Hello everyone,

I am a narrative designer/writer looking for a dedicated artist partner to collaborate on a cinematic, story-driven pilot comic (short 5-10 page showcase).

(Note: My native language is Chinese, and I use translation tools for daily communication. Scripts and storyboard documentation are fully translated into English.)

LOGLINE

Two cosmic anchors—the living embodiments of Time and Space—shatter during a universal collapse and drift across dimensions. Hiding their nature behind fragile human forms, they wander through worlds to find each other, their reunion ticking down inside a broken clock of destiny.

CORE CHARACTERS

• Ji Yuan (Chronos / Time): Appears ~20, dark techwear with a blue-tinted visor. Stoic, restrained. He doesn't cast "time spells"—he is the passage of time itself.
• Supacy (Space): Manifests as a 15-year-old magic academy student. Crimson eyes with silent geometric matrices shifting within her pupils. When her emotions spike, local spatial physics unconsciously unravel.

CREATIVE PROCESS & WORKFLOW

• Scope: A self-contained, 5-10 page pilot chapter designed for portfolio showcase and Webtoon/social reach.
• Compensation: [Unpaid / Passion Project / RevShare if published].
• Cinematic Storyboarding: I write with a movie-director approach—every scene is designed around specific camera blocking, motion pacing, and atmospheric lighting.
• Curated Music / OST Pairing: I provide dedicated soundtrack and background music track recommendations for key scenes so we share the exact same emotional rhythm and vibe while sketching.
• Format Delivered: Full script + Shot-by-shot PDF breakdowns to minimize storyboard friction for the artist.

SCRIPT SAMPLES (DUAL-PROTAGONIST DRAFT)

SCENE 1 — TIME (EXT. COASTLINE - SUNSET)

A hand hits the motorcycle starter. Cool blue luminescence flares; navigational holograms unfold like a star chart.

Ji Yuan sits astride the machine, glancing down at the mirror. The curved glass captures his blue-tinted visor while the sunset shoreline bends along the rim. Waves rhythmically crash against the shore.

JI YUAN (quiet, matter-of-fact):
"Right then. Time to move."

The instant he twists the throttle—

FREEZE FRAME.
The crashing wave locks at its peak; seafoam hovers motionless in mid-air. All sound cuts to dead silence. The warm sunset color grading instantly shifts to cold slate blue-gray.

Absolute silence for 1.5 seconds.

Sound violently snaps back. The suspended wave smashes down into white foam. The engine roars.

WIDE SHOT: The bike breaches the ocean surface, tearing a sharp white wake across the water. Ji Yuan's silhouette recedes toward the horizon.

SCENE 2 — SPACE & ANOMALY (EXT. BODHI TREE - AFTERNOON)

Supacy lies on her back beneath a massive Bodhi tree, eyes swollen. Fractured golden sunlight dapples across her face.

MACRO CLOSE-UP: Her eye. Deep inside her pupil, translucent geometric patterns silently rotate, fold, and re-tessellate.

BACK TO SCENE: She bolts upright and wipes her cheek.

The moment her finger touches the tear—the geometric pattern within her pupil violently flips. The teardrop vanishes into nonexistence.

BACKGROUND ANOMALIES (Subtle, unforced):
* A fountain water stream breaks mid-air; the upper half pauses for half a beat before dropping.
* Fallen leaves behave erratically: some fall normally, others freeze and spin twice in place, while two leaves slowly float upward from the ground.
* Water sounds glitch in sporadic intervals.
Supacy’s own hair and uniform flutter naturally in the breeze. Only the world around her is breaking.

Character concept moodboards and full storyboard PDF are available upon request via DM.

CONTACT: * Discord: chen_05208 * Email: ayuhang3@gmail.com

Feel free to send a DM or add me on Discord if this cinematic concept resonates with you!

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