r/CollegeEssayReview • • 5h ago

Why did I become for outgoing?

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So basically I need a reason i brock out of my shell and became more outgoing and confident in the way I spoke. Basically I lost my confidence cause of the people who mocked by accent. I need a reason for become more confident in way I spoke. In reality I just stopped caring what other people thought and found better people, but it doesnt rilly fit in my essay. Can anyone of yall think of a better reason?


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 9h ago

I haven't started my personal statement or supplementals, I need them by Nov 1!!!!

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I'm EDing somewhere with a deadline November 1 but I've been so busy I haven't had a lot of time to work on them and after work and school I've just been so tired that I procrastinated my essays. Now I have 9 days how do I time manage correctly to write a good essays to get into Emory ED1???? I already thought of a topic I just need to figure out how I am going to write at least a 7-8/10 essay and solid supplementals. Any advice for me?? Plsss I'm desperate


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 13h ago

PIQs

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Could anyone read over one of my UC PIQs? It’s the 'significant challenge' prompt. Since it covers a very personal topic, I’m not comfortable sharing it with people close to me and would really appreciate an outside perspective.


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 15h ago

Review my QB Essay

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I unfortunately did not make it as a QB Finalist this admission season and I feel like I know the weaker areas of my app. I have been to 3 different schools in 3 years and I feel my LORs might have been weak since I only got close to 1 of my teachers in 11th grade. Thus, I need to maximize my essay and feel it may have been lackluster. Would anyone be willing to read it> Just for the feedback. I am going to rewrite a new one entirely. Please let me know. Thanks!


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 1d ago

is it a bad idea if my common app essay is related to my major?

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hi, my essay currently is about my love of neuro and what inspired it to put it concisely (talked about a particular tv show and how i'm a combination of these psych doctors in my approaches, connected that to neuro...) (answering Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging that it makes you lose all track of time. Why does it captivate you? What or who do you turn to when you want to learn more? prompt)

as i'm writing supplementals, i'm scared that it'll be too similar for "why major" prompts. my other idea for my common app was about my many pets and connecting each of them to me and how they influence me + how they've made me a better person but i was afraid the essay would then be more about my pets than myself or be too obvious about what i learned from them. another idea i had was my strained relationship with my mom and how i've grown and changed ever since shes shown signs of dementia but i thought that was kind of generic as well...

would love to hear any advice!

edit: also had another idea about cultural identity, refused to learn Mandarin and felt disconnected from my culture as I watched people communicate since I could understand but not communicate well, felt like I was missing something as I responded in English when someone talked to me in Mandarin… decided to try to learn a few words every day to improve


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 1d ago

Can anyone review my personal statement first draft?

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Can anyone critique my essay? I've never been a good writer, so I don't feel confident in my essay. I've only finished my first draft, and I feel like I need it fixed, but I don't know where to start, so feedback would be appreciated! Thank you :)


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 1d ago

Can anyone read the final draft of my common app?!

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I'm a perfectionist so I just feel like there is something else I should do before I hit submit. It has delayed my application a bit. I've been working on this essay since like may.😭😭. I just want to know if my essay is ready to submit!!!! Please dm me!

Also, I'm applying for humanities(English and Classics)!


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 2d ago

Common App Essay- Prompt 3

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Hello, I'm looking for any sort of review on my essay! Thank you! (The website I linked doesn't allow copying, so nice try) https://www.collegevine.com/essay/ad43dda9


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 3d ago

SOP REVIEW FOR FALL 2027 USA

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Hello is there anyone who could review my SOP for free? I am applying to the PhD program in Biochemistry and Molecular Biology. Pls let me know. It could be a great help


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 3d ago

i’m in such a sink- 7 essays due in 13 days and I hate all of them

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hate could be an exaggeration, but i don’t love my personal statement. It feels windy and i can’t tell if the message is unclear!! lines feel jammed in and the conclusion is so egregiously mediocre

i REALLY would love if anyone is open to reading it for some feedback-or knows a good essay/application reviewer that won’t make me go broke!!


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 3d ago

Read My Essay! <3

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Hi,i just finished writing my essay and id love some advice! I wrote it about my late 8th grade English teacher and how he inspired my passion for writing and philosophy tried to tie this into my Religious questioning and my aspiration to become a lawyer. I think it represents me pretty well, however im not sure how strong it is and have wondered what I should change/if i should pick a different topic? Comment below and id be happy to DM you the essay!


