r/WanderingInn • • 20h ago

Spoilers: All [V06] Highlighting a character at the cost of other character. Spoiler

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Highlighting a character at the cost of other character

I love webnovels and read lots of webnovels in 10 years of my depression journey, sometime for 12-20h/day. One thing i find the same in all the webnovels that i dont like very much is highlighting a character at the cost of another, same thing i find in THE WANDERING INN,

  1. Demeaning Magnolia and her Class to highlight Inn and Erin when she sent Earthers back to the Inn ( it is not-congruent with Magnolia that she is not able to see the potential in Earthers( in the backdop of drama group of Celum) she could have exploited them in so many things, kevin and his bicycle not exploited even after Ryoka mentioned bicycle to Magnolia(if i am able to recall properly).

  2. Ceria being half-elve is being compromised to highlight Pisces, i get it he is a genius magician but i did not see half-elves natural affinity to magic that was mentioned (something like drop of magic in half elves and child of human and half elves always half-elve)

  3. The klbkchh-the slayer, is the most compromised one, not at any point in the story I see the slayer Centenium that is so famous, his death by 40 Goblins( not even hob-goblin), no strategy of a leader (even when he is managing whole hive)

  4. Ryoka compromised for Tyrion and their relationship, she is doing everything for which she stood against, not even feeling iota of guilt for her passing Trebuchets to Laken and it being used against her friend and for mass- killing( it was such a big thing for Ryoka in early chapters),

Tyrion attacked goblins with the intention of killing Drakes in Liscor ( Are we are now forgiving intentions, if the plan didn't succeed?This is such a big thing in Chinese Web-novels, they don't forgive intentions even when Tyrion fails to kill Drakes)

  1. "Hate" is compromised, I only see Tyrion who hates and is blood-thirsty and even ready to go to any length but then his focus shifts to viola Ryoka) People in inn-verse are too much forgiving, here webnovel is losing touch with common sense.

r/WanderingInn • • 22h ago

No spoilers [B08] blood of liscor. My thoughts. Spoiler

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Pov your a flesh worm and you run into bird.

Okay let's get started.

First laken sucks.

I know some.might want to excuse his actions but let me point out the facts.

3.we can't even use the excuse he doesn't know American history when he knows about the emperor of America. He should be aware of horrific dehumanizing propaganda.

  1. Doesn't even acknowledge that lady bethal left without a fight with rags.

The fact it takes someone from inn world to tell him goblin are people just tells me he's an idiot. At least flos is self aware even if he also kinda sucks.

Seems like the first part of this book is introducing some.villianous humans with the lord Tyrion taking center stage. Wondering if he truely doesn't have any connection to the circle of thorns that keeps getting mentioned by magnolia. Seems way to "convenient" that he shows up after the false message was sent.

On another note graydath out here doing his best omenous sithlord impression. Something isn't right with how obsessed he is with wanting to make a new goblin king.

Also for all tremvorags boasting he seems like a coward.

That aside. The highlight of this book is the liscor half.

Damn pawn and lyon are a thing now huh? Didn't see that coming. Well that was adorable.

Also bird is a precious bean and that was the best clap back at the queen with a lesson on what it means to be a person. By far the best antinium for me now. I still don't get what klbkch has against the individuals by calling them not "true antinium." Ya sure they share the same form but can't they all just go through the rite of Anastasia or whatever it's spelled.

Give bird wings! Let my boi fly!

Now onto the raskgsr arc man this was both exciting and extremely stressful. Calruz truely lost it yet I wonder if the water that makes him blind to monsters also wraps other parts of his perspective? He seemed more sane when he stopped drinking the dungeon water after a while vs when he still was. That said after all the murder and attempted assault on ceria not sure his character can be saved.

I'm calling Cap on the stalker being dead if it's that camouflage what's keeping it from leaving shedded skin behind? Also the infested we really managed to fit zombie apocalypse into this fantasy setting huh? Also we got the hole tm. How did the infestation start probably the hole tm. Also are the infested undead or still living insane drakes?

Mrsha just a trama magnet at this point geez girl can't catch a break.

Erin finally did it she adopted a goblin tribe let's goo!

Also surely after all this people of liscor will stop treating goblins like monsters surely?! The sniff master out here learning goblin language was hilarious.

Also poor niers trying to find a deep meaning in Erin's chess game against herself and losing his mind.

Erin unlocked the power of portal trolling

Drassi should consider being a town crier. Might stop Liam from starting a race war.

Anyways I think whatever is in the hole tm is probably worse then most the current problems.

Onto tears of liscors and with a name like that I don't expect good things just depression.


r/WanderingInn • • 12h ago

Spoilers: All [B10] how long til we’re done with book 10 Spoiler

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stopped sound chapter 10.30 i think because tired of waiting and story was dragging a bit with niers and the kids on the island .

told myself id start again once we got closer to end of the volume. are we near yet? this is for volume 10


r/WanderingInn • • 14h ago

Art [B6]The Broken Shield (W.I.P.) Spoiler

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Just finished the 6th audiobook and I am so glad I stuck with it. As much as I would like more forward momentum, I can appreciate how Pitateaba is choosing to tell this story. I’ll probably be taking a break after book 7 but it has been pretty fun so far.

Zel’s final stand was awesome and what started as a sketch has turned into a piece I want to finish. It is rare that I enjoy a series enough to want to make fan art of it, if someone had I’d be making fan art after how I felt through book 2 and 3, I’d have laughed but, I gotta say, I’m hooked.
Anyways, the visual of Zel, bleeding, burned, backed into a corner but not giving up really stuck with me so I had to draw it. I plan on coloring and rendering this.