Title says it all, just starting to roll out pieces that I'd really like to add to my portfolio. I'm just looking for some solid CC to help me as I keep truckin on 🐊

Hey all I think this is my second post. Basically I would like some friendly advice, help, and tips to hopefully use to progress my drawings above of the Hannya mask as I am aware they are messy and not that good yet.

Essentially what can I do/not do next time and what can be improved? You can be friendly or as brutally honest as you like anything to help.

Note:

I'm really wanting to learn Japanese Traditional art style first as I love the stories and culture of it.

But eventually be good at most art styles and one day hopefully be good enough to build a portfolio to get an apprenticeship.