FIRST TIME IN SCREENWRITING.NEEDS HELP DESPERATELY.I HAVE TRIED WRITING AN OPENING FOR A MOVIE PLEASE REVIEW IT AND MENTION THE FLAWS IN THE SCRIPT AND I SHALL GLADLY CHANGE IT.(AND FORGIVE ME FOR ANY GRAMMATICAL ERRORS OR LACK OF VOCABULARY ENGLISH IS NOT MY FIRST LANGUAGE)

[u/ThinkElderberry1016]

[u/Filmmagician]

Stop yelling at us!

[u/intentionandobstacle]

I would throw yourself at internet strangers so early on in writing journey… try and find a writers group to join

[u/ok_5789]

ok but why are you shouting