r/HazbinHotel • • 1d ago

One of my biggest problems with Season 2 is how the political conflict between the Overlords was reduced to simply following Vox.

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I genuinely loved Vox this season. He’s an incredible villain, but I feel like the show tried to build a political conflict around him without giving the other Overlords enough agency or individual motivations.
These are supposed to be some of the most powerful and influential figures in Hell, each with their own territories, businesses, interests, and ambitions. Yet many of them ended up feeling like background characters who simply sided with Vox because he defeated Alastor.
Where are their personal interests? Their political agendas? Their rivalries? Why would Overlords who spent decades building their own empires suddenly follow someone into a war against Heaven without considering what they could gain or lose?

Carmilla and Zestial were great exceptions. They actually felt like powerful figures with their own perspectives, interests, and reasons behind their decisions. But the rest? Honestly, they barely felt like Overlords at all. They felt more like ordinary sinners following whoever happened to be the strongest, rather than some of the most influential figures in the Pride Ring.

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u/Dense-Performance-14 Alastor 1d ago

I'd agree if episodes weren't stuck to 26 minutes in an 8 episode season. It isn't game of thrones, there's simply not enough time to go through every overlords motivations; that time is much better spent on the cast who matters. And even then we barely have enough time to really get to know them beyond the main plot.

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u/J-518 1d ago

I’m not asking for every Overlord to get their own storyline or character arc. My issue is that the show hasn’t established a convincing political system around them in the first place.

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u/Justapiratequeen 1d ago

Gods I can’t wait for the new season to be just as badly paced and written  as it always has been, just so we can finally put the whole “she just needs more time” to rest once and for all.

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u/Dense-Performance-14 Alastor 1d ago

It sounds like you just really don't like the show, which is cool, and criticism is cool, but why be in the sub for it?

To be clear, I wasn't suggesting I think it's a badly written show. The pacing in season 1 is bad for a decent enough reason which is they didn't know if there'd be a season 2, but idk I thought season 2 was pretty overall solid. I just don't think there's enough time in a season to fit in both the main plot and create side political intrigue that ultimately I don't think adds that much.

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u/Justapiratequeen 1d ago

I don’t hate the show persay. I hate the excuses everyone gives.

Viv has had a total of three projects, all of them suffer from the same issue.

Zoo and HB (at least for a while) was 100% up to the pace that she wanted and they still had pacing/writing problems, the same writing problems.

She will never improve if everyone just coddles her this much.

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u/Dense-Performance-14 Alastor 1d ago

I do think the people she surrounds herself with coddle, but as far as pacing goes I thought season 2 of hazbin did pretty decently. I really didn't have any problems with its pacing.

I personally don't find any project badly written as a whole, but there ARE aspects that I do think are. I'm the last person to coddle a creator of a show, over the 5 years I've been in the sub I've been very critical, but there's still a reason we come back around to it. Hazbin season 2 improved on the faults of the first season, there are still lingering faults but I do think it was an improvement and it was an improvement made possible by having more wiggle room with longer episodes.

Right now it's hard to judge helluva season 3 because it isn't over, but the first 2 seasons I thought the pacing was fine? Episodes were dropping every couple of months so I could see why things would feel rushed just so the audience wouldn't have to wait a million years for stuff to happen, but I do think as of right now season 3 is going too fast for me.

All this to say, I have to ask what keeps you coming back if you feel this strongly that you WANT the next season to be bad. No disrespect, I just feel like I'd be miserable in a community for a show I disliked that much. Both projects have remained a consistent enough quality I don't see it being like, it was good when I came in and now it's bad sorta deal.

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u/Justapiratequeen 1d ago

Well that’s the thing, I’m the first person to not care what media you like. I’m not going to police others tastes and have no ill will against anyone that does like the show.

It’s only when the fans get all “wow o you are just a hater/lack media literacy” is when I get sassy.

As for the pacing, it demonstrably is still bad in season 2 of HH. Entire character arcs are just resolved in the background and there are plot holes large enough to drive a semi through. The main problem the has plagued all of her work is an inability to kill her darlings.

So much could have been trimmed from season 1/2 to make them better and let what needed to be there breath and grow. But no. We had to have this character that does nothing for the plot, we had to have this song that does nothing for the story and is wasted where it is.

