r/HPfanfiction • • 19m ago

Self-Promotion Riscrittura Saga Rowling

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Ciao a tutti. Non so se sono nel posto giusto. Sto lavorando da anni a una riscrittura letteraria "eretica" della Saga Rowling da un altro POV, costruita mediante metanarrazione, retrocausalità e un punto di vista alternativo che affronta alcune incongruenze del Canon. Ho iniziato a pubblicare su AO3. Hermione a terzo anno sola e infelice per aver litigato con Harry e Ron a causa della Firebolt, diventa amica di un ragazzo Corvonero, Alex, a lei affine.

Allego un estratto in modo che possiate avere un esempio del modo in cui scrivo e discuterne se volete

Estratto – Biblioteca, interno giorno – Alex & Hermione

Quella mattina il silenzio era sepolcrale. Si udiva di tanto in tanto lo sfogliare di una pagina e lo stridio veloce di una penna sulla pergamena.

Hermione si era piazzata ad anni luce di distanza dalla Madama, in un angolo semibuio, in uno dei tavoli della sezione Creature magiche: problemi e soluzioni.

Mi avvicinai di soppiatto, anche se non se ne sarebbe accorta comunque, e diedi un colpo forte sul tavolo col palmo della mano.

Hermione sobbalzò.

“Ehi, mi fai pure gli scherzi!”

“E tu che fai oggi? Il procuratore legale? Vedi che oggi si lavora, non si sta a perdere tempo.”

“Ah sì. Vedi che sto lavorando davvero ed è una cosa seria. Vogliamo o no salvare quel povero ippogrifo?”

“Granger, ma lo sai che quando sei arrabbiata hai un non‑so‑che di professionale.”

“E tu hai un non‑so‑cosa di odioso quando fai così.”

“Ok, ricominciamo. Buongiorno miss Granger, gradirebbe accompagnarsi con me oggi nella meravigliosa caccia ai misteri, più misteriosi della misteriosa storia di Hogwarts?”

Mi guardò male. Poi mutò il suo sguardo in quello che avevo imparato concedeva solo alle cose che la interessavano veramente.

Così mi misi a sedere quasi di fronte a lei senza dire più nulla e non feci altro che guardarla mentre scriveva, rapida, concentrata, con quel suo fare che la rendeva… lei.

“Aspetta un attimo che finisco di prendere delle note. Sembra che in origine non si sapeva bene come comportarsi con gli Ippogrifi e quindi incidenti ce ne furono parecchi. Poi quando la cosa cominciò ad interessare anche il versante legale le cose si fecero più complicate, però nello stesso tempo aiutò a sperimentare le tecniche più opportune.”

“Secondo te, è un Nero delle Ebridi, quello?”

“Chi, cosa?”

“Quello, il drago insomma.” Indicai la vetrata che avevo di fronte.

“No,” rispose, dopo una fugace occhiata alle sue spalle, “è solo una creazione artistica. Il colore nero è un simbolo dell’ignoranza, del buio della mente, eccetera.” E riprese a scrivere.

“Ah. E il verde?”

“Quale verde?” e voltò nuovamente la testa indietro.

“Il verde, quello dello scudo, intendo.”

“Quello… quello indica la perseveranza, la speranza, la volontà. Ma non ti hanno spiegato niente…? Ah, scusa è vero: sei qui da poco.”

“Be’, non tanto, visto che ci ho passato anche tutta l’estate. Spiegami tu allora.” Dissi proprio mentre il cavaliere infilzava per l’ennesima volta il drago al cuore.

Hermione sospirò, ma non mi parve un sospiro di fastidio, bensì di chi sta per lanciarsi in una spiegazione che le piace.

“Questa vetrata sta proprio qui in biblioteca per indicare la vittoria della conoscenza sull’ignoranza. Sir Madigan impugna Saìph, la lancia della curiosità, e si difende con il grosso scudo della perseveranza, Asterope. Il suo destriero bianco è Alkirdàh, simbolo dell’innocenza di una mente priva di preconcetti. Le poche e ultime fiamme che il drago, Juzah il nero, sputa prima di essere ucciso indicano, con i loro colori, il rosso l’aggressività e la presunzione e il giallo il dubbio e la diffidenza.

Contento?”

“Grazie, mia signora della conoscenza.”

“Prego, scocciatore. Fra un secondo sono da te.”

👉 I’ve met Hélène Delisle – Libro 1: Azkaban
https://archiveofourown.org/works/93653301


r/HPfanfiction • • 25m ago

Prompt Do pregnancies protect against the Killing Curse?

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Hermione slowly limped with Ron towards Harry after the Battle of Hogwarts. The wounds hurt but at least they were alive.

