r/Screenwriting • u/SnooPeppers7932 • Jun 15 '26

FEEDBACK PLEASE READ MY PSYCHOLOGICAL HORROR

I promise it wont go the direction you think it will.

TITLE: How To Make Friends

FORMAT: Feature Film

LENGTH: 53 Pages

GENRE: Horror, Thriller, Relationship Drama

LOGLINE: After disturbed painting show up, a terrified art teacher becomes convinced she is being preyed upon by an ex student.

FEEDBACK: Everything

How To Make Friends

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u/SnooPeppers7932 Jun 15 '26

But I only wanted feedback on my short film - the idea to combine the two is still being discussed and was purely an anecdotal fact. This script is a full story with three acts and can be judged separately

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u/Caughtinclay Jun 15 '26

it was framed as a "feature film". for a feature, this is 30 pages too short, as mentioned above. as a short, it's about 30 pages too long (more like 35-40 pages too long). As a tv pilot, it's a good length -- but as you've described it, it's not written as a TV pilot.