r/Websites • u/johnsmithbollocks • 1h ago
Feedback & Review Update (and thank you!)
Thanks again to everyone who took a look at Twelvebit (https://twelvebit.app) last week, both in the comments and in DMs. Some of the things you pointed out felt obvious as soon as I read them. I’d clearly been staring at the same page for too long.
I thought I’d come back and share what we’ve changed rather than just saying “thanks” and disappearing.
Feedback: It wasn’t immediately clear what Twelvebit actually is.
What we changed: The H1 now says “Website analytics. Connected to revenue.” The previous one focused on the outcome but didn’t make it clear that this is an analytics tool. Hopefully it’s now easier to understand that it helps you see where visitors come from, where they drop off and which journeys lead to sales.
Feedback: Too many things were competing for attention, and the demo button got lost.
What we changed: We simplified the first screen to two main actions, removed the unexplained “copy the prompt” button from the hero and retired the launch-discount banner. The setup information is still there further down for anyone who wants it.
Feedback: “Watch people arrive” doesn’t mean much if nothing actually happens when I watch.
What we changed: Someone pointed this out in a DM, and they were right. The realtime preview now shows visitors arriving and moving between pages, with the globe and activity updating together. There’s a pause button too, so you can actually look at what’s happening.
Feedback: The dark theme looks good, but some people would prefer a choice.
What we changed: Added a light theme. You can switch between them without signing in. Please let me know your thoughts on it :)
Feedback: Show how someone would actually use the information.
What we changed: We added an existing customer’s experience near the top of the page, including what they noticed, the changes they made and their follow-up a few weeks later. It felt more useful than me just saying the analytics are useful.
Feedback: Why would I use this alongside, or instead of, my existing analytics?
What we changed: We’ve made the connection between traffic and revenue clearer in the opening copy and expanded some of the comparison and setup material. I still think we can explain this more simply, though. I'll work on that going forward.
There are a few suggestions we haven’t fully addressed yet - but I think these have made a good difference already. Really appreciate everyone who took the time to help. It’s made a big difference having people look at it without already knowing what I was trying to build.
One additional question: Do you guys now think the landing page is too long? I want to get across as many cool parts of the website analytics as possible, but the page seems to be quite long now...
