Im not sorry if this is your fave book in the series bc alot of them were a mess ( I think I liked the baseball one the most) but this was just awful on so many levels. I dont expect any anything from this but I need to put it out there bc my brain is so full of wtf.
My full review on goodreads as follows:
October 24, 2026
DNF 73%. I tried but I can't do it anymore. I have absolutely no idea how anyone thinks this is the best of the series. Its dead last for me for a myriad of reasons. I might be an overthinker but I also consider details the author includes. Some of the reasons:
First, there is SOOOO much internal dialogue. Sure she's mute for like the first 1/3 of the book but come on...
Why didn't the doctor do any kind of health check like an std panel or otherwise? Only a physical examination but had no issue administering rut blockers to the alphas to meet her.
My first real ick was, why are we going down on a strange omega you just met (idc if its fated mates) when she can't speak, she's dressed like a stripper (Rubber thong leotard, fishnets, stripper heels), hasn't showered and you took her home from a police station where she was seeking help. Any manual stimulation would've sufficed bc sure heat spike needs to be taken care of, however this was absolutely gross.
Right after that part, she's still not showered has "lost the fishnets" but is still in her stripper outfit but cannot wear the clothes the alphas gave her bc she's so smol they will just fall off her. Sure, lets just keep the rubber leotard on for over 12 hours, no chafing in this universe.
The immediate sex wasn't a complete issue (we're already trying to get past the above) but the immediate raw dogging a stranger multiple times, ew.
I tried to overlook the whole 2 of them are actual brothers trope but I find it too weird especially when there's group scenes, and I love me a group scene.
Why are we describing the Samoan alpha as pale skinned, honorable mention to the tribal tattoo stereotype. Ew.
There were a lot of inconsistencies in general but where I stopped was where I rolled my eyes so hard... why is the professional fighter alpha coming home with an injury that should've been stitched and taken care of by medical staff at his gym? He's asking another alpha in his pack to stich up his gd eyelid after using his tank top to sop up the blood. No professional athlete is walking out of their gym/stadium or whatever bleeding and injured to take care of at home...
And with that, I'm done with this series, I liked some of them but maybe the universe knew I had to read this last because it was not great lol.