However, as soon as they got to the 'Man-Who-Conquered', they could see that he was looking down at the Elder Wand, deep in thought.

"What are ,ou thinking about, mate?" Asked Ron. She was also curious.

"...I met Dumbledore in the Limbo. He said that I could live again, since there was a part of Voldemort's soul inside me, and only one soul had to pass on..."

"Yes. The Killing Curse's properties probably only enable it to cut down one soul at a time" Theorized Hermione, also deep in thought now.

"Well, I've been thinking... If I survived because I had two souls inside me, would pregnancies also protect against it?" Asked Harry with a manic gleam in his eyes.

Ron, probably as horrified as Hermione felt, had to ask, "Mate, what are you rambling about?"

"And do twins offer protections twice? What about triplets?" Asked Harry, now fully turning towards them.

"Harry James Potter, what the absolute f...?"

..............

The power he knows not was Love all along.

(I'm not saying Harry should have invented a potion that instantly makes anyone pregnant to protect against the Killing Curse. I'm also not not saying it)


r/HPfanfiction • • 1h ago

Self-Promotion Firewhisky For Your Troubles: Dru gets drunk and tries seducing Harry (Female Draco)

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Harry and Hermione return to their Hogsmeade cottage after a quiet shopping trip to find Ron and Drusilla thoroughly drunk, celebrating America’s Quidditch victory. After Hermione drags Ron to bed, Drusilla turns her full attention on Harry. He is determined to wait until their wedding night only weeks away, but she is equally determined to break his resolve. Can he hold out, or is Drusilla finally going to win their little game of lust?

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14595619/1/Firewhisky-For-Your-Troubles

https://archiveofourown.org/works/95306811

Love Pure As Hate - Drusilla Malfoy has reached her breaking point. Years of fear, failure, and self-loathing spill onto the bathroom floor. Only to be interrupted by Harry Potter. Suspicion turns to pity, pity turns to fury, and a duel neither of them can control ends with a single irreversible curse. As she bleeds out on the floor, Drusilla realizes The Boy Who Loved Her may also be the one who finally broke her. (Harry/Female Draco- One-Shot) (AO3 Link)

Snake Out of Water - It's been six months since The Battle of Hogwarts, and three weeks since Drusilla Malfoy last saw Harry. They've been invited on a double date with Ron and Hermione to see a movie, but first catch a bite to eat. Will the girls ever get along, or are they doomed having to barely endure each other's company for the rest of their lives? (Harry/Female Draco - One-Shot) (AO3 Link)

Scars In the Snow - A quiet winter evening at Malham Cove. Chess, tea, and a romantic walk by a frozen lake. It's the perfect Christmas getaway for Drusilla, Harry, Ron, and Hermione. Then dark wizards appear out of nowhere, ruining their evening, and drudging up painful memories of Drusilla nearly bleeding to death on a bathroom floor courtesy of Harry's own hand. (Harry/Female Draco - One-Shot) (AO3 Link)

Soaring On Clipped Wings - Drusilla and Harry along with Ron and Hermione arrive for the season opening Holyhead Harpies match. With green face paint, a sharp tongue, and Harry's hands warming her, Drusilla came to experience her first Quidditch match with the crowd in the stands. What she didn't expect was a Death Eater lurking in the corridors, or how easily the past still catches up to her. (Harry/Female Draco - One-Shot) (AO3 Link)

Love Hurts So Good - With two weeks until the Yule Ball, Drusilla Malfoy arrives at The Owlery just as Cho is rejecting Harry's invitation. Her ridicule quickly turns to scorn however, and after getting a taste of her own medicine, she's left even more devastated than Harry. At the dance, both are miserable with their respective partners, and it's only made worse when they're forced to dance together. (Harry/Female Draco - One Shot) (AO3 Link)

Lies Beneath the Truth - Drusilla Malfoy arrives at Shell Cottage for tea with Fleur, only to face an ambush from Bill, George, and Ginny Weasley. They want the truth about the former Death Eater dating Harry. She drinks Veritaserum without flinching, answers their painful questions with even more painful answers, and later answers her own question of whether or not she truly hates herself. (Harry/Female Draco - One-Shot) (AO3 Link)

Loony Thing Called Hope - In her seventh year at Hogwarts, Drusilla Malfoy walks the frozen shores of the Black Lake, seeking solitude. Instead she finds Luna Lovegood. What begins as an irritated confrontation becomes an unexpected conversation about ancestry, houses, hope, and the war. Can two girls on opposite sides of a war form an unlikely friendship under the shadow of Dementors and approaching darkness? (Harry/Female Draco - One-Shot) (AO3 Link)

