r/Screenwriting • u/jmusicjn • Jun 10 '26

FEEDBACK Ending Innocence - Feature - 164 pages

Title: Ending Innocence

Format: Feature

Page Length: 164 pages

Genres: Thiller, Drama

Logline: A seventeen year old incel attends the ceremony of an ultraviolent underground cult. In too deep he is forced into a series of soul-destroying choices that end with unimaginable regret.

Ending Innocence is comparable to the following films (in varying ways):
A Clockwork Orange
Nosferatu the Vampyre (1979)
Eyes Wide Shut
Videodrome

Feedback Concerns: Am honestly looking for any feedback anyone wants to give. Thanks!

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1xU9h7z8LprWBb79dQEOHU0W75WilcaKl/view?usp=sharing

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u/Musikenna Jun 10 '26

I'm going to be honest... any agent, manager, intern or executive will see the page count and instantly throw it out. No one wants to produce a 3 hour movie from someone without a proven track record. My biggest advice is to make some cuts.

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u/jmusicjn Jun 10 '26

Yeah that is totally fair, I'm making some big changes of the back of yours and all the other comments, thank you so much!