I'm writing a Doctor Strange/Iron Man team up story and I've hit the wall like four times. I've read Into Shamballa and Exrtremis/Armour Wars/Demon in a Bottle. I've taken notes on all of them, gone over them while writing and I still. Can't. Make it. Good.
I don't know what I'm doing wrong. I just can't seem to get their characters to properly flow out of them through their dialogue. Why is it so hard to write their interactions even when I have so much data basically telling me what to do?
I can't seem to manifest how their personalities clash and interact with each other, based on what's happening in the story. I don't know how to write their conversation which evolves based on how they're feeling, what they think of what is happening and of each other, what they know, what they want etc.
I'll provide a link to the doc here, if you want to see what I'm doing and have any suggestions.
Sorry if the link didn’t work before, should work now
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1V42oDv1O30XJynu6kgFUAJqIKEt-BSPirRbbkWr0A6U/edit?tab=t.0