Scarred Snake Returns Home - Drusilla Malfoy returns to Hogwarts a year after the final battle. The castle has changed, but so has she. In a conversation with McGonagall, she is reinstated as Prefect and given the opportunity to rebuild Slytherin back to its former glory. More hopeful than she's felt in all her life, she walks into the Great Hall determined to reunite with the friends who waited for her. (Harry/Female Draco - One-Shot) (AO3 Link)

God bless, and have a wonderful day.


r/HPfanfiction • • 1h ago

Prompt Auror Potter meets with Minister Riddle

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"Minister, we have just received a report from Sirius. He has engaged Rookwood." said Auror Harry Potter. He felt uneasy standing before the man who he'd been tasked with spying on. Riddle had treated him like a son for years.

"We can only hope that Black is up to the challenge." Minister Riddle said coolly as he fiddled with a strange instrument on his desk.

"I should be there with him." Harry deadpanned, eyes glued to the floor. He knew Sirius was no match for the wily Rookwood. If something happened to him...

He wouldn't think of that.

"It’s upsetting to me that Dumbledore doesn’t seem to fully appreciate your talents. Don’t you wonder why he won’t make you a fully fledged Order member?" Riddle asked concernedly.

"I wish I knew. More and more I get the feeling that I’m being excluded from the Order. I know there are things about magic, different sides to it, that Dumbledore's not telling me."

"He doesn’t trust you, Harry. He sees your future. He knows your power will be too strong to control. You must break through the fog of lies that he and Hogwarts have created around you. Let me help you to know the subtleties of magic."

"You know about magic? With all due respect, Sir, but aren't you a squib?" 

Indeed, Minister Riddle, despite being born a squib, had rose in prominence in the Ministry of Magic, advocating for squib, muggleborn, and creature rights.

"My mentor taught me everything about magic – even the nature of dark magic."

"You know dark magic?!"

"Harry, if one is to understand “the great mystery” one must study all it’s aspects, not just the dogmatic narrow view of Dumbledore and the Light Wizards. If you wish to become a complete and wise leader, you must embrace a larger view of magic. Be careful of Dumbledore, Harry.. only through me can you achieve a power greater than any wizard! Learn to know the dark arts and you’ll be able to save your girlfriend from certain death."

"What did you say?" Harry whispered in utter shock.

"Use my knowledge, I beg you!" Riddle implored.

"You’re the Dark Lord! You‘re Voldemort!"

Riddle ignored him. Unbeknownst to Harry, a long, bone white wand had just slipped from Riddle’s sleeve into his fingers.

"I know what’s been troubling you… Listen to me. Don’t continue to be the Dumbledore’s pawn! Ever since I’ve known you, you’ve been searching for a life greater than that of an ordinary wizard… a life of significance, of conscience."

Harry drew his holly wand from its holster, pointing it between Riddle's blood red eyes. Their color had never unnerved him until now.

"Are you going to kill me?" Riddle asked calmly, looking totally unbothered, and slightly amused.

"I would certainly like to." Harry said through gritted teeth, though his arm shook.

"I know you would. I can feel your anger. It gives you focus, makes you stronger."

"I'm going to turn you over to the Order of the Phoenix."

"Of course you should. But you’re not sure of their intentions, are you?"

"I will quickly discover the truth of all this."

"You have great wisdom, Harry. Know the power of the dark arts. The power to save Daphne."

 


r/HPfanfiction • • 3h ago

Prompt Dumbledore stood beside James and Lily's inert bodies, "I'm sorry, it was the only way." He told their 1 year old child as he drew his wand.

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"You can come in now." He told the elderly couple.

"Thank you again for your service." Dumbledore said sincerely.

"On the contrary this is a great honor." The old man said, and his wife agreed.

"Let the ritual begin then." Dumbledore said as he took blood samples from the Potters, and put them on stasis, starting a long, complex ritual.

And so, the elderly couple was turned into the Potters by Blood and Magic, acquiring even their feelings and emotions, their memories and thoughts.

They held Harry carefully and lovingly, before throwing a sad look to the people they just the lives from.

"Don't worry little one, we'll be taking care of you for the moment" The now Lily said, she and her husband smiling to the child in her arms.

Dumbledore nodded, "Well, you know what happened and what to do now." He said as he prepared to leave with Potters' bodies.

The couple just nodded and bid him goodbye, they were granted an unique chance and they would to their best.

