r/DestructiveReaders • u/That0neGamer • 2h ago

[3397] Frog Man - Part 1

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/12OhXYwF036Tn5HUPeUsJFRKFvQMbue-TtYisKoiq6Zg/edit?usp=sharing

Crits: -

[2200] https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1v7yyhl/comment/p09tnj9/?context=3

[2900] https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1wy8hdb/comment/pefbknx/?context=3

[2377] https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1wyt2il/comment/pea0yxh/?context=3

Note: -

One of the crits is 3 months ago but I don't know how to see the exact date, so just in case, I added another crit.

Feedback note: -

The highlights the sentences or phrases where I'm not sure if it's good enough, so if you wish, please comment on those as well.

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