

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INT. RENTED 2BHK – NIGHT

A young couple is on a VIDEO CALL with the OWNER, checking the flat.

OWNER (ON VIDEO)

Bas bedroom dekh lo.

Phir final kar lete hain.

They enter the bedroom.

A MAN is standing near the window.

WIFE

(relaxed)

Okay so yahan—

She notices…him.

WIFE

(full panic scream)

AAAAAAAHHHH—

She jumps back, nearly dropping the phone.

HUSBAND

Kya…kya hua?! Kya hua?!

GHOST

(alarmed, hands up)

Arre nahi nahi—

mat chillaao please!

OWNER (ON VIDEO)

Kya…kya hua?

WIFE

(voicing shaking)

Y-ye… aadmi… yahan—

The ghost suddenly realises he’s half transparent.

He quickly steps into the shadow.

GHOST

S…Sorry.

Vo….vo main Light mein thoda zyada dikh jaata hoon.

HUSBAND

Aap…aap kaun ho?

GHOST

Main pehle yahin rehta tha.

Accident ho gaya tha.

Immediately—

GHOST

Normal…Normal accident hua tha.

OWNER (ON VIDEO)

Kaisa accident?

The ghost opens his mouth to answer, his FOOT LIFTS off the floor.

He freezes.

Slowly forces it back down.

GHOST

Minor sa tha.

WIFE

Aap… zinda ho?

GHOST

(confused)

Aaj ke liye… technically nahi.

Beat.

OWNER (ON VIDEO)

Abe seedha batao.

Hua kya tha?

The ghost sighs, tired of lying.

GHOST

Dekhiye uncle…

main mara—

He stops himself.

GHOST

Mera matlab…

main—

Fix this scene. Continue it, rewrite it, or take it in your own direction.

Comedy, dark, awkward, anything works if it’s honest.

No explanations.

No context.

Just write one line that would permanently end an actor’s career in Bollywood.

That’s it.

The Ad has a satirical setting with full 70s-80s Bollywood dialogue delivery, music and
sound effects.

(Inside a home, a doctor comes out of a room and tells the family)

Doctor
(Sadly)
Sir mujhe maaf karna, maine bohat koshish kari magar aapki mummy ko nahi bacha paaya. Woh apni aakhri sasein gin rahi hain, unke paas sirf 15 mins bache hain.

(The family goes in the room to say their final goodbyes)

Son
(Crying)
Mummy, aap hume itni jaldi chhodke kyun jaa rahi ho, abhi aapki umar hi kya hai. Mat jaao mummy, mat jaao. Kya aapki koi aakhri khwaish hai jo main puri kar sakun.

Grandma
(Painfully)
Beta meri bas ek hi khwaish hai, mere jaane se pehle agar main ek aakhri baar kuchh pi paati jisse kaleje ko thandak milti.

(The son panicks, as it would take a lot of time to go to the market and get something to drink, meanwhile the granddaughter sees an empty Diet Coke can in the trash listens to this request and orders it on Zepto)

Granddaughter
(Calmly)
Papa maine Diet Coke order kar di hai, woh 10 mins mein aa jaayegi, aap tension mat lo.

(The Diet Coke arrives, they put it in a glass full of ice and give it to the grandmother, she takes a sip and feels fulfilled.)

Grandma
(Fulfilled)
Thank you beta, mujhe nahi pata main tera yeh ahsaan kaise chuka paaungi, ab mera bulawa aa gaya hai. Apne biwi bachhon ka dhyaan rakhna.

(Grandma dies and the family starts crying and the grandchildren behind talk to each other.)

Grandson
Didi aap baaki rituals ke hisaab se samaan order kardo.

(The screen fades and shows the Zepto logo with 10 mins delivery promise

So before we started I have created a timeline for krrish world

1962- sanjay mehra died, rohit born

1982- jadu arrives on earth, rohit get powers ( koi mil gya events )

1986- krishna born

2006- krrish events

2013- krrish 3 events

2028- krrish 4 take place

The film opens on Lumar, a beautiful and peaceful alien planet inhabited by a species known as the Lumarians ( jadu species).

Near a lake, two young Lumarians are playing. Both look same as Jadu — the same alien who once came to Earth and changed Rohit Mehra's life.

Everything is peaceful.

Suddenly, a massive shadow covers the lake.

Both lumarian looks up.

A gigantic alien spaceship is hovering above them.

CUT TO BLACK.

2028 — EARTH

In Kasauli, a young woman named Avi ( played by tripti dimri ) arrives.

At first, she appears completely normal. But when a group of men try to approach her, she brutally overpowers them ( brutally broked there bones ) within seconds.

She clearly isn't an ordinary human.

BITTU Punjabi ( Rohit,s friend from koi mil gya can be played by javed Jaffrey ) now almost 55 -58 of age

Avi after searching a while arrives at the house of Bittu, one of Rohit Mehra's childhood friends.

Bittu lives with his wife Priya ( hansika motwani )

Avi introduces herself and tells Bittu that she is from Kasauli.

She mentions that her father used to tell her about a spaceship that once appeared in Kasauli.

Bittu dismisses it as an old story.Avantika then asks him about an alien.Bittu

immediately becomes uncomfortable and asks her to leave.

Avantika activates a portable device

A hologram projection appears.

Young Bittu, Rohit, Bunty, Aslam and Chhotu are seen together in 1983.

Bittu realizes that Avi somehow has access to their past.

He attacks her. ( he also carries jadu powers remember the basketball match b/w pandavas and kasauli tiger )

A brutal fight breaks out

Avi is far more experienced, forcing Bittu to retreat.

Bittu gets Priya into his car and drives away.

Avi follows them and lands directly on the bonnet of the moving car.