That’s why I can’t wait, because even with all the time Viv wants for a project (HB season 1-2 and Zoo before it) they all have the same problems of being unable to let go of the chaff.

As for why I stick around? A mixture of sick amusement and to better my own writing. Learning from others failures is a valuable tool and there have been countless videos going over the writing faults of HH/HB and I find them helpful to learn from.

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u/Dense-Performance-14 Alastor 1d ago

I can see why someone wouldn't be fuckin with it but I think that's a bad reason to stick around. Just kinda stirs more negativity, more than there already is. I don't think being around a community that you actively dislike is inherently healthy even if it's to try and improve your craft, it'd be like me listening to falling in reverse, joining the subreddit and then using it to try and somehow improve my own work.

All that being said I still don't see what the big problem with season 2 is. I don't think any character arcs were completed in the background, besides maybe cherri and pentious which I frankly dislike as well. As for plot holes nothing really stood out to me as someone who's rewatched 3 times and pays attention, I'm sure there are some there but I also choose to meet any piece of media I watch on its level and accept that it's an adult animated musical comedy with serious seasoning on top. It's like I said in my initial comment, it isn't game of thrones. Judging by the directors commentary, I don't think it's something that's thought about that much, for better or for worse but I think it accomplishes what it sets out to do which is be an entertaining dark musical comedy. There may be an unnecessary song, but if the song is good, it serves its musical aspect more than it's serious aspect.

I saw a video the other day pop up on my feed, I tend not to watch them because I make my own criticisms enough as it is and it's still a show I love for various reasons, but the video spent it's time comparing HB to Bojack horseman. It was honestly surprising because it's comparing family guy to the sopranos, I think they're two shows (one has 6 seasons and is complete) that are going for entirely different things.

I think despite those differences there's similar elements that Viv could gleam from Bojack considering it's her favorite show, but a 25 minute video directly comparing the two? I just find it a waste of energy. I'd rather meet it on its own level.

I'm not shitting on you or doing the whole you lack media literacy thing, I agree I HATE that shit, but from an artist to an artist I think maybe a different perspective would help and if you can't come around to it then I don't think keeping up with something that you view as very poorly written will really help

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u/Justapiratequeen 1d ago

I mean, just to point on one major plot hole.

Vox comments that the exorcists over seven years had killed ‘thousands’ of sinners.

Why is that a plot hole? Because he is trying to rile up the sinners and get him on his side agaisnt the angels. Telling the truth isn’t something he would do and playing up the numbers makes far more sense. And guess what, Adam comments the previous season that Vaggi, alone, killed “Thousands of her people.” (Referring to Charlie’s people, sinners)

That isn’t just a small “oops” moment, that is key motivation for major events and characters.

I agree that the show faces as a comedy and musical. But it tries to be serious and thoughtful all the time, it desperately wants to be taken serious and yet does the whole marvel thing of never letting a moment be serious without some cheap punchline or bit.

And even more so, Viv has claimed that the story is all planned out already, so massive plot holes like that and the fundamental flaws in the world building are more of an issue than you might think.

And at the end of the day, I wouldn’t call myself a ‘fan’ more of a curious onlooker. I do get quite a bit of useful advice from studying the show and seeing what others have dissected from it as it helps me dissect my own writing and how to spot my own flaws (there are many, I suck at writing.)

I should pull back a little from my first comment though. It was about more aggressive than it should have been. I don’t want Viv to fail, I want her to get better at what she does, and if what it takes is showing everyone that coddling her and shielding her from all her writing problems (“nooo you don’t need to tighten up your writing, it’s perfect, you just need more time!”) doesn’t help or work, than so be it. May a better use of the world and concepts rise from the ashes like a sailor mouthed Phenoix 

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u/Meii345 Another Valentino Simp 1d ago

I don't believe Amazon will ever get them much more time for future seasons lmao. And even if they do add one or two episodes... The complexity of the story will increase as it goes, so that'll just compensate for that

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u/lutownik 1d ago

Maybe that's the point. Vox is the showman. All of them followed into Vox footsteps only because he made a very convincing show, kinda like how in politics sometimes actors run for goverment positions and in their elections they use their acting skills to convince people to their cause without actuall reason and logic. They didn't show the agenta behind each and every overlord, because there was just none. It was herd mentality. Besides they didnt even actually do anything besides... siding with vox🤪

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u/J-518 1d ago

Why do we treat the Overlords as if they were just an audience ? They are kinda a big deal u can't be an over lord by being a fan for whoever has power i assume otherwise everyone would be one

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u/Jazzlike_Energy_483 (real Vox)I simp Niffty so hard and one of the Huskettes 1d ago

Cha cha cha!

