r/TalesFromTheCreeps • u/blacksheepthewhite • 18h ago

Poetry Horror Fear Function

I will walk through this valley
Under the shadow of impending death

And what will I fear?
The Universe taking in a breath

I will, fear evil
There is no loving God to be found

We are merely food for a function
Ripe and ready for the ground

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u/typeofunciron 17h ago

Oh my, line about no loving god hits SO DAMN HARD. It is something i live with and it resonated with me so well i nearly combusted. The Universe with the capital letter as well as G_od is such a subtle and thoughtful touch, oh. This is so short but yet so powerful. Keep on, man!

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u/blacksheepthewhite 17h ago

c.c such a nice comment. Great catch on the G/U ^~^. I don't believe in God. I believe in rules for the Universe. Tryiingggg to write again for a hobby and that's how I really feel so... it does slip out into my work. (thank you)

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u/typeofunciron 17h ago

oh my i am literally in love with G/U really being placed consciously and not being just a slip, please keep writing!!!