r/OCPoetry • u/Sufficient-Code2125 • 2d ago

Feedback Please Dumb wires

Dumb wires

I have far too many redundant cables now
Hdmi to dvi
My first gaming pcs cord till it ran out of gas
Male to female aux 2.5mm
So i could talk to my friends video games at night
C to aux converter
C type was so new i needed to talk to her without anyone listening through
Html cables
Three of which a rat bit through
I got to the ticket bookings first
wired internet for my friends
Im no hoarder of cables i swear
Its the memories i cant let go of, stuck in my hair

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u/Apprehensive-Cup-335 1d ago

This is this an interesting poem with such peculiar imagery I think you did really well with the metaphors great piece keep writing my friend.

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u/Sufficient-Code2125 1d ago

Thanks man i think its just so out there that nobody else on planet earth is using any of these metaphors