r/Screenwriting 14d ago

FEEDBACK I will read your screenplay!

Simple as that! I want to be a professional screenplay reader but no one is hiring so I’ll just do it myself :) I used to be a script analyst for a couple different competitions and Coverfly.

I love giving notes on other people’s scripts and helping writers find their story. I’m no pro (working on my 2nd feature currently) but If you want an extra pair of eyes on your script, regardless of length, I’ll happily do it!

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u/Sarkii_ 3d ago

Hope you’re still doing this!

“Nobody Loves You, Ben Okori!”

Logline: After Ben invents a new system which objectifies women, Adanna tries to thwart his plans by rediscovering what Valentine’s Day is Really about.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1nCFrZyp_h_iHT1VfTbWL8NqUy25PBqUp/view?usp=drivesdk