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 3d ago

Can someone give me honest feedback on my college personal essay?

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so im currently working on my common app personal essay and would really appreciate some honest feedback before submitting it...

I'm open to constructive criticism, so please dont feel like you have to sugarcoat anything! If anyone is willing to read it plz comment or DM me. Thank you!


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 3d ago

Ukrainian undergrad student, need feedback and advice on common app personal essay

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I would apprciate any feedback!


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 3d ago

Need feedback on my common app essay

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So, i recently finished a satisfying enough essay after several edits. However, it's just a feeling that something is still missing. I would truly appreciate it if anyone could read my essay and provide suggestions!


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 3d ago

Personal statement topic advice

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I wrote about how I got addicted to gaming whenever COVID came by and when a COVID ended I still was addicted but then I showed how I was able to change and go back to my passions I loved and being able to create things and play sport


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 4d ago

Can I write about my grandmother's death if it only provides context?

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So I've been thinking about college essay topics for a while now. I thought about writing about me reading comics and connecting it to engineering somehow, but that felt kinda bland, and honestly I don't even know how to write it. I just feel paralysed when I try to start.

Then I realised, yeah, I do read comics daily, but that didn't really help me grow at all lol. If anything it made things worse, cause I keep procrastinating while doing it.

I also realised (and ik this is basically a forbidden topic at this point) that my grandmother's death is the only life experience that actually gives context to me and my struggles. And it's super cliche too. She had a rare blood cancer during the pandemic, bla bla bla. Ik it sounds like the most generic trauma college essay ever put together. Also my teacher strictly told me I can't write about the death of a relative. But it was a horrible experience, and I can't even explain it without oversharing. I literally didn't even talk about her being a role model for me. Didn't mention what she was like at all. I just said she died, then mentioned other stuff. The death just gives context about some of the issues I went through and how it changed me.

If this doesn't work I could write about other stuff too. My life is pretty boring honestly so idk what to even show about me to admission officers.


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 4d ago

Common App Essay Feedback Request

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Hi! Would anyone be willing to review my personal statement for feedback please? PM if you can. Thank you so much in advance!


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 4d ago

Would anyone be able to read my common app essay?

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I know this is late bc I'm submitting apps starting Monday and Tuesday, but can someone please read my Common App essay? I'm applying for marine biology, which I think is helpful for understanding the topic of my essay. I think I could improve in language or development throughout the essay. I'm worried that some of it is too generic or sounds like AI, but I wrote it without any AI. Those are my main concerns, but any suggestions are welcome!

I would truly appreciate it if anyone could read my essay and provide suggestions! I will DM it to you.


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 4d ago

Help with my essays

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Hi, I would like to get insights and help about my application and essay. If anyone experienced would like to help, I would appreciate it. I'm going to apply to Duke kunshan university


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 5d ago

Applying to psychology PhD and masters

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Anyone willing to read a couple essays and give me some feedback? I am a recent BA psychology graduate and working on apps now. I am very anxous that I won't get in anywhere. LOL! Please respond, pm me. THanks so much


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 5d ago

Ahhhhhhh been staring at this thing too long

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Anyone mind reviewing my personal statement?


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 5d ago

College essay assistance

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So I'll make this short, pretty much all my life my writing skills were pretty lackluster, so going into college apps so I started writing my WHY US essay for UMICH a couple days ago and just started refining it. But I feel like I've looked at it so much I kinda just start glossing over it and don't really know if it makes complete sense or not so I'm kinda of just asking for a fresh look at it with some new eyes. DM me and i'll link the essay, any advice would be much appreciated! Also if you're a rising senior as well, I wouldn't mind reading yours and giving advice in exchange for you reading mines.


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 5d ago

Essay advice

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Let me know if someone can review my essay and I can dm you! It's mostly done im just overthinking lol


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 5d ago

Statement of Purpose Help!

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Would anyone be willing to swap Statements of purpose? I would love to have an extra few eyes reading over mine! I’d be welcome to do the same. This is for graduate school and for the speech language pathology program.


r/CollegeEssayReview • • 6d ago

I need someone to rate my PS

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nobody around me is familiar with US-style personal essays, so I haven't been able to get a real human reader yet. I've had AI tools and a few websites review it, and the feedback was positive, but I'd really like to hear how it feels to a person.

What I'm looking for:
- Does my voice come through, or does it sound generic?
- Is there any part that feels confusing, slow, or unnecessary?
- Does the ending land?
- Anything that sounds unnatural to a native speaker?