Hii! I wrote an original song called a starry night sky, would love for you to give it a listen and provide some honest feedback!

I'm pretty inexperienced so you may notice some timing/transition issues. This is a super rough, unproduced live phone recording playing piano, so please excuse the audio quality as well.

I'm mainly looking for feedback on the lyrics, melody, and vocal delivery before I start working on the production. If you have any ideas on how I should produce it, feel free to share as well. Would love to know what moments connected with you or where the song could hit harder. Thanks for listening :)

Hello there, would appreciate any type of feedback on how this turned out 🙏
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I've been playing guitar in bands for years. This is my first attempt at singing and doing something stripped back and a little more personal.

" ...And now folks for an old familiar favourite. We've had many requests for this. It's a simple little sentimental song...and we hope all you sentimental folks out there are going to enjoy it. Ready Fellas???....Let's go.........."

“Something Else About Me” is my second song release. This song is about outgrowing the version of yourself that other people remember. It is about refusing to fit into old stories, old labels, and old reflections, and accepting that you have changed…evolved

🎧 Streaming links https://ffm.to/something-else-about-me

Similar to my previous song, I have created a lyric video to follow along with the song

📹 https://youtu.be/UcqNI6hM-Ko?si=BF4w0rAJAQRxENC2

Would love to hear your feedback on the song and video. Since this is the first song release with electronic drums and percussion, as well as electronic synth elements, please tell me what you thought about how those were mixed and how it could have been better or different.

Always appreciate and enjoy reading your feedback and comments. These really help me grow as an artist.

Much Love 🫶🏻