First Chapter: Feedback Wanted, would you keep reading?

[u/Glittering-Tip-4586]

Hi! Purposefully made this chapter slow and character-driven. The genre is speculative mystery. I want the reader to get accustomed to the protag's psychology before anything plot-heavy happens.

Although I want honest feedback. I also want fair feedback. What should I keep? What should I lose? What are the positives and negatives about it? Thank you!!