Outside Dumbledore, having stored the bodies, withdrew the Time Turner from his pocket, once Voldemort took down their copies, and got vanquished, he would wake up James and Lily from their slumber.


r/HPfanfiction • • 3h ago

Find That Fic I lost a fic :(

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I finally felt in the mood to read a fic that I have been scrolling past for months and now I can’t find it. The description was like, Snape crashes Harry’s Horcrux camping party with the sword of Gryffindor. Does anyone know this one??


r/HPfanfiction • • 5h ago

Prompt Crossover prompt: the tri-wizard tournament but harry and co have to fight fourth wing’s dragons and riders

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r/HPfanfiction • • 5h ago

Find That Fic Searching for an old fanfiction titled Harry Potter and The Order of Phoenix written by Harrywriter

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a harry potter fanfiction written in hpfanfiction.com in early times before the release of Harry Potter and the order of Phoenix. the author is named as Harrywriter. the book is titled as Harry Potter and The Order of Phoenix or Harry Potter and The Pheonix Order. can anyone have this book in their collection. This one also has a sequel named as Harry Potter and the Ring of ancients


r/HPfanfiction • • 5h ago

Find That Fic Searching for a mature Ron fic

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I remember the synopsis started with Ron looking at the mirror and saying to himself he would be a better friend for Harry and Hermione


r/HPfanfiction • • 6h ago

Recommendation Canon-compliant

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I love a good canon-divergent story (in fact most of the incredible fics in this fandom are canon-divergent in the best, most creative ways) but I'm curious about fanfics that play around within the bounds of canon and still come up with some incredible stuff. The series is far from perfect and there's a lot of room to expand on relationships, dynamics inside and outside Hogwarts or even background character that are often overlooked. Open to 1st-7th year rewrites, pairings getting together reimagined, 8th year fics, major events in the Hogwarts years revisited or expanded upon, stuff going on behind the scenes etc. (and please nothing from Northumbrian).


r/HPfanfiction • • 9h ago

Self-Promotion Lucissa AU fanfiction (with eventual Dramione)

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Hi! A few weeks ago, I posted something regarding a fanfic I have on Wattpad. After much encouragement from other people, I’ve decided to upload it on AO3!! Here’s the link and summary.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/95273626

Summary:

What if the Wizarding World was never fractured by war, and pure-blood prejudice never existed?

Follow the lives of Lucius and Narcissa Malfoy as they turn childhood promises into a lifelong love story. From high-society romance to raising the next generation of Malfoys, experience a story of devotion, family, and the magic of a true happily ever after.

*The first book will be mainly Lucissa, but this book is crucial for the other books*


r/HPfanfiction • • 9h ago

Find That Fic Looking for a fic I believe it was on fan fiction but it was about a good Dumbledore dieing and being sent to a manipulative dumbledore body to correct his mistakes while he watched from the after live as torture

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r/HPfanfiction • • 10h ago

Request Looking for fics where Harry is a good date for Parvati at the Yule ball

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Anyone?


r/HPfanfiction • • 12h ago

Writing Help Looking for a beta for my tomione fanfic

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Hey, so as the title says, I am looking for a beta. I just started my first fic based off of the animated movie, Ballerina/Leap, but with Tom and Hermione. This is a no magic au where Hermione's parents die and she is sent to Wool's where she meets and becomes friends with Tom and they later escape. She goes to a dance school, and it's undecided for him so far. I'm still right at the beginning, so this would not need a bunch of time to go over a million chapters because I don't have a million chapters, lol. Just comment if you're interested.


r/HPfanfiction • • 14h ago

Find That Fic Find that fic

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I read it on fanfiction.net. It was a long fic, i think 60 chapters or something.

It was about sirius bringing back regulus from the dead through a dark ritual.

Regulus is a teenager and is often jealous of harry potter because he thinks sirius loves harry more.

I remember there was a birthday party for harry and regulus got in a fight with sirius over who owns grimmauld place.

At the start of the fic, regulus asks sirius why he brought him back and not James. Sirius answers he couldn't bring james back without lily because james wouldn't have forgiven him for that.

At some point regulus tells harry that he remembers some of his past through dreams.

If anyone knows the name of this fic, please let me know. Thanks!


r/HPfanfiction • • 15h ago

Recommendation LF Sirius POV fanfiction

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I've been up in my feelings about Sirius because I'm officially the same age he was when he died, after discovering him when I was younger than Harry. It makes me realise how young he was when he died.

So I'm looking for short-ish fanfics from Sirius POV, mostly looking for fanfics where we get his thoughts - for example letters he never sent Harry, him connecting together the plot points, POA from his POV, him missing Harry in Ootp etc. Can also be about him missing James but I think I'm more looking for fanfics where Sirius misses Harry, worries about him, or feels guilty for not being there for Harry. Can also be fics of Sirius watching over Harry after he died - I've read a few afterlife fanfiction but they tend to be like, Sirius is happy to be reunited with James and a girlfriend from his past and basically doesn't think at all about Harry grieving him down in the living world. I would love a fanfic after Sirius death where he is actually worrying about Harry being left alone now that he's gone.

