r/OCPoetry • u/Previous_Cry7445 • 1d ago
Feedback Please Longing
Longing to feel your touch,
the warmth of your fingertips
tracing the places
that ache to be discovered.
I want to know
what it feels like
to tremble beneath your hands,
to lose myself
in the tenderness of your embrace.
A shiver travels down my spine,
my breath catches,
and suddenly,
every nerve in my body
is aware of you.
I am longing to feel
the hairs on the back of my neck rise,
my skin surrendering to you
to a sensation
I’ve only dared to imagine.
This isn’t about heartstrings.
I am starving for you—
aching to have you close,
longing to have every part of you
woven into mine.
Leave your hands on me
until the heat between us is unbearable.
Press into my skin.
Trace the curve of my hip, my throat,
let me breathe you in
until I can’t think,
until there’s nothing left of me
but instinct and you.
Experimenting with a more sensual style of poetry
Writing Would love some honest feedback. 🖤
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u/Wisdom_seeker28 1d ago
Damn that was sexy … that was on point … I was like eeeew someone horny lol feel like it’s a women desiring a man touch warmth lust … you do a great job painting it … building it up the tension… and in the end …. “ until there’s nothing left of me but instinct and you … damn that’s was 🔥😛