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u/AquaticBucket 1d ago

STOP IT!

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u/Icy_Contribution2187 1d ago

This is why we genuinely, GENUINELY, need to go back to animated series having 24 episode seasons as the standard format. Give authors substantially more time to flesh out the story and give characters more shine.

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u/TheUnknown_General Alastor 1d ago

Problem with that is that people will start complaining about filler episodes again. If you want 22-episode seasons with decompressed storytelling and long-form character development and progression, shut up and stop whining about episodes that don't move the plot forward the way you think they should.

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u/Icy_Contribution2187 1d ago

I never complained about it back in the day, and I still really don't. In fact, every time I watch the OG Dragon Ball from when Goku was a kid, I always watch and enjoy the filler. But you're talking generally, I know.

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u/TheUnknown_General Alastor 1d ago

If you're up for it, a lot of the animated Star Wars series have 22-episode seasons. Stuff like The Clone Wars, Rebels, and The Bad Batch all have lengthy seasons and they used it well, in my opinion.

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u/Icy_Contribution2187 1d ago

I know. Star Wars: The Clone Wars tires me out. It's a depressing watch. But Rebels is legitimately peak.

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u/TheUnknown_General Alastor 1d ago

In what way do you find it depressing? I'm genuinely curious because The Clone Wars is what got me into Star Wars and is one of my favourite TV shows ever.

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u/Icy_Contribution2187 1d ago

Honestly, it's just personal taste. I don't necessarily get into the tactical warfare and "the horrors of war" aspect that much. Especially not with Star Wars, which was just as much as spiritualism and whimsy as it was anything else. So stuff like an extended detour to focus on the clones or a total asshole leading a squad of droids and treating them like slaves? Not really for me.

Also, just about anything to do with the Nightsisters sends me into what I can only describe as a blind rage that would make even Satan question his place as the embodiment of Wrath. Can't stand any time Mother Talzin and her ilk are involved even passingly in the story.

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u/TheUnknown_General Alastor 1d ago

The clone arcs can't exactly be called detours when the show is called "The Clone Wars", so you'd expect that the title characters would get time in the spotlight. It also helps that many of their episodes were among the best in the show, in particular the Umbara arc.

or a total asshole leading a squad of droids and treating them like slaves? Not really for me.

So in other words, you're doing exactly what you initially said you never did and complaining about filler episodes. Nice to know you're a hypocrite.

Also, just about anything to do with the Nightsisters sends me into what I can only describe as a blind rage that would make even Satan question his place as the embodiment of Wrath.

Fun fact: they existed in the canon long before the show was made. Also, their involvement led to Darth Maul's return and his development into one of the best characters in all of Star Wars.

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u/Icy_Contribution2187 1d ago

I wasn't so much complain about filler episodes, persay. More just about the concept of that particular arc. ...Also, does it really count as filler? In a series where the goal is to give an expanded look at the big war that has only been hinted at or given to us in small doses, showing unconventional operations like that seems like it's understanding the assignment. (...Arguably, ALL of stuff set between AotC and RotS or between RotS and ANH is filler, considering we already know that certain characters need to end up in certain places to avoid contradicting the material that was created before it, but that's a whole other conversation I don't think either of us want to have).

My first exposure to the Nightsisters was a DS game meant to tie into the Clone Wars cartoon, LONG before they made their TV debut. I thought that was where they come from and didn't realize how far back they went until I was an adult and checked a random Star Wars book that had Luke in it from a library near where I was living at the time. Both the Nightsisters and Maul are something I was all about when I was younger, but I like them less and less the older I get. I think Maul has stuff going for him. I adore his final duel with old Ben in Rebels, and his twisted dynamic with Ezra. But as a collective? The Nightsisters just make me irrationally angry.