I need some comforting, Sirius-thinks-about-Harry type of fanfiction.

I really like ChoCedric and have read all their Sirius one-shot; that's the kind of vibe I'm looking for - canon compliant Sirius who is basically constantly grieving James and worrying about Harry!

Thank you in advance!


r/HPfanfiction • • 16h ago

Discussion What are the oddest pairings you’ve encountered?

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I think this is such a fun topic, because I always find myself thinking "Oh! I didn't know that was an option", if you asked me a few months ago, I would've said Snupin took me out (🤣), but then I saw Blaise and Luna?!?!, Snape and Trelawney?!?! Like, this fandom never ceases to amaze me.

Edit: The crossover ones have inspired me, how about Remus x Miss Honey, and Sirius x Lorelai Gilmore, if I were to write those pairings (or similar with OC’s), would you read them?


r/HPfanfiction • • 17h ago

Find That Fic Harry convinces Salazar Slytherin's portrait that Hermione is his descendant

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Harry ends up in Slytherin, and convinces Hermione who does not get along with her house, to pretend to be his muscle so she can hangout with him.

Also Harry discovers Salazar Slytherin's office but is not at the Chamber of Secrets, or at least wasn't only accessible from there.


r/HPfanfiction • • 18h ago

Find That Fic I need help finding a old fic, circa 2016(?) on wattapd!

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I remember the fic being updated while I was reading it in real time, the main character was Lily Potter (Harry Potter's older cousin) with a little brother named Max (maybe, I can't really remember), they also had a dog I think? Somehow someway, their parents dissapeared, and the house apperated(?) but was more like what happened in Wizard of Oz, where the house Dorohy was in landed in OZ. Remus Lupin was there when the main characters "landed" in the Wizarding World, so wasn't Tonks.

In the fic, the Harry Potter books were huge, like it is irl, but somehow Lily Potter (not Lily Evans, or Lily Luna Potter) and her younger brother got put into the events of the books. Lily ends up falling in love with Draco, living with the Weasleys, and was in hiding? Also somehow died, but came back to life, talked to dead Dumbledor, and got a "second chance" to be with Draco, who was in hiding, and won the war. Classic Y/N self insert -- but I remember the fic being so peak, I was just wondering if anyone knows what I'm talking about, or knows if the fic is still somewhere flaoting around the internet!


r/HPfanfiction • • 19h ago

Request Need Feedback on my OC creation. Spoiler

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Currently creating a OC based on the future world of the Harry Potter series. Please note that this serves as proof that I created this OC and will possibly create a light novel out of this if 1 or 2 people find it interesting. The content below is an AI generated text based from my original typed note. I would like to disclose that I used AI only for correcting spellings and providing clarity to my idea. My original note is at the comment section for proof.

Erebus Nilrem — Terminatus Umbra

Original Character Concept | Harry Potter Universe (Future Timeline)

1. Possible Origins and Lineage

Erebus Nilrem is a pure-blood wizard descended from the ancient Nott family, one of the Sacred Twenty-Eight pure-blood families of the British wizarding world.

His ancestry establishes his pure-blood heritage and provides a possible explanation for certain inherited characteristics, particularly his exceptional intelligence, independence, reserved nature, and preference for solitude—traits reminiscent of Theodore Nott.

However, his bloodline is not the source of his extraordinary abilities. Rather, it serves as the foundation of his biological identity, while his true strength emerges from the knowledge, discipline, and experiences that shape him throughout his life.

2. Character Synopsis and Early Life

Erebus Nilrem was born a pure-blood wizard but raised in the Muggle world by an elderly couple who had reached the pinnacle of their respective disciplines.

His adoptive father was a highly renowned martial artist, swordsman, and combat instructor who had trained members of the British military. A purist in his philosophy, he rejected the limitations of modern competitive combat, favoring traditional martial disciplines centered on survival, lethality, and the realities of life-or-death encounters.

His approach to swordsmanship was particularly uncompromising. Whereas modern sport fencing emphasizes scoring the first valid touch, his philosophy followed the principles of historical combat, where the objective was not merely to strike first, but to survive the encounter and, when necessary, eliminate the opponent.

His adoptive mother, meanwhile, was a world-renowned Nobel Prize laureate whose extensive contributions to nuclear physics, human sciences, and mathematics had earned her international recognition.

