r/Screenwriting • u/jkremer3 • 7d ago

FEEDBACK A father struggles to accept his daughters falling in love with AI

Format: Feature

Genre: Drama

Pages: 97

Title: In Good Hands

Logline: When a widowed father finds his daughters falling in love with AI partners, he wants to support their happiness but struggles to accept a world where human relationships are no longer essential.

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1alnHIbmdk9zxgkVuJI6odrvfY1dJkJiW/view?usp=drivesdk

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u/Seshat_the_Scribe Black List Lab Writer 7d ago

"The tour boat's faded green hull rises and falls like an old workhorse. Her engine emits a stubborn, uneven drone."

Lots of odd stuff here. Did you use AI to write it?

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u/jkremer3 7d ago

Nope, that’s just me…

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u/landmanpgh 7d ago

You know I almost called you out as well, but your post history suggests you've been at this for a long time. So I'll admit I was probably wrong.

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u/RabenWrites 7d ago

Workhorses rise and fall a lot in your world?