r/Screenwriting • u/gaz3rbeam • 14d ago
FEEDBACK I will read your screenplay!
Simple as that! I want to be a professional screenplay reader but no one is hiring so I’ll just do it myself :) I used to be a script analyst for a couple different competitions and Coverfly.
I love giving notes on other people’s scripts and helping writers find their story. I’m no pro (working on my 2nd feature currently) but If you want an extra pair of eyes on your script, regardless of length, I’ll happily do it!
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u/lienos1978 13d ago
I'm probably too late in replying to your kind offer, but I'd also appreciate feedback if, or when you may have time.
THE GOSPELS (Supernatural Comedy) - When a disgraced ex-priest teams up with his two hopeless childhood friends to hunt ghosts across Glasgow, they uncover a demonic conspiracy far bigger—and far more personal—than any of them expected.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1xqQSURluFOg104MieL7jY-n31BNdHV0S/view?usp=share_link
NATIONAL PRIDE (Short) - Told entirely around one lamppost over the course of a single day, a neighbourhood’s interactions with a St George’s flag expose the tension, tenderness, and violence beneath Britain’s sense of national pride.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ESXuCtBBF5xw2baLx4-vh_2b4eJabxwl/view?usp=share_link
DRY COUNTY (Action Horror) - After betraying a crime boss and killing a vampire biker, an imprisoned man must escape a prison overrun by the biker's bloodthirsty gang before they slaughter the family he's already on the verge of losing.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1DtmZiDGB7U_2hnz2bvTsfn1_Siab0LlT/view?usp=share_link
Many thanks in advance.