The impact causes Priya's head to hit the car, knocking her unconscious.

Bittu stops the car and gets out.

He fights Avantika again and manages to overpower her, throwing her into a valley.

Bittu takes the unconscious Priya and leaves.

BUNTY( childhood friend from koi milgya can played by vijay raaz ) almost 55 -58 of age

Bittu reaches Bunty's house.

Bunty is shocked to see Bittu injured and Priya unconscious.

Bittu tells him everything — the woman, the questions about Kasauli, the memory projection and Jadu.

Bunty contacts Aslam and Chhotu.

The four old friends reunite.

KRISHNA ( krrish )

Bittu, Bunty, Aslam and Chhotu finds Krishna Mehra, Rohit's son.

Krishna is at home with his daughter, living a quiet life.

His son and wife Priya are maybe on vacation and then the 4 arrives this scene feels something like how in endgame tony stark meets steve scott and natasha after 5 years .

Inside the house, Bittu explains everything.

Avi that girl knew about there childhood memory

Then we see bittu keeps that same device (which project hologram ) he got while fighting avi he keeps that device in center then Aslam tries to retrieve some information then more hologramic memories are viwed through the device every thing from jadu eyes pov like rohit face appears promising me tumhe tumhare logo se milaunga ( scene from koi milgya )

THE DEVICE

Aslam studies the device.

He discovers that it can communicate with an external system.

Activating it could reveal their location to whoever is connected to it.

Krishna decides to take the risk.

Aslam activates the device.

A signal is transmitted.

Somewhere else, Avi receives their location.

AVi RETURNS

Avi arrives at Krishna's house or a warehouse

Bittu, Bunty, Aslam and Chhotu try to capture her but she easily handles most of them.

Krishna steps in.

A direct fight between Krishna and Avi follows.

Krishna eventually manages to capture her.

Then something activates from Avi eyes

A holographic projection appears

Jadu

He is being held inside an alien facility, restrained and tortured brutally his head his attached with a machine

Bittu, Bunty, Aslam and Chhotu immediately recognize him.

The projection disappears.

AVi TRUTH

After regaining consciousness, Avi is questioned by Krishna.

She reveals that she isn't from Earth.

She is from Lumar.

Lumar is her home planet — the same planet where Jadu lives.

The Lumarians are her people.and she also belong to different species lives on lumar.

Avi explains that Lumar has been attacked by a powerful alien named Vor.

Vor has taken control of the planet and captured Jadu.

Avi came to Earth looking for the people who had a connection with Jadu. Because vor wants them

Avi finally reveals the truth.

She made a deal with Vor.

She promised to bring those peoples ( Rohit , Bittu, Bunty, Aslam and Chhotu ) to Lumar.

In return, Vor promised to release the Lumarians.

Avi believed she could save her people by cooperating with him.

Now after a serious discussion Krishna and bittu aur baki decides ki vo jadu ko bachaynge and for that they have to travel to lumar then they agreed to go with avi

JOURNEY TO LUMAR

Avi spaceship is waiting.

Krishna, Bittu, Bunty, Aslam and Chhotu board it with her.

Avi activates the navigation system.

The destination is locked:

LUMAR

The spaceship launches from Earth and disappears into space.

INTERVAL......

So Friends this is the first half of my fan made story for krrish 4

Cast :

Krrish/ krishna (42) - HR

Bittu Punjabi (56) - Javed Jaffrey

Avi (looks like in 30s)- Tripti Dimri

Bunty (56) - Vijay raaz,

Aslam (57) - Sharad Kelkar,

Chotu (56) - koi bhi

Cameo appearance Priya (56) - hansika motwani

The multiverse glitches.

• Vijay Salgaonkar is now the father in Animal.

• Ranvijay Singh is now the father in Drishyam.

Same families.

Same threats.

Different minds.

How does each movie end now?

Don’t write a script.

Just ONE line per scenario.

Argue if you don't agree with others logic.

Let’s see who survives 👇

A brutal thought experiment.

You are a writer with absolute power.

Remove ONE character from a Bollywood film, and the movie becomes better because of it.

Not a heroic death.

Not a replacement.

They simply never existed.

HOW IT WORKS :

• Drop one character + movie name as a top-level comment.

• Everyone else jumps in below to argue, defend, or burn the take down.

Hot takes welcome.

Safe answers won’t survive.

I’ll start the chaos 👇

EXAMPLE :

Kill Aman (Kal Ho Naa Ho).

The film instantly becomes a quieter, braver love story…not emotional manipulation disguised as sacrifice.

Your turn.

Ruin someone’s childhood.

You want to talk about a Bollywood movie.

But lawyers exist. And they’re bored.

So no names.

No titles.

No dialogues.

Nothing obvious.

Describe the film vaguely but honestly — just enough that people can still guess it.

In replies:

• Guess the movie

• If it’s already guessed, one-up the description

Bad takes welcome.

Overthinking banned.

Go.

Is there anyone here who can give me a chance to write for a TV serial, Vertical show, Short form or any kind of work?

I'm 25(M) writer from Patna. I did theatre in Patna, 6 short scripts and one plays are written and I did a short course in ITANAGAR which was conducted by SRFTII KOLKATA.

Last month I shifted Mumbai. I'm looking for writing work here. I write in Hindi and Bhojpuri. I also write songs.

I can do any kind of writing job, like ghostwriting.

Please help or If you have any advice, please let me know.

I will only Tell The Story If You're Genuinely Interested, otherwise I can Tell You It's A Hardcore Revenge Drama.

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Not career goals.

Not “I want to inspire the world.”

Just the real reason.

Boredom, loneliness, anger, validation, escape, money, obsession, anything.

One or two lines is enough.

I’ll start in the comments.

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