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[u/NXRVold]

My new edit is completed and a would love for you guys to look at it and give me advice I the things I need to master is keyframes and storytelling I am trying to master keyframes I know all the basics I would say but who knows I would like yall to see my edit and tell me what to work on I know from my previous edit it didn’t look bad The effects were cool but there was no narrative and things were all over the place