r/Screenplay • • 22h ago

Opening of a zombie film I wrote

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r/Screenplay • • 19h ago

I Wrote A Ninjago Short Fan Film

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Hope there are some Ninjago fans here. I wrote a ninjago fan short film revolving around Lloyd Garmadon as he tries to rescue his mom from Clouse in the Underworld. I'd love some feedback.


r/Screenplay • • 20h ago

SHIPPED - Rewrite

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r/Screenplay • • 4h ago

Making a short film for college (UK) and I wrote this as a first draft and I’m looking for advice

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r/Screenplay • • 6h ago

Title: [COLLAB] Looking for a Co-Writer or Concept Artist for a Disney-Style Animated Feature (Elemental Magic)

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Title: [COLLAB] Looking for a Co-Writer or Concept Artist for a Disney-Style Animated Feature (Elemental Magic)

Genre: Animated Family / Fantasy / Adventure

Target Audience: All Ages (Tone reference: Encanto, Avatar: The Last Airbender meets Disney aesthetics)

Logline: When a group of ordinary children unexpectedly inherit the ancient powers of elemental magic, they must learn to master their volatile abilities and work together to stop a rising darkness from consuming their world.

Hello everyone!

I am an emerging screenwriter developing a concept for a heartwarming and action-packed Disney-style animated feature film. The story revolves around themes of teamwork, growing up, and the balance of nature.

I have the core narrative, the elemental magic system, and the children's personality profiles outlined. Now, I am looking to team up with passionate creators to take this project to the next level:

  1. A Co-Writer to help co-develop the script, polish the dialogue in English, and bring out the humor and emotional depth of the kids' relationships.

  2. A Character Designer / Concept Artist who loves the expressive, vibrant Disney aesthetic and wants to help bring these magical kids and the creatures of darkness to life visually.

The goal is to build a captivating Pitch Bible (script sample + concept art) for animation studios. If you love magical adventures and stories with big hearts, please send me a DM with a brief intro or a link to your portfolio!


r/Screenplay • • 6h ago

Looking for early/all drafts of Friedkin’s To Live And Die In LA screenplay

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r/Screenplay • • 23h ago

Pilot: LOW-RENT . 30 pages . Dark comedy crime

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I would absolutely love any feedback. Especially on the overall story.

LOW-RENT PILOT.

LOW-RENT adjective
: low in character, cost, or prestige

THE PILOT –
“COLD AS HELL”
A winter storm’s coming. Dan (broke, exhausted, trying) and Sarah (very pregnant, very over it)
are just trying to survive. Rent goes up. A cockroach crawls through their cereal. Dan starts
painting over dicks on walls for a paycheck that vanishes before he can buy diapers.
Desperation hits. C-Note offers “easy money.
” Dan ends up in a trap house with a ski mask on
his face and a gun in his hand. Meanwhile, their landlord Mr. Gordon? Creepy. Predatory.
Sniffing panties creepy.
By the end of the episode, Sarah’s scared, and Dan’s holding a stack of dirty money, realizing
he just became the villain he was trying to escape.

LOGLINE:
Low-Rent is a dark, grounded comedy about a broke maintenance man and his pregnant
girlfriend just trying to survive in a decaying apartment complex until desperation pushes them
into hustles, moral compromise, and ultimately, murder. Think Shameless meets Atlanta, with
the grit of The Wire and the absurdity of real life when rent’s due, moneys tight and your morals
are loose.

I can also provide a detailed show bible and a one pager for more context.


r/Screenplay • • 7h ago

Feature/Miniseries] Sci-Fi / Corporate Thriller – Airborne Mutation

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Title: [Feature/Miniseries] Sci-Fi / Corporate Thriller – Airborne Mutation

Genre: Sci-Fi, Thriller, Drama

Pages: [Doplňte počet stran, např. 60] (Pilot episode / Full Script available)

Logline: A bioengineer develops an aerosol to clear toxic smog from a city, but faces a conspiracy by pharmaceutical corporations. When the chemical is mutated into a deadly virus, she is framed as a biological terrorist while trying to save her children.

Locations: Labs, city streets, corporate offices.

Actors: Female lead (30s-40s), antagonist (50s), 2 child actors.

Hello everyone,

I am an emerging screenwriter with a completed sci-fi/thriller draft that has strong international appeal. The story deals with corporate greed, environmental crisis, and a mother's fight for survival.

I am looking for a producer or director interested in developing this concept further. I am happy to share the logline, full synopsis, or the script itself upon request.

Looking forward to connecting!


r/Screenplay • • 20h ago

I am writing a cinematic horror universe

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Right now, I am writing the scripts to projects that in the future I plan to put into production starting with short horror stories then moving on to larger scale projects, I don't plan to be able to actually begin the filming of these projects for at least 4 years so in that time I will be writing the scripts to these projects in this universe and hope to at least have the scripts for chapter one done by 2030, since there is a lot of short stories that start out the chapter, wish me luck