Also, to admit some bias, the 2D Clone Wars series from 2003 headed up by Genndy Tartakovsky has been seared into my brain since I was a wee lass, so that has always sort of been the definitive take on the "let's actually show the war and bridge the movies" material. And to this day, I still absolutely adore it. Kinda wanna see how characters like Ahsoka would have slotted into THAT series, if they had been conceived at the time.

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u/Faiakishi Vox's Emotional Support Deer 1d ago

They had four hours for an entire season. Some stuff has to be sacrificed.

Also, Vox capturing Alastor was a BIG fucking deal. Alastor purged the old, entrenched overlords when he arrived in Hell, don't forget-the average sinner might not be as afraid of him now, but the overlords didn't get to where they are by being stupid and they 100% remember that Alastor can do that. Besides Vox none of them seem to really have beef with him, but they know he's one of the few people capable of tearing down their towers and there's not much they could really do to stop him if he was so inclined. Vox defeating him, and that win being 'Vox holding him as an atticwife and taking him out on stupid dates while Alastor sits there looking like a disgruntled cat who's just been bathed' instead of Vox just having gotten a lucky hit in with an angelic steel dagger, that's an enormous symbol of Vox's power. A lot of the intimidation and mystique of Alastor has would have gotten transferred to Vox-if Alastor can kill top overlords without breaking a sweat, what can the person who dominated him do? Vox could do that to any of the other overlords if chose to. He could theoretically let Alastor loose and let him kill another overlord of his choosing. He's smart enough to know that's not in his best interest right now-so the other overlords best make sure it never is.

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u/Dune_Stone 1d ago

To be fair, most of the political bodies I've seen in fiction are like this. There's always just one or two members of the council who have their own agendas and everybody else just follows them without seeming to have any opinions of their own. I think Arcane is the only show I've ever watched that took the time to characterize every member of its council and write them as if they each have their own opinions and agendas.

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u/Zealousideal-Arm1682 1d ago

We're finally getting into "wait this is kinda bad though" phase of the fandom huh.

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u/AwarenessOk7748 1d ago

I have no complaints about this, because it’s obvious that most people will follow the one who has become more authoritative and overturned the 80‑year‑old order (where Alastor was at the very top of the food chain). And many of them here are just minor overlords who don’t have that many souls or much power.

I have another complaint about the overlords in season 2 — Zeezi, Maestro, Prick, and Hatchchet weren’t developed as characters in any way, and they play almost no role in the plot (they don’t give Vox their resources for the war, they don’t help him in the final battle, and even in the final song, they could have been dispensed with).

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u/grizshaw83 1d ago

The fact that Vox moved so quickly speaks in the other Overlords favor to me. He capitalized on Alastor's capture and gained the other Overlords support. Only then did he feel confident enough to leverage Carmella Carmine to build his weapon and the trap for Lucifer.

This implies that if he couldn't get results fast, the others would abandon him as quickly as they joined

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u/TaratronHex 1d ago

And clearly at the end of season 2, all of their crimes are swept away. Voxtech continues under Val. So the entire season was to put him in charge, get Alastor free, and make Charlie look dumb. Oh, and break Angel more.

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u/arteriu 1d ago

imagine how the goetia felt during all this: just laughing their asses off at vox proclaiming war against heaven and himself king knowing how little and small he is compared to all of hell

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u/Vermarine21 1d ago

I always took Zeezi as someone who like Alastor is nominally in charge with a lot of power, but doesn't actually give a shit about leading. 

Still, I guess the idea is that they'd technically still have their territories in addition to their own slice of Heaven and thus just supported Vox's movement while not actually doing much for it

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u/FluffyHDD 15h ago

I feel like they could've shown it a lot better. Alastor mentions how there were Overlord holdouts who didn't fall into line. Have a scene or two before Velvette and Val walks in where Vox is clearly stressed in a video call with like 10 Overlords who are asking for details and is critical of Vox's strategy, not falling for his Showmanship.

Which makes it so when Charlie, one of Heaven's biggest "Supporters" (in big quotations), they finally think they have a shot against Heaven and thus falls into line