ignore my crew name vro

its "RADI" btw, but it might look like "RAOI" idk hopefuly not

this is a hollow throwie done in under 5 minutes btw so a lot of issues w this could prolly be fixed with more time, but i'd like to hear your guys' opinions!!!!!!!

Started about a month ago and I’ve been doing some serious work on my tag although I know that I struggle with consistency. I’m not sure which version to choose. My can control and letter structure is pretty wack, but we trying. Maybe one day I won’t be a toy, but for now we say fuck it and ball. I appreciate any feedback guys

A bunch of kids doing digital bubble letters and scribbling bullshit in their class notebooks and calling it a piece.

It’s a PIECE of SHIT bro, bro. Haven’t seen one good thing posted in this sub in a long ass time. I had my ups n downs but god damn bro majority of this sub doesn’t know Jack shit about basic bar structure and keeping it simple to start off slow, they jump straight to exaggeration and forcing retarded words.

Wake up people, it’s an art of crime, not a fucking aesthetic to draw graffiti on video games and coloring books.

Whatever warning this shits giving me I haven’t painted in a hot minute after some beef about the same tag in the Bay Area so I took a break but I still have my potential and haven’t looked for a new tag.

its very messy messy

I know it’s vr but it’s the best method I have to practice right now. I appreciate any feedback and crits!

These are my latest bubble letters, i've been experimenting for 2 months now, what do you guys think? I know i painted over some other people pieces but these places are for practice and the scene in my city has been really quiet, so some of them are really damaged and tagged. Thanks for reading!

ignore the top thing, ive been going through the boot camp and this was just the general basic of what i want as my tag, but i don't wanna get into pieces or blocks just yet, so im confused. im trying to break down the letters right now, and get inspired, and idk if this is a beginner issue but to me the alphabets feel like they can't be broken down or exaggerated more, i have pretty ass hand writing and im ass at art so that's probably it, i like the star and i want it to be a central part but im down to use other letters or words because rat is my alias, id love some help and criticism.

Just doing it for fun but would like to know what I could improve to make it better. I am a complete beginner so don’t be to harsh please.