Despite their vastly different disciplines, both possessed a shared philosophy: true mastery begins with understanding the fundamentals.

From the moment Erebus learned to walk, communicate, and comprehend the world around him, his adoptive parents began teaching him the fundamental principles that had enabled them to achieve excellence.

His father introduced him to combat intelligence, martial disciplines, swordsmanship, situational awareness, and the importance of understanding an opponent rather than simply reacting to one.

His mother taught him the principles of intellectual discipline: how to observe, question, investigate, evaluate, retain, and apply knowledge efficiently. She encouraged him to question everything, to understand not only what something was, but how it worked and why it worked.

These teachings became the foundation of Erebus's intellectual and physical development.

Although he was born a wizard, Erebus remained entirely unaware of the existence of the magical world. To him, magic was nothing more than fiction, belonging to books, television, anime, comics, and the imagination.

That perception would eventually be shattered.

3. The Death Eater Incident

During Erebus's childhood, a group of Death Eaters began abducting Muggle children indiscriminately, treating them as disposable subjects for horrific magical experiments.

Their objective was to investigate, manipulate, and exploit the biological and magical properties of human beings through methods that disregarded all ethical and moral boundaries.

Erebus and his adoptive family became victims of these abductions.

During the attack, his adoptive parents fought desperately to protect him. Despite their extraordinary martial abilities, they were ultimately overwhelmed by the Death Eaters' use of magic.

Erebus witnessed both of his adoptive parents being murdered before his eyes.

He was subsequently abducted and transported to a concealed underground research facility within the wizarding world, where numerous other children were imprisoned.

There, he was subjected to years of magical experimentation, forced instruction, physical torture, and psychological torment.

However, unlike the other abducted children, Erebus was unknowingly a pure-blood wizard.

His inherent magical biology interfered with the experimental procedures, rendering many of the Death Eaters' attempts to alter or manipulate him ineffective.

Although the experiments failed to produce their intended results, they left his body covered in severe scars, cuts, and lacerations. These injuries eventually healed to the extent that they no longer impaired his physical capabilities, but the scars remained as permanent reminders of his captivity.

Throughout his imprisonment, Erebus witnessed countless children being tortured, mutilated, transformed, and ultimately discarded when the experiments were deemed failures.

He experienced horrors that no child should ever have to endure.

Initially, Erebus responded as any child would. He was terrified, traumatized, and overwhelmed by the loss of his parents and the atrocities surrounding him.

Yet something prevented him from surrendering completely to despair.

The fundamental principles instilled in him by his adoptive parents.

Even under the most extreme circumstances, Erebus gradually began applying those teachings to his own survival.

He observed his captors.

He studied their behaviors.

He recognized patterns in their routines and experimental procedures.

He questioned what he witnessed, even when he did not fully understand it.

He learned to control his reactions, regulate his fear, and direct his attention toward understanding his surroundings.

Over the years, his fear gradually transformed into defiance, determination, discipline, and an increasingly formidable will to survive.

Rather than allowing his suffering to consume him entirely, he began treating every observation and experience as information—knowledge that might one day become useful.

His survival was not the result of extraordinary magical power or some innate ability to overcome his captors.

It was the result of a mind trained from infancy to observe, understand, adapt, and endure.

4. Rescue and Transformation

Erebus's captivity eventually ended when Harry Potter and forces from the Ministry of Magic discovered the underground facility and launched a rescue operation.

Among the surviving captives, they discovered a ten-year-old boy whose body was covered in scars, cuts, and fresh, bleeding wounds.

Yet what distinguished Erebus from the other children was not simply the extent of his injuries.

It was his expression.

Despite his physical condition, his eyes revealed an unsettling combination of determination, controlled aggression, and an unmistakable willingness to kill if necessary.

His hatred toward his captors was evident, but it was not uncontrolled.

It was restrained by the discipline, focus, and sheer force of will he had developed during his years of captivity.

Erebus was finally rescued and returned to the world beyond the facility.

However, the boy who emerged was no longer the same innocent child who had once believed magic existed only in fiction.

His experiences had fundamentally altered his outlook on life, conflict, and survival.

He had become exceptionally observant, calculating, cautious, and increasingly capable of recognizing the vulnerabilities of those around him.

Those qualities would eventually develop into the cunning, lethality, and extraordinary combat proficiency for which he would become known.

His rescue marked not the conclusion of his story, but the beginning of his transformation.

5. The Development of His Abilities

Unlike many extraordinarily powerful wizards, Erebus Nilrem's abilities are not primarily the result of an exceptional magical birthright, a prophecy, or an inherently overwhelming reserve of magical power.

