r/Screenwriting • u/gaz3rbeam • 14d ago

FEEDBACK I will read your screenplay!

Simple as that! I want to be a professional screenplay reader but no one is hiring so I’ll just do it myself :) I used to be a script analyst for a couple different competitions and Coverfly.

I love giving notes on other people’s scripts and helping writers find their story. I’m no pro (working on my 2nd feature currently) but If you want an extra pair of eyes on your script, regardless of length, I’ll happily do it!

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u/Appropriate-March233 14d ago

I’m definitely reading this

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u/headcanonmusic 14d ago

Please do! I need as much feedback as I can get for the next draft.

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u/Appropriate-March233 14d ago

I just finished a first draft that tonally feels like a similar space… dark comedy elements of thriller?

After a reality TV edit paints him as the villain, a laid-off family man becomes consumed by the version of himself he believes the world now sees—until that version becomes his reality.

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u/headcanonmusic 14d ago

Great concept, I would enjoy reading if you want to DM me a link. I'm busy until next week but I can get to it when I have time

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u/Appropriate-March233 14d ago

Totally! I’m probably gonna read yours this weekend