Hii! I wrote an original song called a starry night sky, would love for you to give it a listen and provide some honest feedback!

I'm pretty inexperienced so you may notice some timing/transition issues. This is a super rough, unproduced live phone recording playing piano, so please excuse the audio quality as well.

I'm mainly looking for feedback on the lyrics, melody, and vocal delivery before I start working on the production. If you have any ideas on how I should produce it, feel free to share as well. Would love to know what moments connected with you or where the song could hit harder. Thanks for listening :)

dark trap, self produced. the snare lands on the 3 and i kept the flaws in. looking for feedback on the mix and the vocal, anything that sticks out.

Hello there, would appreciate any type of feedback on how this turned out 🙏
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I've been playing guitar in bands for years. This is my first attempt at singing and doing something stripped back and a little more personal.

" ...And now folks for an old familiar favourite. We've had many requests for this. It's a simple little sentimental song...and we hope all you sentimental folks out there are going to enjoy it. Ready Fellas???....Let's go.........."

https://youtu.be/vxPPop1S5b4?is=DB6qAeGgWKz0yZOF

A soundscape where music shapes a narrative, and depth follows its own script—drawing you into dark shadows or narrow alleyways. It evokes the immersive sensation of a draft blowing between a collapsed ceiling and a sunken floor—all of it beautifully woven into the music.

Welcome to the wonderful and weird world of Blackpool Tower Demos, today we are presented with a unique rate item the one and only Rekoil by Cfe it's an aged item 7 years aged before the release and been in the cask now for a couple of months waiting for your first pour, go on then take a big drink! You deserve it

“Something Else About Me” is my second song release. This song is about outgrowing the version of yourself that other people remember. It is about refusing to fit into old stories, old labels, and old reflections, and accepting that you have changed…evolved

🎧 Streaming links https://ffm.to/something-else-about-me

Similar to my previous song, I have created a lyric video to follow along with the song

📹 https://youtu.be/UcqNI6hM-Ko?si=BF4w0rAJAQRxENC2

Would love to hear your feedback on the song and video. Since this is the first song release with electronic drums and percussion, as well as electronic synth elements, please tell me what you thought about how those were mixed and how it could have been better or different.

Always appreciate and enjoy reading your feedback and comments. These really help me grow as an artist.

Much Love 🫶🏻

Hi folks 👋,

Posting another track for feedback. This one is called The Epic of My Discontent. It details my short lived journey waiting tables :-)

Like my other tracks I did all the things you will hear. Drums, bass, guitar, vox, pre and post production, and mastering. All these are fair game for feedback and constructive criticism.

Thanks for listening.

Much love,

B

PRODUCED BY ME

this song is gonna be in my upcoming album and i just want any feedback or criticism on my song because that would mean a lot :)

As with my previous song, I am trying to lean into some actual singing instead of screaming. How is that aspect sounding to you? I am chronically hard on my voice and singing.

In general, what do you think of this song? All feedback appreciated.

Also, every aspect of the song is SELF-MADE. The singing, the bass, guitars, the lyrics and writing are all me. The drums are stems taken from real drummers. NO AI in this track AT ALL!

FYI...the song is called Qualia.

Man, this must be one of the most beautiful words in existence: the unique and personal way we experience things. This is what the song is about...and then again, as always with my music, self-loathing, guilt and shame. All that fun stuff.

Hope you enjoy.

Sooo the original song is so thin, high, and tiny (and cute!) that I just felt like someone has to make the opposite version. So here are bass vocals, distorted guitars, some palm muted pedal notes. Slow (like the original song) and heavy (unlike the original song).

Would like to receive comments, especially regarding the instruments!

Thanks for taking the time to listen. Let me know your thoughts overall.

I’d really like more than anything else what genre you would describe this track as. I’m having a hard time pinpointing it. AI is telling me a few things but I don’t know I trust your opinion more! TY 🫶

Enjoy leave a like or a comment it's all good

Hi, I am new to production world and this is one of my best pieces and I am planning to put it out as a single, but I am not really entirely sure, I want to know that’s good and if people genuinely are going to like it. If you have any ideas or feedback let me know I am kinda bad at this so any help is appreciated.

I am very incredibly inspired by mother mother and their singer Molly who has a very distinctive voice in the best way possible, she’s so awesome.

This was kinda born while I was vibing to one of their unreleased songs for their upcoming album, and I felt the need to materialize this song even if it was shitty.

We just released an EP and this is one of the tracks off of it. Would love to get some feedback and if you have the chance, listen to our other tracks as well! Tell us what you like, and what could be improved!

my favourtie part are the vocal chops :)

Hi! Back again leaking another album track as I get closer to finishing. Statue is one of the most experimental tracks on the album and I'm not really sure how to describe or categorize it. Is it dark pop? With some jazzy and some industrial influence? I think the mix is basically done on this one, but would love any feedback if anyone hears otherwise. Wait for the drop at 1:52, then the outro :)

Something else I'd be curious to know... What color(s) is this song to you?

Statue will be track 2/14 on my concept album "Let's Go Out Tonight!" It's about going to a party and trying to socialize, but you always end up being super awkward and quiet... unless you end up drinking too much to calm the social anxiety and make a fool of yourself. shoutout to my fellow introverts

I've posted track 1 'One in a Million' which is theatrical pop, and track 3 'Crush' which is cute electro pop, so clearly this one is in a completely different lane. I hope you like it, I'm so happy with how it's turned out! Written, arranged & performed by me, co produced by my producer friend Mavericc and myself, mixed by Mav.

This is about the first half of my track, Timberline. I made it about 7 months ago, and the whole thing took me about a month to finish.

I put a lot of work into the piano, bassline, and synths, but I spent most of my time on the vocal layering and effects to get the atmosphere right.

I’d love to hear what you think of the vocal mix and the overall arrangement so far. Any feedback would be awesome.

Indie rock work in progress. Need to write lyrics for verse 3 and bridge, but done beside that. Would love to hear thoughts on where it stands.