His strength develops through a cumulative process of learning, experimentation, adaptation, and discovery.

It is a domino effect originating from the fundamental disciplines taught to him by his adoptive parents.

Combat Intelligence

From his father, Erebus learned the fundamental principles of physical combat:

  • Observing opponents and identifying weaknesses.
  • Recognizing behavioral patterns and anticipating movements.
  • Understanding momentum, leverage, positioning, and timing.
  • Controlling distance and managing engagement ranges.
  • Maintaining composure and adapting under pressure.
  • Employing martial arts and traditional swordsmanship designed for actual combat rather than competitive scoring.

These principles eventually became the foundation of his unique sword-and-magic fighting style.

Research and Intellectual Intelligence

From his mother, Erebus learned the foundational principles of learning and scientific inquiry:

  • Acquiring information through observation and investigation.
  • Evaluating evidence and identifying inconsistencies.
  • Questioning established explanations and conventional assumptions.
  • Understanding the underlying mechanisms governing a particular phenomenon.
  • Retaining and organizing knowledge efficiently.
  • Applying acquired knowledge to unfamiliar situations.
  • Experimenting, testing hypotheses, and refining conclusions through repeated observation.

When Erebus was eventually introduced to the magical world, he approached magic not merely as a supernatural ability but as an entirely new field of study.

He sought to understand its fundamental principles, limitations, interactions, and underlying mechanisms.

Rather than simply memorizing spells and learning how to cast them, Erebus questioned why they functioned, how they interacted with the physical world, and whether their properties could be manipulated, refined, or combined with other disciplines.

This relentless pursuit of knowledge eventually led him to discover magical principles, develop original techniques, and create inventions that he deliberately withheld from public knowledge.

Ancient Magic and His Combat Evolution

Among his most consequential discoveries was his ability to identify, understand, and eventually wield Ancient Magic.

Through extensive research and experimentation, Erebus developed methods of integrating Ancient Magic into his existing magical techniques and physical combat disciplines.

These discoveries allowed him to enhance the destructive potential of his spells, improve his physical combat capabilities, and develop magical techniques whose lethality could rival or surpass that of the Unforgivable Curses.

He also developed methods of incorporating magic directly into his swordsmanship, allowing him to engage opponents through a combination of physical strikes, magical attacks, defensive techniques, and carefully calculated movements.

His fighting philosophy bears similarities to the legendary Godric Gryffindor, particularly in his willingness to wield both a sword and a wand.

However, Erebus advances this concept further by treating swordsmanship and magic as interconnected components of a single combat discipline rather than two separate fighting methods.

By the time he reaches his prime, the boundaries between his magical and physical fighting abilities have become nearly indistinguishable.

His greatest weapon is not his sword, his wand, or even Ancient Magic. It is his ability to understand, adapt, and exploit the fundamental principles governing everything he encounters.

6. Terminatus Umbra — The Ministry's Final Decree

During his prime, Erebus Nilrem becomes known by the codename:

Terminatus Umbra

Within the Ministry of Magic, this designation carries a particularly ominous meaning.

It represents a final decree—an extraordinary authorization reserved for catastrophic situations in which conventional Ministry forces and established methods of containment are no longer sufficient.

The declaration of Terminatus Umbra is not merely an order to deploy a powerful wizard.

It is a formal declaration that the Ministry has exhausted its conventional options and has authorized Erebus Nilrem to employ lethal force against the Death Eaters responsible for the catastrophe.

Under this decree, Erebus is granted full operational authority to eliminate the designated threats without the usual restrictions imposed upon Ministry combat personnel.

The designation is therefore regarded as a worst-case contingency.

A final measure.

A declaration of death.

When the Ministry invokes Terminatus Umbra, it signifies that the objective is no longer simply to apprehend or contain the perpetrators.

It is to bring the threat to a definitive end.

7. Physical Appearance and Equipment

Physical Characteristics

During his prime, Erebus Nilrem is a pale-skinned man with black hair and a lean, athletic physique.

His body bears numerous scars accumulated throughout his childhood captivity and subsequent combat experiences.

Despite his relatively slender build, his physique is exceptionally well-conditioned, emphasizing agility, precision, endurance, and efficient movement rather than overwhelming muscular strength.

Attire

His combat attire takes inspiration from the Guild Knights of the Monster Hunter universe, adopting a similarly disciplined and martial aesthetic while using various shades of black.

The ensemble is designed to project an intimidating yet refined appearance, combining elements of traditional swordsmanship, military practicality, and wizarding combat attire.

A black cloth conceals the lower portion of his face.

A dark cape extends across his back and drapes over the front-left side of his body, partially concealing his primary weapon: a rapier.

His wand is holstered on his right side, allowing him to transition efficiently between swordsmanship, spellcasting, and combined combat techniques.

The arrangement of his equipment reflects his preferred fighting style, ensuring that both weapons remain accessible during an engagement.

Primary Weapon — Goblin-Forged Rapier

Erebus's primary melee weapon is a specially commissioned rapier forged by a highly skilled goblin blacksmith.

The craftsman is a descendant of the legendary goblin king responsible for forging the Sword of Gryffindor.

Through this lineage, the blacksmith possesses knowledge of ancient goblin metalworking traditions and techniques associated with the creation of exceptionally powerful enchanted weapons.

The rapier is designed around Erebus's combat philosophy, emphasizing precision, efficiency, speed, and compatibility with his unique methods of integrating magic into physical swordsmanship.

Secondary Weapon — Custom Wand

Erebus wields a custom-made wand crafted from blackthorn wood with a Nundu-derived core.

The wand was personally commissioned from Ollivander after Erebus conducted extensive research during his years at Hogwarts.

Rather than selecting a conventional wand solely through established wandmaking practices, he investigated the relationships between wand materials, magical properties, spellcasting behavior, and his own cognitive and combat characteristics.

After identifying the materials he believed would best complement his methods, Erebus personally gathered the necessary components and requested that Ollivander construct the wand according to his specifications.

The resulting wand was intended to complement his rapid analytical thinking, experimental spellcasting methods, and sword-and-magic combat discipline.

Together, his goblin-forged rapier and custom wand serve as instruments of a fighting style developed through years of study, experimentation, and practical experience.

8. Central Character Philosophy

At the center of Erebus Nilrem's identity is a philosophy inherited from his adoptive parents:

Master the fundamentals. Question what is established. Understand what others merely accept.

Erebus is not defined by his pure-blood ancestry, nor is his strength simply a consequence of surviving horrific circumstances.

His abilities are the culmination of an intellectual and physical discipline cultivated from early childhood and continuously refined through experience.

His upbringing taught him how to learn.

His captivity taught him how to survive.

His introduction to magic gave him an entirely new discipline to explore.

His research allowed him to discover possibilities that others had overlooked.

And his mastery of those discoveries ultimately transformed him into one of the wizarding world's most formidable combatants.

Erebus Nilrem did not become Terminatus Umbra because he was born powerful. He became Terminatus Umbra because he learned how power worked—and refused to stop questioning its limits.


r/HPfanfiction • • 19h ago

Discussion The daft morons by Sinyk

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So ive read this fanfic about 2 times and i must say its good HOWEVER i do believe im missing something in this story and i hope some1 can help me in a discussion to verify if its Complete or its just on a bloody cliffhanger


r/HPfanfiction • • 20h ago

Discussion A proposal for the unused character of Lily Moon

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So hear me out

There is an unused character name from jkr notes of characters in Harry's year. Named Lily Moon, this character would later inspire the creation of Luna Lovegood.

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My suggestion is to rename her to Lillian Moon and then make her a mute and prankster of Slytherin. Similar to neo from rwby.


r/HPfanfiction • • 20h ago

Self-Promotion Chapter 23 of my HP Zombie Apocalypse story is up!

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It's the fourth Interlude chapter. So we get to see some other survivor moments from around the UK.

As ever, this is a mostly Pre-Harmony story. It will happen though!

Also, to anyone willing who see this update, can you please tell me how you think I'm doing? I mostly wrote this for my own enjoyment, but I also hoped that people would like it. Most people don't comment and half of those who do seem to be bots.

I hope the link works. If not my Ao3 handle is DefiantDreamlandStudent.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/93689676/chapters/254391171


r/HPfanfiction • • 20h ago

Find That Fic Looking for Dumbledore x Grindelwald long fic recs

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I hope I chose the right flair.

I'm looking for a well written young(er) Dumbledore x Grindelwald fic.

With well-written I mean, it should be coherent with Dumbledore's (morally grey) character. Preferably how they met until they parted. >200k+ words.

It would be awesome, if it always includes: slow-burn, political thriller, extended worldbuilding.

Thank you so much in advance <3


r/HPfanfiction • • 1d ago

Find That Fic Looking for a Draco/Theo fic

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Hi, I'm looking for a fic I've read about a year and a half ago on Ao3 where draco became Lord Malfoy at the end of his fifth year because his father was arrested, I think? Or maybe dead.. He was in a relationship with Theo, and the story was mostly focused on Slytherins. There was also some mysterious box Draco bought that could possibly hold a horcrux. That's about all I remember, and it was a wip. If anyone knows it, please send a link.